高中英语写作课件

1、英语书面表达English Composition WritingWhat makes a good essay?The essayWhich composition feels more attractive, why?Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?1.The character of this gala is that it relates peoples lives.2.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with

2、 ordinary peoples lives.1.Young people dont want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration. 2.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV._第四局部：书面表达总分值25分 假设你是卜曼宜，你购置了一部某外国公司生产的 ，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据以下要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：问题

3、： 不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。3. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。注意：1. 词数为100左右；2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好不计入你所写词数；4. 已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。 When I bought it home, I found there were several problems about the quality of the mobile phone. There is no ring in the new mobile phone, besides, it can no

4、t be used to send short messages. When I want back to the local company, the manager told me this product has sold out and that I wasnt able to change it. Whats worse, this style mobile phone is a new product, there is no spare part and cant to be repaired. These problems worries me most. I hope you

5、r company would change it for me as soon as possible. 【分析】根本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了些简单连接手法；内容较连贯；准确性不够。 中国式英语语态错误动词用法错误单词误用15第四局部：书面表达总分值25分 假设你是卜曼宜，你购置了一部某外国公司生产的 ，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据以下要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：问题： 不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。注意：1. 词数为100左右；2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为

6、你写好不计入你所写词数；4. 已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。 However, some problems are presented with this mobile phone. In the first place, when there are phone calls, the mobile phone just cant ring. In addition, short messages can never be sent. when I came back to the mall for exchange, I was disappointed to be told

7、that this model had been sold out. Worse still, it is a new model, thus no spare part is available at the moment. Nowhere can I have this phone repaired. Maybe there are some alternatives to handle this case, but I hope it can be dealt with and solved as soon as possible. In brief, my personal viewp

8、oint is that you replace this mobile phone. Im looking forward to your reply.A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2.Concluding paragraphIntroduction (topic)Body (supporti

9、ng ideas)ConclusionTo many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.general statementtopic statementTopic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement Topic statementSupporting Paragraphs(Body Paragraphs Firstly, .Secondly, .Moreover

10、, .Finally, . . .However, .In addition, Furthermore, .ConclusionPersonally, in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that . In summary, it is wiser . The paragraphWhat makes a good paragraph?A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and s

11、upporting sentences.There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at alltopic sentenceWherever you go in o

12、ur school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Topic sentence:_just like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our

13、 school isjust like a garden. Our school isA good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the

14、 world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2021 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, 正确使用有关连接词 时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,sinc

15、e then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that递进关系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand, 条件关

16、系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表 列 举：for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows表 总 结：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been statedA good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.汉语意思普通用

17、词亮点词汇不同的越来越面临重视很多讨论关注发生意识到differentmore and more faceemphasizemanydiscussionattentionhappenrealizevarious , vary fromgrowing, increasingconfront attach importance to vast, quite a few, an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of debate, controversyfocusoccurbe aware of 汉语意思普通词汇亮点词汇认为重要的支持不同意喜欢

18、好的坏的thinkbelieve, hold, argue, maitain, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally ackowledged that, as far as I am concernedimportantessential, vital, significantsupportbe in favor of, approve of disagreedisapprove of likeprefer, feel inclined to , be keen on, be fond of , appe

19、al to goodbenefical, positive, favorable, perfect,baddreadful,unfavorable, poor, adverse丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感慨句强调句e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible. e.g. Only in this

20、way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句省略句with短语 e.g. In my

21、opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we

22、knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.各种状语从句 非谓语动词 e.g. Hearing the news, they got excited. Having been told many times, he still repeated the mistake.1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so ma

23、ny things.使用名词性从句2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇We

24、ak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

25、( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says. no matter what状语从句 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. 祈使句+andFollowed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress

26、.9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent

27、abroad.We all think highly of him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect. Kate, a new student from a northern province, s

28、peaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the sa

29、me time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good parag

30、raph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.第四局部：书面表达总分值25分 假设你是卜曼宜，你购置了一部某外国公司生产的 ，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据以下要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：问题： 不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。注意：1. 词数为100左右；2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part3. 电子邮件

31、的开头和结尾已为你写好不计入你所写词数；4. 已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。 However, some problems are presented with this mobile phone. In the first place, when there are phone calls, the mobile phone just cant ring. In addition, short messages can never be sent. when I came back to the mall for exchange, I was disappointed to be told that this model had been sold out. Worse still, it is a new model, thus no spare part is available at the moment. Nowhere can I have