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1、读后续写 The parents with their three-year-old son went to see a film. When they walked into the cinema, the attendant said to them: “ Youll have to go out if your son cries. But well refund(退款退款) you the tickets.” About half an hour later, the husband asked his wife, “ What do you think of the film?” “

2、Ive never seen such a boring film.” His wife answered, “Its not worth seeing.” “I dont think much of it, either.” The husband said, “Wake the child up and_.”let him cryWhat do you think is a good ending?阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was Christmas Day. Pappy was working alone fixing an old lanter

3、n in the backroom when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door. The bell, which produced a uniquely pleasant sound, had been in Pappys family for over a hundred years. He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop. Although the bell hung on the inside of th

4、e main door, Pappy had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not. Hearing the bell, he left the backroom to greet his customer. “And how can I help you, little lady?” Pappys voice was joyful. “Hello, sir.” The little girl spoke almost in a whisper. S

5、he looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes, and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special. Shyly she told him, “Id like to buy a present, sir.” “Well, lets see,” Pappy said, “who is this present for?” “My grandpa. Its for my grandpa. But I dont know what to get.” Pappy began to mak

6、e suggestions. “How about a pocket watch? Its in good condition.” The little girl didnt answer. She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door. She shook the door gently to ring the bell. Pappys face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement. “This is just right,” the li

7、ttle girl said. “Momma says grandpa loves music.” Just then, Pappys expression changed. Fearful of breaking the little girls heart, he told her, “Im sorry, Missy. Thats not for sale. Maybe your grandpa would like this little radio.” The girl looked at the radio, bowed her head, and sadly sighed, “No

8、, I dont think so.” In an effort to help her understand, Pappy told her that the bell had been his only companion, for the rest of his family were all gone now, except for his estranged (疏远的) daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a decade. With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up a

9、t him._ Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ringing. _ 2018年浙江温州六校协作年浙江温州六校协作体体 * use different structures（结构）（结构） * use transitional words （过渡）（过渡） * add some details （细节）（细节）1 * Predict all the possbile plot with the help of “PRS”strategyn * given two sentenc

10、es（段首语） * main plots of the passage（故事情节） Step3 Step3 polish（润色）（润色） Step 2 Step 2 draft（拟稿）（拟稿） Step 1 Step 1read( (阅读）阅读） when wherewhowhatA little girl was selecting _for her grandpa in pappys shop. However, she insist on buying _, which my pappy _ dearly.HowStep 1 Thorough ReadingPappyOne Christ

11、mas DayIn Pappys shop?A little girlexcited sadjoyful embarrasseda Christmas gifta bellvaluedPara 2 Problems:Later that evening when pappy was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ringing.Results:Solutions:Step 2 Creative PlottingPara 1 Problems: With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl look

12、ed up at him.Results:Solutions:Underlined words:When:Christmas DayWho: pappy, the little girl, grandpa,momma, daughterWhat：presentHow: sigh,specialTip 1Key Words Pappy may feel a sense of sympathy and went to comfort the little girl.Pappy had a deal with the girl. The girl got her dreamed bell. Tip

13、2 consistent logicPossible results/solutionTip 4 You can get your writing polished by using advanced phrases &structuresvivid verbsnecessary inner thoughts natural transitional wordsUnderline the differences and think about two questions: 1. What details can be added to enrich the outline?2. Wha

14、ts improved in the second edition?Tip 3 To enrich the plot, we can add_, _, _, _, etc. actionsemotions(looks)surroundingsdialoguesWhich group do you favor?-First,besides/plus/additionally/furthermore, whats more, - fortunately, unexpectedly, surprisingly, happily for him, Inspired by, Out of curiosi

15、ty/ Driven by curiosity, Apparently, needless to say, immediately, in an instant,insteadCircle out the differences .3.advanced phrases &structures1. vivid verbs2. inner thoughts(looks,surroundings,dialogues)4.proper transitional wordsStep 3 Polishing With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl

16、 looked up at him. She forced a smile, murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door. There was a dead silence in the shop.Suddenly Pappy thought of his daughter. Driven by a sense of sympathy, Pappy called out, “How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this, the little girl counted money in her p

17、urse-two dollars altogether. After thinking for what seems like a few seconds, Pappy announced, “Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day. It is two dollars that the bell costs exactly.”The child danced out with great joy the special bell held in her hand.What details can be added to enrich

18、 the outline?Tip 4 improvementTip 3 add details With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. She forced a smile, murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door. There was a dead silence in the shop. Suddenly Pappy thought of his daughter. Driven by a sense of sympathy, Pappy called out, “How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this, the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars altogether. After thinking for w