浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(三)含答案

学必求其心得，业必贵于专精写作提升练(三）读后续写1阅读下面短文,依照所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完满的故事.（2017·浙江衢州二中5月模拟)Itwasthelate1930s,andthingsweretough。MumhadahardtimeraisingusonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC.MydadhaddrownedinPittLake，fiveyearsago。Lookingback，IrealizewhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool。Everymorningshewouldtuckanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout。Whenwegothome，Mumwouldhave“Frenchtoast”readyforus.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosetimes.Rentwas25dollarsamonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeevictedrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary。Christmaswasapproaching，andwewereentitledtoatwenty—five-dollarChristmasfundfromsocialservices.Theinspectorcametoourhouse，andsearcheditfromtoptobottomtobesurewedidn’thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn'tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum。Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethe25dollarstopaybackrent，assuringusallofaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas。UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastree,shovelingsnow,anddoingoddjobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairof学必求其心得，业必贵于专精boots。Bootsthatweren'tpatched,bootswithnocardboardinthesoles。IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten—inchTopGenuinePierreParisandtheyhadapriceof23dollars.Well，thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtotheshoestore,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations。ItwasthenIrealizedatourhouse,wehadnolights，nodecorations,noranymoneyforChristmasgoodies。IknewthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas，andIfeltsad。注意：1。所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的要点词语；3。续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4。续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的要点词语。Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan。学必求其心得，业必贵于专精Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor.2(2017·浙江金华江南中学第二学期期中考试)Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden。Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney。Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket。Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestothetown.Butitwasraininghardthatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet。Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itwasdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage。Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow。Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontoget。upAtthattimehefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhis学必求其心得，业必贵于专精body.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly，withouttakingthebasketswithhim.Thenextafternoonthefarmerwassenttothepolicestation。Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked：“Aretheseyours？”“Yes,sthefarmeransweredtimidly（胆怯地)。“Haveyoukilledtheman?"“No,no，sir。”thefarmersaidinahurry。“Whendidyouseethedeadman？”“Aboutsevenlastevening。”“Didyouseewhoman？”“No,Sir”。Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked，“Haveyouseenityet?"“No，Sir.”Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeathimupandsendhimintoprison。Theofficerwantedtotrapthefarmerintotheconfession(供认)，butthefarmerdidn’tadmwasthemurderer.注意:1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2。应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的要点词语;3。续写部分分为二段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的要点词语。Paragraph1：Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain。学必求其心得，业必贵于专精Paragraph2：Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater，参照答案写作提升练(三)读后续写1Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan.Iwasfeelinga学必求其心得，业必贵于专精strangesenseofguilt。HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofbootswhilemymotherwashomeintears。Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents。Acrossthestreetfromthebusstopwasabiggrocerystore。Irealizedthat25dollarsIhadworkedsohardforwentalongwaytowardslights,decorationsandaturkey。Afterfinishingshopping,Iwenthome。Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes，Iknockedonthedoor.Icouldhardlywaittoseemymother'sface!WhenMumopenedthedoor,someofthegroceriesfellinsideontothefloor,andshejuststoodthere,dumbfounded。Holdingbackthetears，Isaid,“MerryChristmas！”ThatdayIgotenoughhugsandkissesfromMum.2Paragraph1：Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain。Thefarmerwasveryafraid。Hethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople，buthedidn’t.Hewasinnocent.Hemusttellpeoplethetruth，butnoonecouldhearhisvoice。Hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim。Paragraph2：Thefarmerwaslucky。Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow！Hesawthepolice学必求其心得，业必贵于专精officeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.Hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasi