过考法2 图画及图表式-写作训练

1、PAGE4专题6书面表达过考法2图画及图表式Writing1体裁：记叙文类型：图画作文主题：图画凿壁偷光建议用时：25分钟2022福建卷请阅读右面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。内容要求：1.描述画面；2.概述其含义；3.谈谈个人感想。注意：1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、行文连贯；3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：凿,钻boreInthepicture,_Writing2主题：获得知识途径调查柱状图体裁：说明文类型：图表作文建议用时：25分钟名师原创最近,某中学对该校学生获得知识的途径进行了一次调查,结果如下：请你根据图表信息用英语写

2、一篇调查报告。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。_参考答案Writing1【写作思路】本书面表达要求考生结合图画写一篇有关成语凿壁偷光的短文。首先,图画描述部分必须简要。然后结合图画讲述成语背后的故事,这部分的难点是要总结出成语的寓意。最后是表述个人观点,主要是成语给我们的启迪。【范文赏读】Inthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.Aweakrayoflightcameinthroughasmal

3、lholeinthewallandhewasabsorbedinhisreading.Thisisawell-knownstoryfromanancientChineseidiom.Theboy,beingpoor,couldntaffordevenacandle,soheboredaholeinthewalltosteallightfromhisneighborshousetoreadatnight.Themoralorthestoryis:sparenoefforttoacquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasilynomatterhowdiffic

4、ultthesituationmaybe.Ofcourse,thingsaretotallydifferenttoday.Itisnotthestoryitselfbutwhatisreflectedinthestorythatcounts.Hardworkpaysoff.Weshouldtakepainstoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandgetpreparedforthefuture.文章分三部分,条理清晰,且各部分连贯自然,一气呵成。此外本文使用了较多高级词汇和复杂句型结构。如：apileof,beabsorbedin,sparenoeffort,pa

5、yoff等。Theboy,beingpoor,couldntaffordevenacandle,soheboredaholeinthewalltosteaklightfromhisneighborshousetoreadatnight中使用了现在分词短语beingpoor充当原因状语,tosteallightfromhisneighborshouse充当目的状语。sparenoefforttoacquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasilynomatterhowdifficultthesituationmaybe中使用nomatterhow引导的让步状语

6、从句。Itisnotthestoryitselfbutwhatisreflectedinthestorythatcounts使用了强调句型。Writing2【范文赏读】Itcanbeseenfromthechartthataverynoticeablenumberofstudents,consistingof54%surveyed,acquireknowledgefromteachersinclass,whileonly17%areaccustomedtostudyingautonomouslyandtherest29%arelearningknowledgebyothermeans.Ther

7、earemanyfactorsaboutthephenomenon.Firstofallaccordingtothetraditionalopinion,teachersdutytoteachstudentswhattolearnatschool.Besides,itistypicalofChineseteenagerstofollowteachersinstruction,whichcanhelpthemreducethechancetomakemistakes.Inaddition,studentsareburdenedwithtoomuchschoolwork,leavingthemto

8、olimitedtimetothinkindependently.Frommypointofview,thislearningmethodwillhavesomenegativeeffectsonstudents.Inthelongrun,theywillbelessmotivatedandefficient.Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,criticalthinkingandautonomousstudyareessentialqualitiesforstudents.Sobothteachersandstudentsmustjoinhandstochangethesituation.Variousreasonscanaccountforthephenomenon./