句子润色用高级结构让句子靓起来

1、句子润色用高级结构让句子靓起来教学目的： 2.活学活用，可以在情境中实际 运用所学知识。第二节书面表达总分值25分假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连接。 2021年全国卷3Dear Bob, Im Li Hua. Yesterday we agreed to go to the bookstore together on Saturday but I want to tell you that I cannot go to the books

2、tore with you, because I have something important. I know I should keep my promise. I am very sorry about that. I hope you can understand me. Shall we go on Sunday morning? I suggest we should start early. In this way we can have more time to read and select books. If you agree, lets meet at 8:30 ou

3、tside the school gate. You can also choose the time to go to the bookstore if you have a plan. I will be free any time after school next week. Yours Li Hua 整篇作文缺少高级词汇、短语。句式单调，缺乏多样性，简单句的大量运用给人记流水账的感觉。 遣词造句过于平淡，表达理由不够真诚，模糊不清以我为主体，没有顾及别人的感受。 正文第一段结尾构造松散，不够紧凑，上下文缺乏巧妙连接，表达过于口语化。局部句子不符合英式表达，如I hope you ca

4、n understand me.完全是汉语思维的产物。综上可知，语言平淡、中式英语思维、上下文缺乏连接性是制约考生获得高分的关键因素。策略1：特殊句式 风景独好1 使用强调句:用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动词; 用it is .that .强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。Those who like reading extensively say we get our knowledge through reading.Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our know

5、ledge.Those who like reading extensively say we do get our knowledge through reading.举一反三您给了我们很多的知识和快乐！(梅二检)It is you who/that give us so much knowledge and happiness.You do give us so much knowledge and happiness.It is your unreserved(无保存的help that enables me to obtain this splendid极好的opportunity o

6、f further education. 2 使用倒装句The library is to the east of the teaching building.To the east of the teaching building is the library.只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。Only in this way can we learn English well.我不仅获得了好成绩，而且交到了很多好朋友。梅一检举一反三Not only have I obtained the excellent academic performance, but also I have mad

7、e lots of good friends 3使用虚拟语气Obviously, its high time for us to take some measures to solve the problem. Obviously, its high time that we took some measures to solve the problem We have done the work well with your help.Without/ but for your help, We could not have done the work well with your help

8、. I cant imagine what I would be like without them. 4使用with的复合构造:介词with+宾语后接非谓语动名词、如今分词、不定式、过去分词、名词、形容词、副词并构成逻辑上主谓关系的构造。 with the technology developing , the human living environment has become worse and worse 由于有个重要的会要参加，我不能和你一起去书店了。With an important meeting to attend, I cannot go to the bookstore

9、with you.5使用独立主格构造Weather permitting, we will have a picnic tomorrow.My mother being ill, I have to take care of her now.我的妈妈生病了，我必须照顾她。策略2：活用非谓语，句句精彩1运用非谓语动词整合简单句，提升表达档次1I have a good command of English. (2) It makes it easy for me to communicate with native speakers of English.I have a good comman

10、d of English, making it easy for me to communicate with native speakers of English.举一反三In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree. she watches her babies flying away.In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away.All the people her

11、e like the novel. It is written by Tom.All the people here like the novel written by Tom.2运用非谓语动词简化复合句，使语言简练If you want to travel around the downtown area, youd better hire a street bike.Wanting to travel around the downtown area, youd better hire a street bike.After they visited the lab, the visito

12、rs went to the library.Having visited the lab, the visitors went to the library策略3 使用谚语，画龙点睛谚语的准确使用也可以为文章增色。策略4 运用从句， 丰富内涵通过合并意义相关的几个句子，用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过紧凑，去掉一些多余的成分，防止冗长负担、松散无力，使句子凝练，层次明晰。例如：Some students are interested in the activity. They are welcome to take part. Students who are interested in t

13、he activity are welcome to take part.背熟这10篇优秀范文，2021高考英语写作轻松得20+That is owing to因为the fact that 同位语从句my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital thismorning. (2 抱歉信)Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them

14、. 6建议信I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. 7求助信第二节书面表达总分值25分假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连接。 2021年全国卷3Dear Bob, Im Li Hua. Yesterday we agreed to go to the bookstore together on Saturday but I want to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you, because I have something important. I know I should keep my promise. I am very sorry about that. I hope you can understand me. Shall we go on Sunday morning? I suggest we should start early. In this way we can have mo