专题16书面表达中考英语冲刺专题卷(解析)

专题16书面表达-中考英语冲刺专题卷(解析版)专题16书面表达-中考英语冲刺专题卷(解析版)专题16书面表达-中考英语冲刺专题卷(解析版)专题16书面表达一、看法看法类A（15分）近期，二胎政策引起广泛热议。请你以一名中国学生LiHua的身份，给ChinaDaily的编写写封简信，公布自己对二胎政策的看法。提示：原由：独子政策缺点多于优点。优点结果：推行二胎政策解决人口问题缺点一胎政策下出生的夫妇要支撑4大2小的大家庭。一胎政策过时，二胎政策必要。你的看法：解决目前和未来的问题。要求：词数为80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；中文不能够出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；文章层次清楚，结构完满，语句连结。DearEditor,Inordertosolvethepopulationproblem,ChinawiththelargestpopulationintheworlddecidedtouseOne-ChildPolicy30moreyearsago.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua1/13【参照范文】DearEditor,Inordertosolvethepopulationproblem,ChinawiththelargestpopulationintheworlddecidedtouseOne-ChildPolicy30moreyearsago.Butsinceitwascarriedout,peoplehavefoundmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.Thus,peoplethinkTwo-ChildPolicyshouldbeused.Ontheonehand,itcansolvetheproblemofChina’spopulation.Ontheotherhand,couplesborninthetimesofOne-ChildPolicywillsupportabigfamilywith4parentsand2children.Inmyopinion,One-ChildPolicyhasbeenoutofdateandTwo-ChildPolicyisnecessaryforitcansolvethepresentproblemandtheprobleminthefuture.Yours,LiHua【写作亮点】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容表达清楚，语句畅达，意思连结是一篇不错的文章。B（10分）在平常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象？请列举一些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。提示：speakloudly，cutinline(插队)，wastefood，unfriendly(冷漠的)，offernohelp...要求：1.所写内容应包括所供应的信息，可合适发挥；语句畅达，意思连结，书写工整；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；4.词数100左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)Inourdailylife,Iusuallyseesomebadbehavioraroundus.Forexample,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2/13____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ithinkifeveryonecanthinkmoreofothers,wewillhaveabetterlivingenvironment.【参照范文】Inourdailylife,Iusuallyseesomebadbehavioraroundus.Forexample,Ioftenhearpeoplespeakandlaughloudlyinpublic.Itistoonoisy.Somepeoplecutinlinewhileothersarewaiting.Itmakesmeunhappy.Andinourschooldininghall,Ioftenseestudentswastefood.Attimes,peopleseemunfriendlyandoffernohelpwhenothersareintrouble.Forme,myparentsarestrictwithme.Theyoftentellmetobehavewell.SoIneverdroplitterabout.AndIneverdrawonthedeskoronthewall.Iampolitetooldpeople.Ithinkifeveryonecanthinkmoreofothers,we’llhaveabetterliving学environment科网.【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言精练。开头介绍了自己身边有一些不良现象，接下来介绍自己的做法，最后说出自己的想法，每一个人要多为他人着想。此外，speakandlaughloudly,cutinline,wastefood,offernohelp,arestrictwith,ampoliteto等这些词组的运用也让文章添色很多。二、说明介绍类A（15分）假设你是中学生李华，你的美国朋友Eric想在下个月来中国旅游，时间一个星期，请你写一封邮件给他，介绍一处旅游景点，内容以下：景点名称及地址；特色或特色；咨询对方到达中国的详尽时间，可否需要接机，购票等。DearEric,3/13____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LookingforwardtoyourreplyandyourcomingtoChina!Regards,LiHua【参照范文】DearEric,GladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChinaforatripnextmonth.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyousoAsforwhereexactlyyoushouldgofortheweek’trip,sIrecommendChengdeSummerPalace,thelargestsurvivingroyalgardeninChina.It’slocatedHebeiinChengde,Province.TheemperorsinQingDynastyusedtospendtheirsummerstherehuntingwhileescapingtheheatinBeijing,thecapital.Thebuildings,gardens,lakesandtemples,whichhavethecharacteristicsofthebuildingsfoundinSouthChinaandTibet.It’tovisit,especiallyinsummer.Besides,pleasetellmewhenyou’llarriveinChinaexactuldy.youWolikemetomeetyouattheairportorbookticketsforyou?LookingforwardtoyourreplyandyourcomingtoChina.【写作亮点】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章添色很多.如:It’reallysaniceplacetovisit,especiallyinsummer.Besides,pleasetellmewhenyou’llarriveinChinaexactly.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandyour4/13comingtoChina.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以合适引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富饶条理。B（15分）上海迪斯尼乐园(ShanghaiDisneylandPark)于6月16日开始正式营业。近期，你打算和父亲母亲一起去上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。依照以下提示用英文写一篇关于此行的90词左右的短文。内容要点以下：1.地址位于上海市浦东新区（PudongNewArea），占地116公顷2.时间一整天3.票价377元人民币每人4.用餐中国餐馆就餐、听闻食品特别贵5.园内活动参观不同样主题馆、观看游行和烟火表演、M大街购物6.感觉注意：短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句畅达、意思连结；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；第6点须用2—3句话张开合理发挥；4.参照词汇：公顷hectare主题馆themeparks游行paradeShanghaiDisneylandParkwillbeopentothepubliconJune16th.Iplantovisititwithmyparentssoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参照范文】ShanghaiDisneylandParkwillbeopentothepubliconJune16th.Iplantovisititwithmyparentssoon.ItliesinPudongNewAreaandcoversanareaof116hectares.Wewanttospendawholedayinit.Thepriceoftheticketis377yuaneach.Atnoon,wewillhaveaquickmealinaChineserestaurant.Butitissaidthatthefoodthereisveryexpensive.Wecanvisitdifferentthemeparks,watchtheparadeandfireworksanddosomeshoppinginM5/13Street.WheneverIthinkofit,Ifeelexcited.Ihopethatdaywillcomeassoonaspossible.【名师谈论】这篇短文主要表达了作者打算和父亲母亲一起去上海迪斯尼乐园游玩。写作时需要增加详尽事例。短文要用一般现在时。注意主语谓语的一致性。写作时尽量使用较高级的词汇和句子的连结连结，以提高作文的品位。【写作亮点】文中使用了特别好的短语和句子，比方Wewanttospendawholedayinit；Ifeelexcited.Ihopethatdaywillcomeassoonaspossible.。并注意了句子开头的变化和句子之间的连结，等为文章添色很多。三、咨询建议类A（15分）假设你是Tim，在美国游学时期与住家孩子Simon、邻居孩子Daniel成为好友，并结伴表演京剧《大闹天宫》。几天前，因Simon讽刺Daniel，两人发生争吵。现在Simon想修复友谊，但不知如何办理，所以特地发来邮件追求你的帮助。请依照以下要点，给Simon回一封电子邮件。现状解析讽刺他人是错误的；很快乐Simon想改变现状；供应建议1.应该赶忙道歉；2.随邮件发送一个视频节目，建讲和Daniel一起看；1.节目名称为友谊(Friendship)；节目简介2.以孙悟空(MonkeyKing)为原形，让自己想起在美国时三人一起的欢喜岁月；节目最后，孙悟空做总结；阐述希望视频有帮助；永远做朋友。注意事项：邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句畅达，意思连结；孙悟空讲的话用2~3句张开合理想象，作合适发挥；词数在90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；邮件内容必定写在答题卡指定的地址上。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6/13________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参照范文】DearSimon,Thankyouforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Itiswrongtolaughatothers.I’mgladyou’reconsideringhanging.YoucshouldsaysorrytoDanielassoonaspossible.Isending’myouavideoprogramcalledFriendshipwiththeemail.You’dbetterwatchitwithDanwasbasedonMonkeyKing.ItremindedmeofourhappytimeinAmerica.Attheendoftheprogram,MonkeyKingsaidfriendshipplayedanimportantroleinourlife.Remember,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Ithinktheprogramishelpful.Ihopeyoucanbefriendsforever.Bestwishes!Yours,Tim【写作亮点】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章添色很多。如:ItremindedmeofourhappytimeinAmerica；Attheendoftheprogram,MonkeyKingsaidfriendshipplayedanimportantroleinourlife.。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以合适引用，让文章更出彩。B（10分）假设你叫李娜，在网上看到了以上三个网友的留言，你有方法帮助其中一个求助的人。请你写一封电子邮件回复他(她)，内容包括：你对这个网友所提及的事情的看法。就该现象提出最少三条解决问题的建议。对该网友提出你的希望。作文要求：7/13不能够照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。语句连结，词数80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear__________,I’mverygladthatIcangiveyouahand.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiNa【参照范文】1：DearJim,I’mverygladthatIcangiveyouahand.Yousayyouaretooshytomakemorefriendsinyournewclass.Pleasedon’tworryaboutit.Justtrytheseways.Alwaysremembertobekindtoyournewclassmates,whichcanshowthatyouareeasytogetalongwith.Youcanalsofindsomeonewholookseasygoingandtalkwithhim.Ihavetriedthatanditworked.Ifyouwanttohavemorefriends,whynotjoinsomeclubsinordertomeetmorepeoplewhohavethesameinterestasyoudo?Thenyoucanbefriendseasily.Ireallyhopemysuggestionscanbeusefulforyou.Yours,LiNa【参照范文】2：DearCathy,I’mverygladthatIcangiveyouahand.8/13Pleasedon’tworry.Yourtroubleisverycommonthesedays.Youcantrytheseways.Yourparentsthinkyouplaycomputergamestoomuch.Thefactisthatsometimesyouarelookingthroughsomethingusefuloncomputer.Whynottalkwithyourparentsandtellthemthetruth?Alwaysrememberyourparentsloveyou,anddon’tcomplainaboutYoucanit.alsotellthemyouwon’tuseitongforandtooltrytofindotherwaystosolveyourproblemsoflearning.Listeningtomusiconcomputerwithyourparentscanalsohelpalot.Ireallyhopemysuggestionscanbeusefulforyou.Yours,LiNa【参照范文】3：DearLiPing,I’mverygladthatIcangiveouyahand.Pleasedon’tworryaboutitymorean.Hereissomeadvicethatcanhelp.First,youcanlearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs,anditcanhelpyouremembermorewordsandenjoylearningit.Second,whynotasktheteacherforhelp?Teachersarealwayshelpful.Third,it’susefultotakenotesandgooverthemmoreoften.Fourth,studyingwithagroupisagoodwaytolearnEnglish,becauseyoucangethelpfromyourpartners.Ireallyhopemysuggestionscanbeusefulforyou.Yours,LiNa【写作亮点】作文吻合要求，层次清楚，合用性强，拥有很好的参照价值。文中就如何学好英语，分条目的列出。开头引出建议内容，结尾希望对李明有所帮助。在语言表达上正确无误，吻合邮件的格式。9/13四、叙事描述类A（10分）在一堂英语课上，老师组织全班同学张开相关＂个人爱好＂的谈论。假如以下是你所在小组的记录，请依照这个记录取英语向全班做一个报告。NameHobbyWuJunCollectingstampsJiaMeiTravelingWangPengListeningtotherockmusicI...提示：报告内容：小组每一个人的爱好及你对爱好的看法；很多于60词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussioninourgroup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.10/13【参照范文】Dearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussioninourgroup.WuJunlikescollectingstamps.JiaMeiisinterestedintravelingverymuch.WangPengisfondoflisteningtothemusic.AndIenjoyreadingbooksandswimming.Ithinkthesehobbiesaregoodforourhealthandlife.Theycanmakeushappy.Theycanalsohelpusrelaxafterdailyworkandstudy.Whenweareill,hobbiescanhelpusgetwellsoon.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.【名师谈论】这是一篇给资料作文,要求把一次关于个人爱好问题的谈论会做一个报告.本题所给资料比较简洁,所以需要自己依照要点组织语言,表达出资料中表现的看法.写作中注意将同学们的各自爱好介绍清楚，并说说自己的想法，不要遗漏要点。写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系亲密，吻合逻辑关系【写作亮点】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者依照所给内容要点，做了简洁简要的发言，层次特其他清楚。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。WangPengisfondoflisteningtothemusic.AndIenjoyreadingbooksandswimming等。B（10分）三年的初中生活，你对自己的表现必然有满意的方面和不满意的方面。假如你是林微，请参照以下提示，给你的学弟学妹们用英语写一篇毕业留言，希望对们有所帮助。提示内容提示词对自己满意的方面勤学好问，养成优异的学习习惯；workhard,agoodhabitof对自己不满意的方忙于学习，锻炼身体较少；bebusy,dolesssports面对学弟学妹的建议乐于助人，积极参加志愿者活动；begladto,volunteer或希望activities注意：1、参照提示合适发挥；2、文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名；3、词数80词左右（开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数）。11/13Dearboysandgirls,I’mLinWei.It’smyhonortosharewhatIhavegotandlostinthepastthreeyears.___