高三英语二轮专题复习读后续写——二段首句的上下文衔接课件16张PPT

1、读后续写评分标准内容词汇语法篇章结构上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性a.续写内容与前文的逻辑衔接；b.第一段结尾句与第二段所给句的衔接；c. 续写内容与所给段首句的衔接；d.续写段落内容之间的衔接；How to connect your writing with the given sentence in Continuation Writingconnection 1: 述位转换Long, long ago, there was a mountain. On the mountain stood a temple.In the temple lived an old monk. The old m

2、onk was telling to a young monk a story. _. The story went like thisconnection 1 : 述位转换At the library Wang Peng was surprised to find that his restaurant served far too much fat and Yong Huis far too little. Even though her customers might get thin after eating Yong Huis food.He smiled as he welcome

3、d some customers warmly at the door but the smile left his face when he saw Yong Hui walking in. She did not look happy but glared at him. .(人教版必修3 Come and Eat) connection 1: 述位转换Para. 2. We(Mom and I) took the trolley back home. (读后续写：A Gift of Gold)A. We took the trolley back home. “My dear, the

4、pants go well with you, doesnt it”, mom murmured. B. We took the trolley back home. The trolley was crowed with many people, so my mother and I were holding a handrail tightly. trolleytrolleyconnection 1:述位转换Para. 2 It was time for the big race and the organizer called the runners to the starting li

5、ne. (2021年江苏无锡一模)connection 2:主位推进Para. 1 Ada then found a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight. Para. 2 The next day, Betty came to Adas home. (2020年9月 广州调研考)connection 2:主位推进Para. 1 Ada then found a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight. Para. 2 The next

6、day, Betty came to Adas home. She gently explained what she was going to do and carefully wrapped the shirts around Roys leg and stick. “I heard what you did,” Betty said. “You kept your head in an emergency. Thats an important skill.” Connection 2:主位推进2020年9月广州调研考Para 2 With some chocolates in hand

7、, the boys bad attitude disappeared.2021 广州一模 读后续写 巧克力的故事How did the boys bad attitude disappear?Connection 3 述位复现 & 主位推进Curiosity drove Wang Peng inside. 1._ was full of people. The hostess(of it), a very thin lady, came forward. “Welcome,” 2._ said. “My name is Yong Hui. Ill help you lose weight a

8、nd be fit in two weeks if you eat here every day.” Then 3._ gave a menu to Wang Peng. There were few choices of food and drink on 4._ : just rice, raw vegetables served in vinegar, fruit and water. 5._ was amazed at this and especially at the prices. 6._. (人教版必修3 Come and Eat)Connection述位转换 & 主位推进Cu

9、riosity drove Wang Peng inside. It was full of people. The hostess(of it), a very thin lady, came forward. “Welcome,” she said. “My name is Yong Hui. Ill help you lose weight and be fit in two weeks if you eat here every day.” Then she gave a menu to Wang Peng. There were few choices of food and dri

10、nk on it: just rice, raw vegetables served in vinegar, fruit and water. Wang Peng was amazed at this and especially at the prices. It cost more than a good meal in his restaurant. (人教版必修3 Come and Eat)connection述位转换 & 主位推进Curiosity drove Wang Peng inside. It was full of people. The hostess(of it), a

11、 very thin lady, came forward. “Welcome,” she said. .Then she gave a menu to Wang Peng.There were few choices of food and drink on it: just rice, raw vegetables served in vinegar, fruit and water. Wang Peng was amazed at this and especially at the prices. What was it like inside?What did she do then

12、?What was there on the menu?How did Wang Peng react to the menu?Why did the price get Wang Peng amazed?connections述位转换主位推进述位转换+主位推进How will you connect your writing with the given sentence? One day, my elder sister, who loved Dad very much, had a great idea. That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. What was inside the bag?How was the video received online?What was the great idea?冲刺卷4读后续写Pare 1 Mama explained to me that those toys for “poor” c