英语记叙文的写作解析课件

1、(最新整理)英语记叙文的写作解析2021/7/261记叙文记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文用各种时态。2021/7/262记叙文写作的注意事项一、交代背景文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的 时间、地点、人物以及事件等二、详略得当过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关 的内容，从而点明文章中心。 三、条理清晰记叙文一般按照时间顺序或

2、空间顺序来描述，要求层次清晰、条理清楚。2021/7/263例文 A traffic accident首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind. 2021/7/264例文 A traffic accident中心段：交待细节，注重在how;交待细节时应注意的事项？过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。2021/7/265中心段细节描写练习请找出下文与主题无关的细节 An a

3、ccident This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about

4、 half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On coming near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life bef

5、ore. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident.2021/7/266例文 A traffic accident中心段：交待细节，注重在how;交待细节时应注意的事项？过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容，从而点

6、明文章中心。从首段也可看出 文章重点在traffic accident和stick in my mind 2021/7/267例文 A traffic accident中心段赏析 It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st).（补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car.

7、Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood. （交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过）After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果） 注意空间的移动：I got there2021/7/2

8、68例文 A traffic accident结尾段赏析 结尾段：可适当发表一点议论In my opinion, the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street. Besides, the driver might have driven too fast, regardless of such bad weather. Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if we become aware of the importance of safety.（

9、结尾） 2021/7/269记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题 It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.All through my senior high school, I couldnt forget In the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to my memory/kept haunting me.Last week, when I was on my way home something

10、 terrible happened.I quickly turned around, just in time to see the whole process of the accident.2021/7/2610记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题补充交代时间The event took place/happened/occurred in the early morning.The whole story happened the (first) day I entered the senior high school.2021/7/2611记叙文常用句式主体部分：（一）作者心理活动的描写I

11、could hardly believe my eyes.I felt as if I were on top of the world.I was completely shocked.I was bursting with joy.2021/7/2612记叙文常用句式主体部分：（二）人物外貌和性格的描写He is of medium height.He is good-looking/ordinary-looking.She is plump/slim, with fair skin and curly hair.He looks handsome in a sports suit/blu

12、e jeans.He is of mild/bad temper.At first glance, you would say he is the perfect image of an obedient boy, but deep down, he is not that way at all.2021/7/2613记叙文常用句式主体部分：（三）物体的描写It comes in a variety of colors/shapes.It consists of several integrated parts.It is shaped like a circle.It is flat in

13、shape and small in size.Attached to the bottom is2021/7/2614记叙文常用句式主体部分：（四）景物的描写There is a wonderful array of flowers along the street.The air is filled with the scent of roses.The trees stood there on guard for generations, with branches reaching out like a canopy over the road.I feel miserably ins

14、ignificant approaching the mountain.Even judging by modern standards, the town was large in population.The campus has a unique atmosphere.2021/7/2615练习一The Day My Classmate Fell Ill）简单描述这位同学的生病情况；）同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的；）人与人之间的这种互相关爱给我的感受是2021/7/2616词汇拓展扭伤 twist ones ankle / give a wrench to ones ankle /

15、sprain ones ankle ones sprained ankle喉咙疼痛 have a sore throat痛苦的表情 an expression of pain Her face was contorted with pain. 她痛得脸都变了样。量体温 take ones temperature轮流照顾某人 take care of sb. by turns / take turns at caring sb.发高烧 have/run a high fever健康状况 health / condition请假 ask for a (sick) leave / ask for a

16、 four-day leave / be on sick leave2021/7/2617范文一Last year, a terrible flu spread across the whole school.One ofmy classmate, John/Jane Doe, became a victim of it.He/She ran a high fever, and ordinary medicine didnt work onhim.The news quickly reached everybody in our class. Someclassmates recorded t

17、he English lessons for him so that he/she could keep up with his/her studies. Our English teacher called on him/her at the weekends sometimes. With care and help, he/she was soon able to be up and about and finally came back to the class.From this event, I learn two things. One is that with love, no

18、illness or difficulty is terrible. The other is that love and help are two-way streets. Our classmates offered John/Jane Doe kind help partly because he/she himself/herself had always been a helpful person. So I realize that when we help others, we are helping ourselves.2021/7/2618范文二In the summer s

19、ports meeting last year, one of my classmates, John/Jane Doe, suddenly fell to the ground and hurt her left foot when he/she was practicing high jump. His/Her face turned pale and showed great pain.Seeing this, our classmates immediately came to her aid. They struggled to take her to the temporary e

20、mergency room. One boy untied his/her shoe and applied ice rocks to his/her wound. Meanwhile, girls comforted her in a soft voice. Soon the P.E. teacher came. He checked his/her sound and took some emergency measures to lessen her pain. Fifteen minutes later, the ambulance arrived and she was sent t

21、o hospital. Luckily enough, with our care and concern, John/Jane Doe recovered quickly.Such an incident impressed everyone present. I realizethat love and care are the best medicine for an injured person 2021/7/2619学生作品中的常见问题在叙事时，一般用过去时，但在表述个人观点时可以用现在时。在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的结果。Last week, my classmate had a

22、bad cold.不要用或A,B,C来表示人，可以取一个恰当的名字，或是用John Doe或Jane Doe来表示“某人”。2021/7/2620大学英语四级记叙文写作2021/7/2621写作步骤要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析。对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：第一段、总结描述。交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句；第二段、具体描述。具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因经过结果；第三段、对事件的分析2021/7/2622四级中出现的考试题目2003年6月 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic

23、 Accident2003年9月 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill2021/7/26232003年9月Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill（or Got Injured). You should write 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的； 3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是.2021/7/2624About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt