读后续写系列（二）环境素材 结尾升华 讲义-高三英语写作专项突破

1、读后续写一一环境描写素材+主旨升华读后续写一一环境描写素材第一组太阳、月亮、星星、天空1. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.公园里充满了春天的清新和美丽,阳光灿烂,鸟儿在歌唱。2. The day was dawning from a patch of watery light in the east.在东方一片淡淡的天色中黎明到来了。3. The lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and lo

2、oked wonderful在夕阳映照下,这些湖像玻璃一样闪闪发光。4. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.我沐浴在阳光下,琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的每寸肌肤。5. That night we set up our tent in park. The moon was held up above the sky, shining her smooth and charming moonlight. Twinkling s

3、tars were blinking, and fragrant breeze gently stroked my head, as if comforting all the tiredness along the trip.那天晚上我们在公园里搭起了帐篷。月亮高高地挂在天空上,发出柔和迷人的月光。耀眼的星星在闪烁,清香的微风轻抚着我的头,仿佛在安慰旅途中所有的疲劳。6. At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter. It was so quiet. There was almost no wind only

4、the flames of our fire for company. As I lay beneath the stars I thought about how far we had already travelled.午夜时分,天空变得更加干净,星星也变得更加明亮。很安静,几乎没有风只有我们火焰的陪伴。我躺在星空下,想着我们已经走了多远。第二组风、雨、雪、烟、雾、云等1. A cold breeze blew through her soft hair.一阵冷风吹过她柔软的头发。2. Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。3. The cl

5、ouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky.云彩扩散开来,几乎遮住了整个天空。4. The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, sits on my shoulders. With a vague feeling of uneasiness I move to the window, cloud has piled on cloud, rea

6、ring against blue sky.整日闷热的空气变得格外沉重,它笼罩着树木,逼得花朵垂向地面,也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。我怀着隐隐约约的烦躁不安,信步走到窗前,云层重重叠叠,高耸在蓝天之上。5. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers loft mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination/power.我望向车窗外,蜿艇的河流,高耸的山脉,阳光明媚的海滩和深深的山谷,让我完全沉浸在它们的魅力之中。6. On a n

7、earby hill, he could see smoke waving lowly skywards from the chimney of his house.在附近的一座山上,他可以看到烟从他房子的烟囱里慢慢地飘向天空。读后续写-主旨升华助人为乐1. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时候一个小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的变化。2. Sometimes small gesture of care will possibly melt peoples lo

8、neliness有时候一个表达关爱的小小举动也可能融化人们内心的孤单。3. Smiles spread on their faces while the people present burst out thunderous applause微笑在他们的脸上绽开,在场的人发出雷鸣般的掌声4. Helping others to realize their dreams gave me more pleasure帮助别人实现他们的梦想让我感觉更快乐。5. Then he drove the car away without even sharing his name and have not s

9、een him again.之后他把车开走了,甚至没有说出他的名字,我再也没有见过他。6. This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I always give others a helping hand possible, even so so many years later这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。即使多年以后,我总是尽可能地帮助别人。亲情、友情、师生情1. She felt warmth in the cold day and believed there was kindness in every corner在寒冷的天气里感

10、到了温暖,相信每个角落都有善意。2. Without friends, the world would become wilderness.没有朋友,世界变成一片荒芜。3. Health is more than just your physical well-being. You need to have emotional needs met and that means maintaining family and friend relations hips.健康不仅仅是身体健康。你需要满足情感需求，这意味着维系亲情和友情。4. Hes looking for love and hes

11、looking for family; hes looking to be accepted and hes looking forward to being embraced by his father他一直在寻找爱,寻找家庭;他渴望被接受,他期待能得到父亲的拥抱。5. You take your friends for granted, you may not have friends for very long如果你把朋友视为理所当然,那你也许不会有长久的友情6. I was fortunate in having good teacher. 我很幸运,有位好老师。7. After th

12、at, our relationship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them.从那以后,我们的关系变得更亲密,我对他们更像是朋友而不是老师。励志1. The world makes way for the dreamer.世界总会给有梦想的人开路2. Each man is the architect of his own fate.每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。3. Life is full of smiles and tears.生命是充满欢笑和泪水的。4. He knew no such wor

13、d as failure.他不知道有失败这样的字眼。5. He knew if he had little more patience he would have succeeded earlier.他知道如果他再耐心一点,他早就成功了。6. He was delighted that it helped him realize one requires more patience in any task being accomplished他很高兴,这帮助他认识到一个人在完成任何任务时都需要更多的耐心。7. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not come true in one or two days, but it will someday.只要你有梦想,就去追求,不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现,但总有一天会实现的。人生哲理1. It is never too late to learn.活到老,学到老。2. Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。3. From small beginnings come great things.伟大