托福写作备考结构规划之中间段落详解

1、第 PAGE9 页 共 NUMPAGES9 页托福写作备考构造规划之中间段落详解托福写作备考构造规划之中间段落详解中间段落的文章构造通常如下：Transitional words + topic sentence + development。假如考生在平时能纯熟运用这样的一个构造来展开作文，那么考场上就会凭借这份思维定势来帮助自己抓住每一分。中间三个段落都可以套用这种形式。(1)Transitional words主要有以下三种，即表顺序：firstly, secondly, finally (last but not least表并列：besides, in addition;表比照：in

2、contrast, in parison。这些衔接词会让文章看起来脉络明晰，组织严密，也就做到了评分标准中的“well-organized”一条。(2)主题句，顾名思义，向考官展示的是考生作文的主要意旨所以它在中间段落中的作用是至关重要的。通常主题句应该注意一下几点：1.主题句必须是陈述句。有的考生想在写作中创新，于是采用反问句或者其他看似多样化的题目，然而这种多样性带来的后果是给考官观点不明确的印象，很自然地会影响到分数。2.必须说明观点。假如考生把一句无关痛痒的话放在主题句的位置上，很显然无法说明自身观点。比方像“今天是晴天”这样的话没有说明观点;然而“今天是个好天气”就包含一种感情色彩在

3、里面，给人一种立场明确的感觉。考生应该切记：没有反驳余地的就不可以作为主题句。3.态度必须坚决。但是不能极端。4.每段必须有主题句。理论上讲没有主题句是可以的，但是考场上不可以，没有主题就会浪费考官的时间去帮你总结主题，然而繁忙的考官是不会那么仁慈地去分析p 你的题目来抓取你的观点的。(3)至于中间段落的展开(development)那么需要大家学习积累一些常用的段落展开方法，比方举例法、比拟法、因果法等。托福写作高分总分值范文点评和思路解析：偏好手工制作还是机器制造?托福写作难点话题一览Items made by hand or items made by machine, which do

4、 you prefer?Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific exles to explain your choice.写作思路展开构造分析p 这道题还是比拟详细的。不过选择比拟自由，无论选哪一种都行，只要列出几个好的理由。(注意，假如说家具的话也有很多种，根据不同的种类，也可以有不同的偏好) 手工：可

5、以按照特定要求制作，有特色，但缺点是本钱往往会比拟高。机械：一般批量消费，所以相对缺乏特色，但同时本钱较低，更容易获得。本话题高分范文赏析There are a wide variety of products, such as clothes or furniture, which can be made either by hand or by machine. Both of these methods of manufacturing products have their advantages, and both hold an important place in society.

6、 To decide which is best, one should pare the advantages of each method. There are many advantages of making products with the aid of machines. First, machine-made products tend to be cheaper than their handcrafted counterparts. As machines are very steady and do the exact same thing every time they

7、 recreate a product, these type of products tend to have consistent quality. Frequently, handmade products have extremes in their product quality; it can either be extremely good or extremely poor. Finally, machine-made products have the advantage of being able to use some finishes and materials tha

8、t cannot be used when creating something by hand. These include some types of steel, laminates, and enamel finishes. There are also many advantages of buying handcrafted products. When people purchase handcrafted products, they are supporting the arts and crafts munities. Buying these types of produ

9、cts keeps many people employed, as it takes much more time to create an object by hand. Handcrafted objects tend to have much more diversity, as it is almost impossible to create an exact duplicate of an object if you are making it by hand. Overall, I think that there are advantages of using both ma

10、chine-made products and hand-made products. I think that if one can afford to buy high quality handmade clothing and furniture, that would be the best situation. These types of products tend to last much longer than their machine-made counterparts, and one can be satisfied knowing that they are supp

11、orting an artist. However, if one cannot afford to buy high quality handmade products, it is probably better to buy things that are machine-made. Machine-made products tend to be of higher quality than poorly made handcrafted products.托福写作高分总分值范文点评和思路解析：参加团队做leader还是member?托福写作难点话题一览Is it better to

12、be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and exles to support your answer.写作思路展开构造分析p 讨论做leader的好处：主动，可以使用多的资，获得更多;缺点：风险大，要承当更多责任。讨论做mem

13、ber的好处：安逸;没有风险;缺点：收获较小。另外，如何选择做leader还是member一定程度上与一个人的性格有关。同时，还需要看是做什么的group，视情况而定。本话题高分范文赏析When working in a group, there are many different positions, but basically, one can think of a group as having two job types: member and leader. Some people believe that it is better to be a member of a grou

14、p than it is to be the leader. However, I think it is better to be a leader in a group because as the leader, ones ideas are more likely to be heard, he/she is more likely to receive accolades for plete work, and he/she is able to make important decisions for the group. The leader of a group has the

15、 strongest voice of all. If someone enjoys ing up with new, exciting concepts and making a difference in a project, then he/she should be the leader. It can be a frustrating experience at time to be a member of a group. At times, a members ideas are not taken seriously, because he/she does not have

16、respect that the leader has. If one leads a group, his/her ideas will always be heard and respected, and usually followed through with. When a project is plete, it is the leader that receives accolades for doing a good job. While the entire team gets some respect and appreciation upon pletion, it is

17、 the leader who receives the most admiration. This is an advantage for building ones resume, and generally gaining respect in society. People always respect the leader of a group more than the members. Moreover, it is better to be the leader of a group than a member because the leader is able to wie

18、ld the power. Being the leader means getting a say in all decisions, and often, is allowed to follow through with any ideas that he/she thinks up. This can mean that things that a person finds important will be pleted quickly and efficiently. Overall, I believe that it is better to be the leader of a group than to be a member. A leader can make decisions, follow through with them, and receive recognition for a job well done. However