月高三第二次作文训练

1、作文训练一一 连词成句并背诵（按括号中的要求，连词成句并背诵（按括号中的要求，添加适当的词连词成句）添加适当的词连词成句）1.we, live in, information, age, web, widely, used. (用非限制性定语从句）用非限制性定语从句）_We are now living in an information age, in which the web is widely used. 2.wherever, necessary, they, download, all kinds of, information, Internet (用状语从句的省略）用状语从句的

2、省略） _Whenever necessary they can download all kinds of information from the Internet. 3. e-mail, instead of , letter, make communication, easy (用强调句式）用强调句式）_It is e-mail instead of letter that makes communication easier. 4.people, be worried about, the safety of paying for goods, use, credit card, w

3、hen, shop , on the Internet (用现在分词短语作伴随状语及状语用现在分词短语作伴随状语及状语从句的省略从句的省略)_People are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit card whenshopping 5. once cheat, online, you, find, it, hard, make a complaint (过去分词作状语，过去分词作状语，it 作形式宾语）作形式宾语） _Once cheated online, you may find it hard to ma

4、ke a complaint. 6. we , think twice, before, decide, purchase , goods, sell , on the Internet （过去分词短语作后置定语）（过去分词短语作后置定语）_We must think twice before we decide to purchase goods sold on the Internet.二二 连句成篇并背诵。连句成篇并背诵。（选用（选用 “whats worse, in my opinion, Finally, for one thing, for another, secondly, f

5、irstly”过渡词衔接成文）过渡词衔接成文） Online shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a number of benefits for the shoppers. _, the most important advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the online shops are open 24 hours a day, and do not have to queue with other shoppers. _, it is easy to find

6、 what you are looking for one the Internet. _, it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet. FirstlySecondly Finally Every coin has two sides, online shopping has its disadvantages, too. _, you cant actually see the products you are buying online, thus the quality may not be ensured. _, som

7、e people are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit cards when shopping on the Internet. _, once cheated online, you may find it difficult to make a complaint. For one thingFor anotherWhats worse _, we must think twice before we decide to purchase goods sold on the Internet. In my

8、 opinion实战演练实战演练 如今网络已经对人们产生了很大的如今网络已经对人们产生了很大的影响，对中学生影响尤其之深。有人影响，对中学生影响尤其之深。有人认为网络的利大于弊，有人认为网络认为网络的利大于弊，有人认为网络的弊大于利。的弊大于利。 请以请以“Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”为题，为题，用英语写一篇文章，结合实际情况谈用英语写一篇文章，结合实际情况谈谈你的看法。谈你的看法。第一步第一步 写作提纲写作提纲 利利 主题句（毫无疑问，我们通过因特网受益颇多。）主题句（毫无疑问，我们通过因特网受益颇多。）要点：要点：1.当我们在学

9、习中遇到困难时，可以在网上寻求当我们在学习中遇到困难时，可以在网上寻求帮助。帮助。2. 网购方便又便宜。网购方便又便宜。3. 网上看新闻，看电影，听音乐，可以放松缓解网上看新闻，看电影，听音乐，可以放松缓解压力。压力。 弊弊主题句：众所周知，主题句：众所周知， 凡事都具有两面性。凡事都具有两面性。 网络不可避免地对学生也有坏的影响。网络不可避免地对学生也有坏的影响。1.有些学生沉迷于网络游戏，因此而辍学。有些学生沉迷于网络游戏，因此而辍学。2. 学生用学生用Wi-Fi，玩游戏，看电影，玩游戏，看电影，QQ聊天，聊天，不能集中精力学习，学习也因此受到严重不能集中精力学习，学习也因此受到严重影响。

10、影响。篇尾总结篇尾总结 自己的观点自己的观点在我看来，网络本身没有错，是我们自身缺在我看来，网络本身没有错，是我们自身缺乏自控，才导致这种严重后果。乏自控，才导致这种严重后果。因此，是时候控制自己，要好好利用网络了。因此，是时候控制自己，要好好利用网络了。 翻译要点范文仿写（按要求完成句子） As the Internet becomes increasingly popular, there is a fierce debate on its advantages and disadvantages. There is no doubt _(从句作从句作doubt 的同位语；我们学生通过因特

11、的同位语；我们学生通过因特网受益颇多。网受益颇多。)_(首先首先)，we can seek help online _ (过去分词作时间状语；当过去分词作时间状语；当我们遇到困难时我们遇到困难时 face ) in our study. that we benefit a lot from the Internet.Firstlywhen faced with difficulties _(其次），其次），_ _(it 作形式主语，副词作插入语；作形式主语，副词作插入语； 对于我们来说更对于我们来说更方面，更重要的是，更加便宜）方面，更重要的是，更加便宜）to shop online. _(第

12、三），第三）， we can get relaxed and _(缓解压力缓解压力) by _ and so on. (V-ing作介词的宾语；看新闻，看电影，作介词的宾语；看新闻，看电影，听音乐听音乐)_ (非限制性定语从句；非限制性定语从句；众所周知众所周知)，every coin has two sides. The Internet _ (副词修饰动词副词修饰动词inevitably; 对学生有害对学生有害)students. Secondlyit is more convenient,and more importantly, cheaper for usThirdlyrelieve

13、d from pressurereading news, watching films, listening to musicAs is well-konwninevitably does great harm to _(一方面一方面), many students _ (高级词高级词汇短语；沉迷于玩电脑游戏汇短语；沉迷于玩电脑游戏), _(非限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句，result / consequence;由于这个原因）由于这个原因）some of them quit schooling. _(另外一另外一方面），方面），the attention of some students

14、 is distracted _ (定语从句；仍在学校学习的学生定语从句；仍在学校学习的学生) through secretly playing computer games, watching films and chat with friends on QQ _For one thingare addicted to playing computer gamesas a result of whichFor another thingwho still study at school nowusing Wi-Fi(动词动词ing作方式状语；用作方式状语；用Wi-Fi), _(插入语；因此插入语；因此)，their study suffers a lot. _ (在我看来），在我看来）， _(用含有用含有notbut的强调句型；不是因特网本身而是我们缺的强调句型；不是因特网本身而是我们缺乏自控）乏自控）accounts for so serious a p