高中英语记叙文的读后续写公开课课件

1、Continuation Writing of Narration记叙文的读后续写 Continuation Writing of NarratContinuation Writing of Narration记叙文的读后续写 Continuation Writing of Narratbeginningdevelopmentclimax 高潮1. What five elements are there in a naration ? Continuation Writing of NarationWarming-up5W2. What does a wonderful story incl

2、ude? endingbeginningdevelopmentclimax 高潮1Learning TipsTip 1: Your Chinese learning can help your English learning.学科能力迁移跨学科融合Learning TipsTip 1: Your ChineWhats the style of the passage?Narration (记叙文)B. Exposition (说明文)C. Argumentation (议论文) whowhen wherewhathowwhy1. Read for main idea-5w questions

3、Step 1. Analyse the former part of the story 解读前文Whats the style of the passagAnalyse the former part of the story解读前文Read for main idea-5w questions who when where what Why 1. Arthur helped a young man to carry a suitcase.2. A bank robbery happened. 3. Arthur thought the young woman mistook him as

4、the bank thief and started to run.1. The young man couldnt get the car moving. 2. A bank robbery just happened and he was carrying a suitcase.Arthur, a young manOne day when Arthur was on the way to work. Park Avenue near the First National BankAnalyse the former part of theMain idea One day, at Par

5、k Avenue, Arthur helped a young man carry a _ when he was on the way to work. Suddenly, he heard the sound of an alarm and found a _ happened in the bank. When a young woman looked at his suitcase, he thought he might be _ for the bank thief suitcaserobberymistakenMain idea One day, at ParkPark Aven

6、uethe young mansuitcasesin the back seatloud noise of an alarmthe bankrobberythe shoutspeoplethe bank thiefWhenWhereWhoWhatWhyHow Step1.2. Classify the 10 underlined words and phrases.分类关键词Park AvenueWhenStep1.2. ClassiStep 2. Logical Plotting with the given key words 情节推理和关键词协同Paragraph 1: As he wa

7、s running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Tip1: Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first because some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.Tip2: Make use of the key words in the gi

8、ven sentences to infer more information.Step 2. Logical Plotting with Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “stop, stop!” Arthurthe young manthe taxi driverpurposedialoguefeelingsdestinationPara2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and ArthurArthurthe pol

9、icemanthe real robberdialogueresponsetruthPara1: As he was running, Arth What kind of ending would you prefer for this story? A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. Tip3: Sometimes, the general key word can guide us to imagine reasonably.surprising interesting What

10、kind of ending would yfeelings:actions:surroundings:transitional words:Task: Group work for the ending of the story feelings:actions:surroundings:Step 3. Vivid WritingWriting Criteria(评价标准):1. Your story should be well connected to the given passage and the beginnings of the two paragraphs.2. Your s

11、tory should be well organized with at least 5 of the 10 given underlined words. Do remember to underline the key words used in your writing. 3.Your writing should be rich in vocabulary, grammar items and sentence patterns.4. Your story should be coherent(连贯)，logical and reasonable.连贯性逻辑性合理性丰富性融合性准确性

12、Step 3. Vivid WritingWriting C0900018765432156004987654321039876543210987654321021987654321098765432100HoursMinutesSecondsPolishing TimeTask: Group creation work for the ending of the story 090001876543215600498765432103Show Time Appreciate your classmates articles and learn from each other. Show Ti

13、me Appreciate yourParagraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it an

14、d sat in the back seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.add some detailsUse differ

15、ent structures Proper linking wordsLanguage appreciationParagraph 1:add some detailsUs The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur ran into it, shouting, “There is a bank robbery and I know who the bank thief is.” On hearing Arthurs story, the policeman decided to head for the bank to

16、 investigate the case. However, Just at that moment, the young man came to the police station in a hurry. Out of breath, he told the whole story. As a matter of fact, he was not the bank thief and what in the suitcase were only some clothes. How embarrassed Arthur was when he learned the truth!add some detailsProper linking wordsUse different structures The taxi stopped in fron How to complete a narrative articleStep one: Analyse the given passage.(who; when; where; what; why; how)Step two: logical plotting(the plot, the underlined words, the