-高考英语真题_短文改错带解析

1、精心整理短文改错1. 【2015 陕西】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分）Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywe

2、ll.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup. Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“ Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter! 【答案】76. 去掉

3、in 77.anything 改为 something 78.better 改成 best 79.decide 改成 decided 80.step 改为 steps 81.well 改成 good 82.after 改成 when/while 83.a 改为 the 84.just 后加 to 85.enjoy 改为 enjoying 【考点定位】考查短文改错【名师点睛】 这篇短文改错是记叙文， 短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。错误之处的设置都是平常学生容易错的地方。 考查点比较全面， 各种词性都考查到了， 也涉及到一些语法知识的考查， 如：非谓语动词，时态等。2. 【2015 四川】短文改

4、错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，共 15 分）Hi,Janice, ItsbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeofthe problemsIhavebeenexperiencing. AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchand 页脚内容精心整理 afterschool.Wevebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.ItsbeenthreeSatur

5、days nowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatimelllosetheirfriendship.Howastingactivity!Infact,Idontliketogoanymore,soImafraidI wdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim? Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice. Grace 【答案】61. 加上 to 62.tell-told 63.friend-friends 64.sing-singing 65.many

6、-much 66.so-but 67.How-What 68.are-were 69.him-them 70. 去掉 with 【解析】试题分析：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉 OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。61. 加上 to 考查动词 want 的用法， want 用不定式担当状语，故加上 历的问题。to 。句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经62.telltold考查时态。根据时间状语lasttime可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成 told 。句意为正如我上次告诉你的那样。63.frie

7、ndfriends 考查名词的复数。 名词 friend 为可数名词， 其前有 three 修饰，需要用复数形式， 故把 friend改成 friends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。64.sing singing 考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型 spend （in ）doingsth 结构，故把 sing 改成 singing 。65.many much 考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非 many。句意为：那真的花费很多。66.so-but 考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把 so 改成 but 。页

8、脚内容精心整理67.HowWhat 考查疑问词的选择。本句中 do 之后缺少宾语， 表示事情， 故用 what 而非 how。注意首字母要大写。68.are were 考查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把 are 改成 were。句意为：如果你是我 , 。69.him them 考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them 而非 him。句意为：你会和他们说吗？70. 去掉 with考查动词。动词help 为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with 。句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。【考点定位】考查短文纠错【名师点睛】 本篇文章考查学生的短文纠错

9、能力。短文纠错能力考查的范围较广，如各类词类用法和各种语法知识。本篇文章中既考查了词类用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70 题，也考查了学生的语法知识如： 62、64、67、68，涉及多种语法知识。要求考生要通读全文，把握大意，还要逐读 各句才能找出错误所在。3. 【2015 浙江】短文改错（共10 小题；每小题1 分，满分 10 分）例如：Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospentweekendwithyou.Luckily the Iwascompletelyfreethen,soIllto say“ yes” .I llarriveinBrist

10、olataround8:00p.m.am inFridayevening. On Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitcloseto thewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemor nings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassro

11、omisalsosplendid.Closetothescho oltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowy mountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorni ng.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwas

12、onlyachildwhenIstudiedint hatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit. 【答案】side-sides from-to sit-sitting 页脚内容精心整理 easy-easily is-was them-it not 删除 inhurry-inahurry felt-feel If-Although/Though 【解析】试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。side-sides 考查名词的单复数。根据前面的 three ，此处应该使用复数形式 from-to 考查介词搭配 makeof 与 makefrom两者都常用在被动语态中 , 表示 “ 某

13、物由 . 构成的” .makeof 的原材料是看的到的 , 即平常我们说的物理现象, 比如 Thechairismadeofwood. 椅子是有木头做成的。而makefrom的原材料是看不到的 , 比如 Paperismadefromthetrees.纸张是由木材做成的 . 是一种化学变化 , 从纸上是看不出一棵树滴 . sit-sitting 考查动名词动词 enjoy 后接 ing 形式。easy-easily 考查副词此处的副词修饰动词 see is-was 考查动词的谓语时态根据前后句的谓语时态都是使用过去的，所以这里面也需要用过去时态。them-it 考查代词此处的 it 指代的是学

14、校。删除 not 考查意思是否表否定该句的意思应该是表达肯定而不是否定所以要删除 not 意为 “ 立刻 ” ，也是一个固定搭配 inhurry-inahurry 考查冠词 inahurry felt-feel 考查使役动词的法。 Makesbdosth, 是使役动词的用法。If-Although/Though 考查连词的用法， 根据句意 “ 尽管在我读书的时候我是一个小孩，但我不 会忘记它 ” 表达让步，而不是条件。而且翻译为如果意思上也不通。【考点定位】短文改错【名师点睛】这种题目对语法的要求很高，要求注意上下文的，以及单词的用法，以及特殊用法、固定搭配等。其实这一些错误很有可能是在写作中

15、会出现，所以，加强写作的练习对于这一种题目，也是有帮助的。另外，这种题目也可以改编一下，成为语法填空的题目。4. 【2015 新课标全国 II 】?2. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。页脚内容精心整理 Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow .Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaround

16、an dfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimdryingandtellinghimtowait outsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“ Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.【答案】71.parent 改为 parents 72.on 改为 in 73.very 去掉 改为 looking 74.looks 75.where 改为 that 或者去掉 where

17、76.begun 改为 began 77.telling 改为 told 78.a 改为 the 79.saw 后加 his 改为 terribly 80.terrible【考点定位】语法填空。” Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain. 【名师点睛】 通过短短的100 多个词， 使考生能正确运用各类词和固定搭配，如动词、 名词、 副词、 代词和连词，辨别并改正错误。总的说来，本题都是学生平时书面表达中常见的错误。多读多练习就能找出问题所在，也能对写作有帮助。5. 【2015 新课标全国 I 】WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoli

18、veinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,but Imissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthe developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeensho wnthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairsweb

19、reatheinisgettingd irtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.I fwefailtodoso,we lllivetoregretit.【答案】76.think thought 77.countryside 前加 the 页脚内容精心整理78.or and 79.on with 80.been 去掉81.seriouslyserious 82.airs air 83.muchmany 84.found find 85.your our 【解析】试题分析：

20、作者是孩子的时候，梦想生活在城市。二作者现在生活在城市，却向往着家乡，因为那里更少的污染。76.think thought 句意：我认为生活在那儿很快乐。 时态用法错误。 这里用一般过去时， 表示“ 过去认为”77.countryside前加 the 句意：但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指，故用定冠词the 。78.or and 句意：那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词 and。79.on with 句意：随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语 withthedevelopmentof 随着 的发展。80.been 去掉句意：许多研究表明。语态用

21、法错误。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。81.seriouslyserious句意：全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词修饰。82.airs air 句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词 air 为不可数名词。83.muchmany句意：许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词 animal 为可数名词，故用 many修饰。84.found find 句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。动词用法错误。情态动词 must 后接动词原形。85.your our 句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。【考点定位

22、】短文改错。(2014 届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收 ) 页脚内容精心整理 Asisknown,thatitisinterestingtoteachchildrentoswimwhiletheyarestillbabies.MostlargetowninFloridaandCaliforni ahavealreadyrunparticularlylessonsforbabies.TheideahasquicklyspreadtoEuropewhich,inseveralcountries,special courseswerenowofferedtochildrenwhoarefrom

23、7to24monthsold.Thefirststepistohavechildgetridofthefearwithwat er.Next,heisteachingtofloatinwater.Oncehecandothatnaturallyandcanswimwithfear,thechildcanmasterthetechniq ueandpushhimforwardthroughwater. 【答案】1.去掉 that 2.town 改成 towns 3.particularly 改成 particular 4.which 改成 where 5.were 改成 are 6.have 与

24、 child 之间加 a 改成 ofwater 7.withwater 8.teaching 改成 taught 9.with 改成 without 10.him 改成 himself 2 （2014 届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中）DearMr.Black, mverythanktoyouforinvitingmetostaywithyouinthecomesummervacation.Ihavebeendreamedofseeingyouagain s I othatIcangethelpfromyouinmyEnglishlearning.AndImafraidIcannotgotoyo

25、urpla ceinthissummer.Ivepromisedmy grandmother,shelivesinth ecountry,tospendthis summerwithher.ShemissesmetoomuchthatIfinddif ficulttorefuseh sconveni errequest.Imbusypreparingformyexaminationsinpresent.IplannedtovisityouinwinterifitBestwishes. Yourstruly, LiYing 【答案】1.thank 改为 thankful e 改为 coming

26、3.dreamed 改为 dreaming 页脚内容精心整理 4.And 改为 But 5.去掉 in 6.she 改为 who 7.too 改为 so 8.find 后面加 it 9.in 改为 at 10.planned 改为 plan 3 (2014 届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考 ) Oneyearago,Iwasingreattrouble.IworkedhardatEnglishanddevoteallmysparetimetopractiseit.ButIfailedtopas sthemid-termexamination,whichmademegreatdisappo

27、inted.SoIaskedmygrandpaforadvicewhenIgottohome.Heari ngthatItoldhim,hesaid,“Tosomeextent,examinationresultsaresometimeunexpectedbyyourstudylevel.Youcan eyourprogressbyoneexamination.”Heencouragedmyselftoworkhardforlongtimetocheckmyresults.Itookmygrandp asadvice.NowIrealizethattheprocessoflearningism

28、uchmoreimportantandmyEnglishismorebetterthanbefore.Fro mmyexperience,Ifeelthatweshouldlistentoopinionfromoldpeople. 【答案】 devoted 1.devote 2.practise practicing 3.great greatly 4.去掉 to。5.that what 6.sometime sometimes 7.myself me 8.for 和 long 之间加 a。9.more much 10.opinion opinions 4 （2013-2014学年内蒙古包头市

29、一中高三入学考试）“It Amanwasdrivingontheroad.Suddenlyhiscarsstopped.Hegotoutofthecartriedtofindoutthetrouble.dthevoicebehindhim.Hewassurprisingandturnedaround.Buthesawonlyanoldhorse.Didyousaysomething?页脚内容精心整理d. “Isaidyoushouldcheckyoursmotor.”Thehorsereplied.Themanrushedto thenearesthouse.Withaveryexcitedv

30、oice,h“Hedidn etoldthefarmerhadhappened.Thefarmer,therefore,showednosignofexcitement.Heexplained,ngaboutcars.HecanonlyrepeatwhatIoftens ay. 【答案】1.cars 改成 car 2.tried trying 3.thea 4.surprising surprised 5.somet hing anything 6.yours your 7.With In 8.thefarmer had what 9.therefore however 10.didnt do

31、esn t 5 （2014 届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测试）Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.WehavespentseveralpreciousweekendinlearningintheEnglishClub.Alt periodoftimes,wehavemadeagreatprogress.Thatisbecauseweareallverymuc houghwehavebeenmembersforashort hactiveandtheactivitiesarenotonlyenjoyableandalsohelpful.

32、Besides,theforeignteachershereworkhardandtryhisbe sttomaketheactivitieslivelyandinter ested.IamverypleasedtosaythatallofusgreatlyimprovedourspokenEnglishsofar .Iamlookingforwardtoseeallofyouagaininthenearfuture! 【答案】1.real-really 2.weekend-weekends 3.times-time 4.去掉 a 5.去掉 much 6.and-but 7.his-their

33、 8.interested-interesting 页脚内容精心整理 9.us have 10.see-seeing 6 （2014 届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考）Ican tswimsoIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackatmychildhood,Ithinkthatthreereasonsmightexplainfear.Firstly,Ia mnotallowedtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,asmymotherhadanunreasonablefearofit.Therefore,Iwastaughttoseeto

34、thewaterassomethingdanger.Secondly,myeyesbecamebadwhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassinthewater,Icouldntseesomething,andthisincreasedmyfear.Whatsworse,forachildIoncesaw aneighbordrowned.SincethenIhavebeenmorefrightening. 【答案】1.sobecause 2.look looking 3.加 the 4.am was 5.去掉 to 6.danger-dangerous 7.glass-g

35、lasses 8.something-anything 9.for-as 10.frighteningfrightened 7 （2014 届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考（11 月）Peopleoftenhavetroublesgettingusedtoanewculture.Theyareusuallycuriouswhentheyfirs tarriveaforeigncountry.T herefore,iftheystayforalongtime,theymaystarttofeeldifferentstagesofcultureshock.Theycanfeelaloneorsadb

36、ecause hecan tdealwiththelocalpeople.Howquickpeoplegetusedtoculturedifferencesmaybedependonthewaytheylearn.Th at saproblemiftheycantspeakthelanguage.Onotherhand,somecanstudythesituationandmakegoodguessesab outtheculture.Whentheyfinallybegantounderstandsomeofthelanguageandmakesomenewfriends,theywillg

37、raduallyenjoyt hemselvesandfeelsatisfying. 【答案】1.troubles 改为 trouble 。页脚内容精心整理 2.arrive 后加 in 。3.Therefore 改为 However 。4.alone 改为 lonely 。5.he 改为 they 。6.quick 改为 quickly 。7.maybedependon 中删去 be。8.other 前加 the 。9.began 改为 begin 。10.satisfying 改为 satisfied 。8 （2014 届黑龙江哈师大附中高三上学期期中）【答案】1.shall-should

38、 2.specially-special 3.respondingto 4.thebest 5.appreciation 6.willprefer-prefer 7.which-what 8.bringing 9.means 10.ourselves 9 （2014 届河北省衡水中学高三上学期四调考试）Thanksforyoumail.Imgladtok nowyouareinterestedinthe2014FloridaWinterCamp.ItwillbeheldfromJanuary27toFebruary13,duringthattimeyouwillgetwonderfulexpe

39、rience.YouwillhavechancestoimproveyourspeakingEnglishint hecoursesproviding.Also,activitiesarrangedforyoutospendweekendstogetherwithyourhostfamily,soyoucanlearnA mericanEnglishinauthenticsituations.However,atriptothelocalDisneylandwillcertainlyaddupthefunofthecamp. Joininthecampandyouwillhavethebett

40、erknowledgeofAmericancultureandlife.Youaresuretobenefitfromit. Yourstruly 页脚内容精心整理LiHua 【答案】1.you your2.that which3.在“get ”后面加 a 或 experienc experiences4.speaking viding provided6.在“arranged 前面加 are 7.However Besides/Also/Morever8.up to9.去掉 in 10.thea10 （2014 届河南省南阳市高三五校联谊期中考试）MyneighborJ

41、ackieisalwaysconsiderationtoothers.Oneday,IwasgoingtodeliveraspeechataninstitutewhileIfoundmycarwouldntgetstarted.Irushedtothestreettohireataxi.JustatthattimeIcomeacrossJackie.Hewashurriedgoingtoattendhissickmotherinhospital. Furthermore,whenhelearnedaboutmyproblems,hedidnthesitatetogivemealift.Iarr

42、ivedatthelecturehallintime,whentheaudiencehadbeenpresent.IowemygreatthankstomyneighbourJackie,heisapersonreadytohelptheothersatanytime. 【答案】1.consideration 改成 considerate 2.While 改成 when e 改成 came 4.hurried 改成 hurriedly 5.attend 后面 加 to 6.Furthermore改成 however 改成 where9.he改成 who10. 去掉 the 7.problems

43、 改成 problem8.when（2014 届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔实验中学高三上学期期中考试）页脚内容精心整理 Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendlastsummer.Itwasagoodtripinthebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendssuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldntmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewhowtodealit.Onegirltriedtocallhermumoverhermobilep

44、hone,butthereisnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimtorestinit.Aftertakensomepills,hedranksomewaterandatesomefood.Afterawhile,Ifeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain. 【答案】1.第一句： friend 改成 friends; 2.第二句： and 改成 but 3.第三句： far 改成 farther 4.

45、第四句： deal 后加 with 5.第五句： is 改成 was 6.第六句： Lucky 改成 Luckily 7.第七句：去掉 rest 前面的 to 8.第八句： taken 改成 taking 9.第九句： I 改成 he 10.第十句： us 改成 ourselves 12 （201 4 届浙江省衢州一中高三上学期期中考试）Nowadays,somestudentswouldnotliketoliveinadormitory.Instead,theyrentedhousesoutsidetheschool.Therearead vantagesforthemall.Livingi

46、nadormitorycanincreasefriendshipandcooperationamongclassmates,butofcourseitissaf，erBesides,adormitoryismorelikeasociety,whereenablesstudentstolearntogetalongwiththeeachother thuspreparingthesociallifelater.Asforrentinghousestolivelonely,itsbetterforyourstudyasyoucanfeelfreelyinyouro wnroomwithoutbei

47、nginterruptedbyothers.Asaresult，youcanhaveaplentyoftimetodevoteyourselftoreviewyourlessonswholeheartedly.Buttheremayappearafewsafetypr oblemasyouliveoutsidetheschool.Anyhowasastudent,Ipreferlivinginadormitory. 【答案】1.rented 改为 rent 2.all 改为 both 3.but 改为 and 4.where 改为 which 页脚内容精心整理 5.repairing 后面加

48、for 6.lonely 改为 alone 7.freely 改为 free8.去掉 a9.review 改为 blem 改为 problems （2014 届浙江省湖州中学高三上学期期中考试）Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.30minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothsa dandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoremi nute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemypro blem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewasteallthe