李悦红－书面表达课件：调查报告

1、Writing A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. 大约20%的学生有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据下列表格内容提示用英语写一篇短文。原因晚上学习太晚，想多睡一会而不吃早餐；家长太忙无法照顾，直接给钱让孩子自己解决；一些男生把钱拿去玩游戏机，一些女生想保持苗条不吃早餐。后果上课无精打采，成绩下降；身体越来越差。你的建议（至少写出一条建议并说明原因）书面表达总分15分，给分标准基本上是：6+6+3 分配方式是：内容+准确性+流畅性体裁：人称：时态：踩点：如何审题？调

2、查报告students， they, I/we 一般现在时6个点如何构句？1.晚上学习太晚，想多睡一会而不吃早餐2.家长太忙无法照顾，直接给钱让孩子自己解决；1.Students study too late at night. They want to sleep longer without having breakfast.2.Their parents are too busy to look after them. They just give them some money for breakfast. 主语谓语宾语补语状语补充主语3.一些男生把钱拿去玩游戏机，一些女生想保持苗条不

3、吃早餐。4.上课无精打采，成绩下降；5.身体越来越差。主语谓语宾语补语状语3.Some boys spend the money on computer games. Some girls want to keep slim and dont have breakfast.4.The students are sleepy in class. They get worse in the exams.5.Their bodies are getting worse and worse.如何构句？如何成文？Students study too late at night. They want to

4、 sleep longer without having breakfast. Their parents are too busy to look after them. They just give them some money for breakfast. Some boys spend the money on computer games.Some girls want to keep slim and dont have breakfast. The students are sleepy in class. They get worse in the exams. Their

5、bodies are getting worse and worse.Thats because students study too late at night. _they want to sleep longer without having breakfast. _their parents are too busy to look after them. They just give them some money for breakfast. _some boys spend the money on computer games. _some girls want to keep

6、 slim _ they dont have breakfast. _ the students are sleepy in class. They get worse in the exams. Their bodies are getting worse and worse.AndOn the other hand,ButWhilesoAs a result,如何成文？常用词汇make a survey on.在.上作调查；do a survey 作调查；so that 以便；in my opinion依我看/我认为；and 因此/和；on the other hand 另一方面；whil

7、e 然而；include包括；but但是；the percent of 百分比；at least至少；as a result结果，总之1)We did a survey about我们针对作了一项调查。2)Here is the result得出结论：3)Some people dont really agree 一些人并不是真正地认同4)They dont think so.他们并不这么认为。5)According to the result of the survey, we know that根据调查的结果，我们知道6)Whats more,而且，常用句型 A survey about

8、(标题) A survey shows that_(开篇点题) .Thats because _ (分析原因) As a result/According to the result of the survey, we know that (分析结果) To make the things better, they should/I think we should (提出具体的意见、措施等)写作模板精彩例文 A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. Thats

9、because they study too late at night and they can sleep longer without breakfast in the morning. And their parents are too busy to look after them. They just give them some money for breakfast. But some students spend the money playing computer games.Survey about Not Having Breakfast They take no in

10、terest in studying; they do worse in the exams. And their bodies are getting worse and worse. To make the things better , they should have breakfast every day because its good for their health and it can help them think better . Teenagers health should begin with good breakfast.As a result, they fee

11、l sleepy in class. A survey shows that about 50% of the students use mobile phones at school. 最近的一项研究调查表明，大约50%的学生带手机回学校。请根据下列表格内容提示用英语写一篇短文。原因1.用来打电话、上网、听歌；2.时尚、方便联系；后果1.上课不认真，成绩下降；2.利用手机考试时作弊；3.浪费时间和钱；你的建议（至少写出一条建议并说明原因）Lets try中考评分标准 要 素档次内容（6分）切合题意，体现要点6-0准确性（6分）语法、词汇、机械性：大小写、拼写和格式等6-0流畅性（3分）结构、

12、得体性与连贯性3-0A Survey about Using Cell Phones at School A survey shows that about 50% of the students use cell phones at school. Thats because they can make a phone call, surf the Internet as well as enjoy music any time and anywhere. Whats more, cell phone is very fashionable. It is very convenient fo

13、r them to communicate with others. As a result, more and more students pay too much attention on cell phones instead of their books, so they fail in the exam. Some students even cheat in the exam by cell phones. For these reasons, using cell phones at school is a waste of time and money. To make the things better, students should be taught to use cell phones properly, or cell phones should not be allowed at school.中考英语作文自评表 做此题时应注意以下几点：写作前：写作时：方法点拨认真审题，明确题意。将写作要点连贯起来，构成文章的整体框架，避免遗漏要点。尽量用自己熟悉的短语，句型将理顺要点