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1、The best way to teach is to praise itive actions and ignore negative onesWrite a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with thesement and explain your reasoning for theition you take. In develoand supportingyourition, you should consider ways in which the sement mig

2、ht or might not hold true andexplain how these considerations shyourition.The topic sed is rather controversial. It is definiy essential to acknowledgeitive actions asencouragement anditive feedback incite pas. However, focusing only on theitives andneglecting the negatives can prove detrimental. An

3、ybody willing to learn should also be willing to accept criticism for their mistakes. Showering praise and bringing to light only the good thingsaboutrson mighve the grievous consequence of making the confident to the extent where learning takes the back-seat and the proving himselfn acquiring new k

4、nowledge.arrogant and over- is moreerested inPraising theitive aspects definiy has an obvious impact on the learners. For instance, astudent will be grey motivated to better his performance and score better grades if he receives praise and encouragement. People always need a mentor to give themitive

5、 feedback on howthey are performing so t they have a sense of satisfaction and recognition for their achievements, people will gradually lose the learning will eventually come to a halt.plishment. Withouterest and pasandLearners, espelly students are grey affected by criticism. Criticism should refr

6、ain from beingharsh as this might cause the learner to lose hope anderest. Even though negative criticismproves to be a great teacher, it is only so if doneoderation. Negative feedback and criticism,when consideredhe right way would lead to betterment of the. After all, failures arethe stepstones to

7、 sucs. For instance, Sachendulkar, the legendary cricketer, wasridiculed by people when he fared poorlyatches. He however took the criticism in his stride and went on to create history.Criticism would lead to the judgement of what is right and what is wrong and unacceptable. By being exed to critici

8、sm, the learner is at a bettosition to learn what is not considered as a itive action and can thus abstain from undertaking such actions again. It is up to the learnerto take the negative comments in a good way and not allow it to affect his learning but instead allow criticism to be a teacher.It go

9、es without sayingt encouragement and praise go a long way in boosting up ones morale and kindlingeresthem to learn more and perform better. However, the factt negativecriticism createshethe urge to better olf and prove ones worth cannot be denied.In, it can be saidt teaching should definiy comprise

10、of praising the learner forthe good aspects, buthe same time, it should also comprise of an appropriate amount of healthy criticism.ESSAY REVIEWYou are asked to discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the sement.Essentially, your essay arguest the sement is untrue, or perhaps you migh

11、t prefer to sayt it is largely untrue or mostly untrue. But the essay doesnt explicitly se any of those things.I thinkt for essays like this (which are probably graded very quickly) it is a good idea to se yourition explicitly in order to make your readers job as easy assible.（一定把自己的观点，清清楚楚的在第一段的后面说

12、出来，让grader一眼看到）The prompt also asks you to consider ways in which the s（强制让步，大家还记得吧？）ement might or might not hold true.Your essay does a reasonably good job of explaining why you think teaching generally speaking should incorporate bothitive and negative criticism. But you are not asked to speak on

13、ly generally; you also have to consider specific situations. Speaking generally about studentsrequires you to ignore specific differenbetn students. （GRE作文就是一个要尽量复杂的去考虑问题的。如果题目太general,比如这里就是所有的学生，思路最好去想，不同的学生会不会不同的情况？这么一概而论好不好？）So you end up saying things like Without recognition for their achievem

14、ents, people will gradually loseerest and pasand learning will eventually come to a halt.ts a big claim (insofar as youre talking about everyone)(这种特别 and so it is one语言，要注意呀，真的所有人都是如此么?)t is difficult to prove, but the biggroblem ist the prompt is reallyencouraging you to think aboutsible differenb

15、etn situations or betn students. Isnt it likely, after all,t different students will respond differently to a particular pedagogical strategy. (Notet lots of ETS GRE prompts are like this. They give you a very generalsement to discuss, but prompt you to come up with specific situations in which it m

16、ight be true or not true)（GRE作文就是一个要尽量复杂的去考虑问题的。如果题目太general,比如这里就是所有的学生，思路最好去想，不同的学生会不会不同的情况？这么一概而论好不好？）Your essay also focuses largely on the motivational impact of criticism. Praise alone can lead to arrogance, you claim, and arrogance can lead to a student being moreerested in proving himselfn a

17、cquiring new knowledge.ts a rather vague way of explaining thesibleconsequence of providing only himself) （这种模糊的语言，在itive feedback (Im not sure what you mean by proving人这里是很不受欢迎的哦）but the basic pot exsive praise can have a negative impact on a students desire toimprove seems to me a good reason for

18、being skeptical about the sement youre evaluating here.he very next paragraph, however, you make a claimt is roughly the opite oft:praise can help a studente grey motivated to better his performance. You need to finda way to structure your presenion of these kinds of claims sot it doesnt just look l

19、ike youre contradicting yourself. You need something like this: On the one hand, praise may cause somethe other hand, praise can motivate students by making them confident about their ability to succeed（段与段之间的衔接。尤其是ways in which this sement holds true and not holds true的类型，好的衔接可以避免段落之间自相的嫌疑）Notehat

20、exlet I also offer reasons for claims I make.t is to say, I dont just sayt praise can motivate a student to improve, but add by making them confident etc.When you turn to the impact of negative criticism you also focus on the problem of motivation (harsh criticism can cause the learner to lose hope

21、anderest). Thepart of yourdiscusof negative criticism, however, is very vague about how it might be done in the rightway and so lead to betterment of the.（这种模糊的语言，在人这里是很不受欢迎的哦）Sayingt failures are stepstones to sucs doesnt really clarify the ie, nor does thereference to the cricketer who took . criticism in his stride since w