读后续写专题野外遇险两篇学案-高考英语复习作文备考

冒险/遇险类1.野外迷路struggletodo2.regainone’scalmcameintooursightcatchsightof

losesightof

at

the

sight

of4.safeandsound5.hadnoalternativebuttodosth6.bones-chillingnight7.yelledwithallherstrength8.wave/flagyellowblouse9.pickupone’sconfidence10.satbythestream/leantagainstatree11.restone’sachingfeet12.yelledwithallherstrength2，构建可能的情节时间（天色渐晚）/过渡

1.The

sky

started

to

become.天空开始变得更加黑暗。

2.The

night.夜幕降临3.The

sun

was

.太阳落山了Immediately,anabsolutedarknesstheforest绝对的黑暗统治了整个森林

6.The

night

sky

was

夜空像最深的海洋一样黑暗

7.Darkness

me.黑暗包裹着我

2.

地点（森林）/

场景描写

/

烘托情绪

The

shadows

of

trunks

and

branches

moved

with

the

wind,

just

like

hundreds

of

tigers,

lions

which

opened

their

mouth

and

tried

to

kill

me.树干和树枝的影子随风而动，就像成百上千的老虎、狮子，它们张开嘴，试图杀死我。

I

heard

some

wolves

in

the

distance.我听到远处传来一些狼的吼声。

The

cold

wind

through

the

branches

and

I

couldn’t

help

but

.寒风吹过树枝，我不禁打了个寒颤。

3.

情绪

被“救”前：害怕

My

blood

ran

cold

while

the

sounds

were

getting

closer!我血脉贲张，而声音却越来越近！我被恐怖的气氛所笼罩。

,

my

heart

rapidly

and

my

started

to

sweat.

I

looked

around

,

only

to

see...我被恐怖所攫取，心脏急剧跳动，手心开始冒汗。

我拼命地向四周张望，只见......seeing/hearingsth,sbfeltagreatsenseeof+情绪wellingupinone’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.看到/听到sth,sb感到一种强烈的情绪涌上某人心头，并且涌边全身

Fear

and

hunger

me

soon,

which

sent

my

mind

.

I

thought

to

myself...恐惧和饥饿很快抓住了我，这让我的思绪飘忽不定。

我心想...

被“救”前：后悔

“How

silly

I

am!”

I

,

regretting

ignoring

Sb’s

warning,

“what

if

they

just

forgot

about

me?”"我真是太傻了！"

我心想，后悔无视Sb的警告，"如果他们只是忘记了我怎么办？"

“If

I

had

taken

his

advice,

I

wouldn’t

be

trapped

here,”

I

thought

to

myself,

regretful

tears.my

eyes."如果我听了他的建议，我就不会被困在这里了，"我心想，后悔的泪水蒙住了我的眼睛。“ifihaddonesth,iwouldn’tdosth”sbthought,withtearsinsb’seyes/"如果我做了......，我就不会做......"某人遗憾地想，眼泪在眼眶里打转。Janestood,startingtoherself.“howsillyiam....”简无望地站着，开始自责。"我是多么愚蠢啊...."

被“救”前：累、饿、冷

I

felt

exhausted

and

finally

(不知不觉睡着了）.我感到筋疲力尽，最后滑入梦乡（不知不觉睡着了）。

My

legsfelt

like

jelly

and

I

had

no

left.

I

was

!

我的腿像果冻一样，没有一点力气了。

我已经筋疲力尽了!

,

I

felt

tired

and

hungry

and

in

the

darkness.似乎过了很久，我觉得又累又饿，就躺在黑暗中。

,

I

lay

down

near

a

big

rock,

my

friends/family.我又累又饿，躺在一块大石头旁，想念我的朋友/家人。Feelingscaredandhopeless,Janesatbesideatreeandtomakeherselfwarm.简感到害怕和无望，坐在一棵树旁，用胳膊抱着肩膀，让自己感到温暖。被“救”后：高兴、如释重负、羞愧认错

Upon

seeing

them,

my

heart

was

brightened

and

the

smile

of

happiness

crossed

my

face.看到他们，我的心豁然开朗，脸上掠过幸福的微笑。

I

came

back

,

which

made

everyone

我平安无事地回来了，这让大家松了一口气。

There

was

Sb,

an

expression

of

.还有Sb，也露出了如释重负的表情。

about

what

I

had

done,

I

did

not

dare

to

look

up

to我对自己所做的事感到内疚，不敢抬头与他们对视。Tearsofjoyandreliefastheyfinallyheldeachothertightly当他们终于紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦和欣慰的泪水涌了出来。Sb’sfaceasmileassbsawstandingthere,.theyhuggedtightlywithtearstheircheeks.当Sb看到站在那里，安然无恙时，Sb的脸裂开了，露出了笑容。

4.

动作

被“救”前：不知所措/寻找出路+大声求救+停下休息、祈求被发现

There

I

was,

completely

what

to

do

next.我在那里，完全不知道接下来该怎么做。

I

decided

not

to

aimlessly

but

stayed

in

that

place,

my

team

to

come

to)

my

我决定不再漫无目的地走动，而是呆在那个地方，等待（我的团队来）我的救援。

I

and

decided

the

first

thing

I

had

to

do

was

to

find

a

,

a

safe

place

any

hungry

animals.我让自己冷静下来，决定首先要做的是找到一个避难所，一个远离任何饥饿动物的安全地方。

I

for

help

at

the

of

my

voice

but

my

cry

was

by

the

forest我用最大的声音呼喊/喊救命，但我的呼喊被森林吞没了。

I

for

help

at

the

loudest

of

my

voice

but

only

was

by

the

all

around

the

forest.我用最响亮的声音喊救命，但只被森林周围的回声所掩盖。

I

seated

myself

by

a

tree,

that

they

could

find

me

soon.我坐在一棵树旁，祈祷他们能尽快找到我。Sheyelledwithinadesperatetofreeherself.她用尽全身力气大喊，拼命想挣脱。

被“救”后：被救+和家人朋友拥抱+道歉

I

finally

got

back

to

my

group

with

the

help

of

rescuers.

Sb

were

there

waiting

for

me.在救援人员的帮助下，我终于回到了我的小组。

Sb在那里焦急地等待着我。

They

checked

if

I

was

injured

and

then

took

me

to

.他们检查了我是否受伤，然后把我带到队伍所在的地方。

seeing

me,

Sb.

immediately

to

me

and

hugged

me

tightly.看到我后，Sb.立即冲到我身边，紧紧地抱住我。

They

me

instead

of

scolding

me.他们安慰我，而不是责骂我。OnseeingJane,Tomimmediatelyrushedouttoher,aroundher.看到简，汤姆立即冲到她身边，用手臂抱住她。Luckily/Fortunately,itdidn’ttakesbdid...幸运的是，她不就就找到了一个山洞5.

升华

This

experience

taught

a

lesson

in

my

life,

through

which

I

knew

the

importance

of

...这次可怕的经历给我的人生上了宝贵的一课，通过它我知道了......的重要性。whatalessonfrosbtolearn!多么宝贵的经验教训！

While

this

had

been

a

experience,

it

is

one

that

I

will

never

forget.

虽然这是一次具有挑战性的经历，但我将永远不会忘记。

第一篇：One

Friday

afternoon,some

of

my

classmates

planned

to

take

a

hike

in

a

jungle（丛林）including

my

friends

Jake

and

Liam.They

asked

me

if

I

would

like

to

go

with

them.I

love

outdoor

activities,so

I

immediately

said

yes.

It

was

sunny

the

following

morning.I

was

in

a

very

good

mood.I

was

so

excited

about

hiking

since

it

was

the

first

time

that

I

had

hiked

with

them.I

ate

a

light

breakfast.After

that,I

hurriedly

ran

out

of

my

house

to

meet

them

in

the

school

playground.

The

jungle

where

we

were

going

was

far

from

our

school.It

took

about

three

hours

to

go

there

by

bus,but

it

wasn't

a

boring

journey

as

we

were

all

eager

to

hike.After

we

got

off

the

bus,we

found

a

local

guide

to

ensure

our

safety.The

guide,whose

name

is

Thomas,said

that

he

had

hiked

there

lots

of

times

and

that

he

was

familiar

with

the

route.When

we

arrived,Thomas

told

us

neverleavethegroup.He

warned

us

that

we

would

easily

get

lost

in

the

jungle

if

we

walked

alone.Then

we

began

to

hike.

There

were

various

plants

which

we

had

never

seen

before.All

of

us

were

amazed

at

the

beauty

of

the

scenery

and

the

sounds

of

the

creatures.Sadly,after

hiking

for

about

an

hour,I

found

that

my

watch

on

my

wrist

was

gone.I

realized

that

my

watch

had

fallen

off.It

was

a

gift

from

my

grandma,and

I

loved

it

very

much.Without

thinking,I

turned

back

and

tried

to

find

my

watch.Since

I

was

the

last

one

walking

in

the

group,nobody

noticed

it

when

Iwalkedaway.

I

wasn't

worried

about

getting

lost

because

I

thought

I

could

find

my

watch

easily.

However,when

I

finally

found

my

watch

and

tried

to

catch

up

with

my

friends:they

had

gone

far.I

immediately

realized

that

I

was

alone

and

lost.

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