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OurbeautifulschoolOurbeautifulschool1HowtoWriteEnglishCompositionsHowtoWriteEnglishCompositi2一、认真审题,确定文章主旨二、列举提纲,打造文章骨架三、充实提纲,完善文章内容四、仔细检查,完美文章细节写作四步走一、认真审题,确定文章主旨写作四步走3

一、认真审题,确定文章主旨

在这一环节中,我们要通过对题目的仔细研读,确定好文章的体裁、时态、人称、主题等信息。常见的文章体裁有记叙文、书信、E-mail、日记、说明文等。(初中阶段我们通常使用一般现在时态进行作文。) 一、认真审题,确定文章主旨4二、列举提纲,打造文章骨架在完成审题工作之后,根据提示内容,列出提纲,打造整篇文章的骨架,在这一环节中,我们必须把作文的要点列举出来,包括你在作文中需要补充的重点短语等。二、列举提纲,打造文章骨架5三、充实提纲,完善文章内容文章骨架一定,接下来就要进行充实完善,使之血肉丰满。根据骨架,我们把词和词组充实为句子,把句子结合为段落,再整理成文章。这又要求我们把握几点:①句子要完整,意思须符合主旨。②恰当使用连接词,使文章通顺,过度自然。③处理好开头和结尾。为更好地达到这三点要求,在作文时要求学生在确保正确的前提下,能够正确使用关联词,并且文章句式尽可能多样化,。如简单句和复合句并用,陈述句和感叹句共存,插入语、省略句、习语、格言的适当运用都能使文章更完美,更具说服力.三、充实提纲,完善文章内容文章骨架一定,接下来就要6

四、仔细检查,完美文章细节

⑴是否有语法错误:主谓是否一致,句子的时态、语态,动词的用法,词语的搭配是否正确,比如consider后要跟动名词形式,happen不能使用被动语态,beableto与can不能同时使用,一个句子中不能同时出现because与so或者although与but等情况。⑵检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅。⑶是否有大小写、拼写和标点错误。⑷是否有重要信息遗漏。⑸开头和结尾是否处理完美。⑴是否有语法错误:主谓是否一致,句7Hetooktheringoutofanegg.Peoplecheeredforhim.whenassoonasafterbecausePeoplecheeredforhimassoonashetooktheringoutofaneggHetooktheringoutofanegg82009CCTVSpringFestivalGalasurpriseddidmagicshowsHedidmagicshowssowellthat

everyonewasreallysurprised.so…that…(春节联欢晚会)Hedidmagicshowswell.Everyonewassurprised.['ɡɑːlə]2009CCTVSpringFestivalGala9Canyoucorrectthemistakes?1.Webelievehappinessbelongstoour.2.Althoughhewastired,hewashappy.3.Studyhardlyisthebridgetosuccess.4.Therearemanypeoplelikepopmusic.---

Manypeoplelikepopmusic.5.Whateverhehappens,heneverloseconfident.---

Whateverhappenstohim,heneverlosesconfidence.6.It'simportantforustokeephealth.usbutStudyinghardhealthyCanyoucorrectthemistakes?1107.MyEnglishismoreandmorebetter.8.Wehavetodosomethingsavetheearth.9.TheaimoftheclubisimproveourEnglishspeakingskills.10.Hehasmanyhobbies,fromcollectstampstoswim.11.Thereisgoingtohaveaconcertthisevening.12.TheylikeplayinggamesandsingEnglishsongs.betterandbettertosavetheearthcollectingswimmingbesingingto7.MyEnglishismoreandmore11Practice

假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容,然后根据提示给Danny回一封电子邮件。DearDoctorFrank,Howareyou?IoftenfeelveryweakandIdon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtokeephealthy?DannyPractice

假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容,然后根据12不吸烟喝酒多锻炼自拟建议2吃健康食物自拟建议1Howtokeephealthy?不吸烟喝酒多锻炼自拟建议2吃健康食物自拟建议1Howto13Theoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingDearFrank,

I’msorrytohearthatyou’renotfeelingwell………..First:eathealthyfood,suchas…..stayawayfromjunkfoodSecond:domoresports,run,playballgamesThird:giveupbadhabits(drinkingandsmoking),Ithink:gotobedearlyandgetupearly.notstayuplate,stayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou'llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!Theoutlineoftheletteroutli14DearDanny,I'msorrytohearthatyou'renotfeelingwell.Asweknow,itisimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowhowtomakeit?I'mhappytosharemyideaswithyouhere.First,youshouldeathealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesandsoon,don'tforgettostayawayfromjunkfood.Second,it'snecessaryforyoutodomoresports.You

canruneverymorningandplayballgamesafterschool.Third,youshouldgiveupunhealthylivinghabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking.Ithinkyou'dbettergotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.What'smore,you'resupposedtostayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou‘llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!Frank

DearDanny,15

Whatshouldwedotosavetheearth?

Whatshouldwedotosavethe16英语作文-课件17planttreesplanttrees18turnofftheshowersavewaterturnofftheshowersavewater19takeyourownbagswhenshoppingtakeyourownbagswhenshoppi20don’tusepapernapkins(餐巾)don’tusepapernapkins(餐巾)21stopridingincarsstopridinginc22recycle(回收)books,bottlesandpaperrecycle(回收)books,bottlesand23英语作文-课件24Theoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingIt’sourdutyto……Theenvironmentisbecoming……….First:

plantmoretreesandgrass,protectthewildanimalsSecond:

savewater,turnofftheshowerNext:

takeourownbagswhenshopping.recyclepaper、bottlesandbooks,stopridingincarsIfeveryonecan…….,theworldwillbe…..Atlast:

stopusingpapernapkinsTheoutlineoftheletteroutli25

It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse,sowemustdosomethingtosaveit.First,Ithinkweshouldplantmoretreesandgrass,itishelpfultoprotectthewildanimals.weallknow,animalsareourfriendssowemuststoppeoplehurtingthem.Second,it’sourdutytosavewater,whilewearewashingourhair,weshouldturnofftheshower.Next,makesurewetake

ourownbagswhenshopping.Recyclingpaper、bottlesandbooksisalsoagoodwaytosavetheearth.Oh,yes,thetrafficisbusierandbusier,soweshouldstopridingincarsifpossible,youshouldwalkonfoot.Atlast,Iwanttotellyouifyou’reusedtousingnapkins,pleasestopitatonce!IfeveryonecandoasIsay,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful,let’stakeaction.It’sourdutytoprotect26英语作文-课件27OurbeautifulschoolOurbeautifulschool28HowtoWriteEnglishCompositionsHowtoWriteEnglishCompositi29一、认真审题,确定文章主旨二、列举提纲,打造文章骨架三、充实提纲,完善文章内容四、仔细检查,完美文章细节写作四步走一、认真审题,确定文章主旨写作四步走30

一、认真审题,确定文章主旨

在这一环节中,我们要通过对题目的仔细研读,确定好文章的体裁、时态、人称、主题等信息。常见的文章体裁有记叙文、书信、E-mail、日记、说明文等。(初中阶段我们通常使用一般现在时态进行作文。) 一、认真审题,确定文章主旨31二、列举提纲,打造文章骨架在完成审题工作之后,根据提示内容,列出提纲,打造整篇文章的骨架,在这一环节中,我们必须把作文的要点列举出来,包括你在作文中需要补充的重点短语等。二、列举提纲,打造文章骨架32三、充实提纲,完善文章内容文章骨架一定,接下来就要进行充实完善,使之血肉丰满。根据骨架,我们把词和词组充实为句子,把句子结合为段落,再整理成文章。这又要求我们把握几点:①句子要完整,意思须符合主旨。②恰当使用连接词,使文章通顺,过度自然。③处理好开头和结尾。为更好地达到这三点要求,在作文时要求学生在确保正确的前提下,能够正确使用关联词,并且文章句式尽可能多样化,。如简单句和复合句并用,陈述句和感叹句共存,插入语、省略句、习语、格言的适当运用都能使文章更完美,更具说服力.三、充实提纲,完善文章内容文章骨架一定,接下来就要33

四、仔细检查,完美文章细节

⑴是否有语法错误:主谓是否一致,句子的时态、语态,动词的用法,词语的搭配是否正确,比如consider后要跟动名词形式,happen不能使用被动语态,beableto与can不能同时使用,一个句子中不能同时出现because与so或者although与but等情况。⑵检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅。⑶是否有大小写、拼写和标点错误。⑷是否有重要信息遗漏。⑸开头和结尾是否处理完美。⑴是否有语法错误:主谓是否一致,句34Hetooktheringoutofanegg.Peoplecheeredforhim.whenassoonasafterbecausePeoplecheeredforhimassoonashetooktheringoutofaneggHetooktheringoutofanegg352009CCTVSpringFestivalGalasurpriseddidmagicshowsHedidmagicshowssowellthat

everyonewasreallysurprised.so…that…(春节联欢晚会)Hedidmagicshowswell.Everyonewassurprised.['ɡɑːlə]2009CCTVSpringFestivalGala36Canyoucorrectthemistakes?1.Webelievehappinessbelongstoour.2.Althoughhewastired,hewashappy.3.Studyhardlyisthebridgetosuccess.4.Therearemanypeoplelikepopmusic.---

Manypeoplelikepopmusic.5.Whateverhehappens,heneverloseconfident.---

Whateverhappenstohim,heneverlosesconfidence.6.It'simportantforustokeephealth.usbutStudyinghardhealthyCanyoucorrectthemistakes?1377.MyEnglishismoreandmorebetter.8.Wehavetodosomethingsavetheearth.9.TheaimoftheclubisimproveourEnglishspeakingskills.10.Hehasmanyhobbies,fromcollectstampstoswim.11.Thereisgoingtohaveaconcertthisevening.12.TheylikeplayinggamesandsingEnglishsongs.betterandbettertosavetheearthcollectingswimmingbesingingto7.MyEnglishismoreandmore38Practice

假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容,然后根据提示给Danny回一封电子邮件。DearDoctorFrank,Howareyou?IoftenfeelveryweakandIdon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtokeephealthy?DannyPractice

假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容,然后根据39不吸烟喝酒多锻炼自拟建议2吃健康食物自拟建议1Howtokeephealthy?不吸烟喝酒多锻炼自拟建议2吃健康食物自拟建议1Howto40Theoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingDearFrank,

I’msorrytohearthatyou’renotfeelingwell………..First:eathealthyfood,suchas…..stayawayfromjunkfoodSecond:domoresports,run,playballgamesThird:giveupbadhabits(drinkingandsmoking),Ithink:gotobedearlyandgetupearly.notstayuplate,stayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou'llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!Theoutlineoftheletteroutli41DearDanny,I'msorrytohearthatyou'renotfeelingwell.Asweknow,itisimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowhowtomakeit?I'mhappytosharemyideaswithyouhere.First,youshouldeathealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesandsoon,don'tforgettostayawayfromjunkfood.Second,it'snecessaryforyoutodomoresports.You

canruneverymorningandplayballgamesafterschool.Third,youshouldgiveupunhealthylivinghabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking.Ithinkyou'dbettergotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.What'smore,you'resupposedtostayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou‘llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!Frank

DearDanny,42

Whatshouldwedotosavetheearth?

Whatshouldwedotosavethe43英语作文-课件44planttreesplanttrees45turnofftheshowersavewaterturnofftheshowersavewater46takeyourownbagswhenshoppingtakeyourownbagswhenshoppi47don’tusepapernapkins(餐巾)don’tusepapernapkins(餐巾)48stopridingincarsstopridinginc49recycle(回收)books,bottlesandpaperrecycle(回收)books,bottlesand50英语作文-课件51Theoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingIt’sourdutyto……Theenvironmentisbecoming……….First:

plantmoretreesan

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