江苏高考英语作文summary技巧实用教案

1、 Summary writing(约30个词概括(giku)概要(giyo):约30词，少于25或多于40词均扣2分 抄袭原文材料为无效要点；改变句式表达方式，并有适当(shdng)发挥，不认定为抄袭。第1页/共54页第一页，共55页。读写作文(zu wn)写好summary 的意义 第一段是定调子，阅卷老师往往(wngwng)读完第一段就已经打出基本分了。 -高考阅卷老师 相对于写作的其他要求来说，这一部分较难写，这一部分先读后概括，而其他部分都是有中文提纲的。 -往届实验班考生 第2页/共54页第二页，共55页。What is a Summary? A summary is a short

2、 account giving the main points of something longer or detailed.第3页/共54页第三页，共55页。以约30个词概括主要(zhyo)内容 A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it. “It is true that you cannot sing,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!” “Oh, but what goo

3、d is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!” “Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why cant you just

4、be happy about what you have already got?”第4页/共54页第四页，共55页。人称人称(rnchng)时态时态 The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have already got.feelscomfortsyouyou第5页/共

5、54页第五页，共55页。过多过多(u du)细节细节 In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what

6、 he didnt possess.53 words第6页/共54页第六页，共55页。直接直接(zhji)引语引语 A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, each one should be happy about what you have got.” - - - -第7页/共54页第七页，共55页。过早过早(u zo)表表达观点达观点 Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a pea

7、cock. A peacock was upset about his voice, but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got .-第8页/共54页第八页，共55页。 A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was b

8、lessed with.第9页/共54页第九页，共55页。dos and donts 1、注意人称时态正确；2、不写过多细节:实行精“兵”裁“员” 3、不用直接引语；4、不能过早表达观点；5、不可完全(wnqun)照抄原文；6、不可加入自己的观点；7. 思路清晰，巧用关联词增强文章的 连贯性。第10页/共54页第十页，共55页。Styles of passageNarration（记叙文记叙文）1 Argumentation(说明文说明文)2Exposition(议论文议论文)3图文并茂的材料图文并茂的材料4第11页/共54页第十一页，共55页。图文并茂的材料图文并茂的材料4第12页/共54页

9、第十二页，共55页。2015高考作文图文并茂的材料图文并茂的材料4第13页/共54页第十三页，共55页。1.1.记叙文记叙文写作方法：串联要素(yo s)法六个要素(yo s)：who; when; where; what; how; why某人做了某事, 结果如何？The passage mainly talks about.第14页/共54页第十四页，共55页。 This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A

10、fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.第15页/共54页第十五页，共55页。 （1）对象、性质功用、利好 （2）问题、解决方法 （3）现象(xinxing)、原因、结果第16页/共54页第十六页，共55页。The topic-whatKoalas are unhappy and complainingThe reasons- whyTourists taking photosThe effects-how Being repeatedly awakenThe solutionsGovernment ban the

11、 practiceThe conclusionBe more kind to animals第17页/共54页第十七页，共55页。 koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.第18页/共54页第十八页，共55页。 Koalas in wildlife parks cant fa

12、ll asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists behavior illegal to protect the animals.第19页/共54页第十九页，共55页。PracticePassage A (2014年江苏高考作文)第20页/共54页第二十页，共55页。板块（次）重点1.1.概要（第一段-约30词，少于25或多于40词均扣2分） 1 1）英语词汇被收录于汉语词典2 2）不同的人观点不一2.2.发表自己的观点（第二段-观点鲜明，不能骑墙

13、） 1）自己的观点（赞成或反对均可）2）理由2-3点（注：若写4点则从总分中扣2分）3.结论（第三段） 结尾句（无此项扣1分） 第21页/共54页第二十一页，共55页。 Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.第22页/共54页第二十二页，共55页

14、。 WithEnglishwordsgettingpopularinbothmediaanddailylife,aChinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem,leavingthepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups:“For”and“Against”第23页/共54页第二十三页，共55页。三要素：论点、论据、论证(lnzhng)。文章结构：总分结构、分总结构、 平行结构。第24页/共54页第二十四页，共55页。 Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancie

15、nt times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best c

16、onditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough

17、time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will

18、 certainly benefit a lot from it.第25页/共54页第二十五页，共55页。1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences) a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the day3. Conclusion/suggestions.a goo

19、d habit / benefit a lot 第26页/共54页第二十六页，共55页。 Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.第27页/共54页第二十七页，共55页。 Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spr

20、ead from the world of sports to business. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work togethe

21、r. Anyone who has ever been to a job interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group. Because teamwork is required by many organizations today

22、, they will often organize team building events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals.Teamworkrequired by第28页/共54页第二十八页，共55页。There are seven important skills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows:Listening-listen and allow people

23、 to freely express their ideas.Questioning-ask questions and discuss the objectives of the team.Persuading-encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas.Respecting-treat others with respect and to support their ideas.Helping-help ones partners, this is the general theme of teamwork.S

24、haring-share ideas and resources with the team to create an environment of teamwork.Participating-all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team.skills第29页/共54页第二十九页，共55页。 The passage states the importance of teamwork in business and that, in a more competitive world, people must

25、co-operate in order to achieve their goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills are also described.第30页/共54页第三十页，共55页。Q1：图文并茂(t wn bn mo)的读写归纳要涉及图吗？审题看图画或图表的作用(zuyng)漫画通常可忽略图表看作用(zuyng)，有时不可忽略第31页/共54页第三十一页，共55页。2015高考作文第32页/共54页第三十二页，共55页。第33页/共54页第三十三页，共55页。第34页/共54页第三十四页，共55页。第35页/共54页第三十五页，共55页。Think

26、：2015高考(o ko)的这幅图在文字中体现了吗？第36页/共54页第三十六页，共55页。Tip1多个并列语段只要找出其共性(gngxng) 主题， 为某一段落服务的插图 可不涉及。 第37页/共54页第三十七页，共55页。Model 1: Topic + support The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may alsothreaten peoples lives. The three selections presented above are typi

27、cal examples.(2015高考(o ko)范文）第38页/共54页第三十八页，共55页。观察(gunch)一下图文的关系苏州2016第39页/共54页第三十九页，共55页。2015高考作文的翻版(fnbn) Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world，where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of the author

28、are typical examples.第40页/共54页第四十页，共55页。 The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols

29、 of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子(kn z)）, Beijing opera and Kung fu. “It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University. The survey collected 2,047 questionaire

30、s from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart.第41页/共54页第四十一页，共55页。第42页/共54页第四十二页，共55页。 读写读写先读后写

31、The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（

32、孔子(kn z)）, Beijing opera and Kung fu.第43页/共54页第四十三页，共55页。“It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.第44页/共54页第四十四页，共55页。 The survey collected 2,047 questionaires

33、from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart.第45页/共54页第四十五页，共55页。第46页/共54页第四十六页，共55页。Think：以上的三段文

34、字和图之间是什么(shn me)关系？图表中的内容在文章(wnzhng)中体现了吗？要写吗？第47页/共54页第四十七页，共55页。第48页/共54页第四十八页，共55页。Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2 The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.第49页/共54页第四十九页，共55页。Q2 summary如何(rh)踩点 抓住主题句中心词理清逻辑关系不遗漏信息,但决不罗嗦有概括性思考(sko)，但决不画蛇添足简约(jinyu)而不简