高中英语_应用文写作_求助信_导学案_带答案

1、求助信_导学案一、文体概述求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。注意语气 委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。通常包括三部分内容：二、常用语块(1)做某事有麻烦 have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth(2)给某人帮助 do sb a favor,-'give sb a hand(3)寻求帮助 ask for help，求ek help(4) 遇到一些问题 encounter some problems(5)面临困难 be faced with difficulties(6)，忙于做某事 be busy doing

2、sth be engaged in doing sth(7)急需/迫切需要in urgent need of(8)专业指导 professional guidance(9)学以致用putinto use(10)让某人失望 let sb dom(11)克服恐惧 overcome the fear(12)取得巨大的进步make great progress(13)渴望做某事 be anxious to do sth/lon, to do sth(14)提供一些有建设性的指导 offer some constructive guidance(15)因某事感激某人be grateful to sb f

3、or sth三、常用句式1 .开头(1)我写信想请您帮我一个忙。I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand./ Fm writing to ask for your help.(2)面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.2 .正文(3)我想知道你是否能为我推荐。wondering if you could lecommond to me.例我想知道你是否能为我推荐几首比赛用的诗。I'm wonderi

4、ng if you could lecommend some poems to me fbr the competition.(4)你能就给我一些建议吗？could you give me some tips on .?/ Would you please o徐r me some advice oil .?例我想知道你是否能为我推荐几首比赛用的诗。Could you give me some tips on th。basic skills of incitation?第2页/共5页(5)如果在方面有什么注意事项，请一定要告诉我。If theie aie any do's and don

5、'ts in teens of ，please do let me know.例如果在着装礼仪等方面有什么注意事项，请告诉我。If there are any do's and don'ts in terms of dressing manners and so on, please do let me know.3 .结束语(6)如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。I'd appreciate it if you could lend mn a hand/help me.(7)如果你能花点时间来看一下并做些必要的修改，我将不胜感激。I'd be very g

6、ratefill if you could take some time to go through it and make necessaiy changes.四、典题示例(2021年1月普通诉等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试)假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的 英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括：1 .说明比赛要求；2.请他推荐英文诗；3.请教朗诵技巧。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear George,I'm writing to ask for your help.Yours,Li Hua第一步：审题构思很关

7、键一、审题1 .确定体裁：本文为求助信2 .确定人称：第一人称3 .时态：一般现在时二、构思第一段：表明写信目的，即寻求帮助第二段：说明比赛要求，请他推荐英文诗并请教朗诵技巧。第三段：表达感谢，希望得到帮助 第二步：核心词汇想周全英文诗朗诵 比 赛 English Poetry Recitation Competition参赛者 competitors给我推荐几首诗 lecommend some poems to me与挑战和梦想相关的主题 related to the topics of challenges and dreams请在我的阅读技巧上给我一些指导，比如声调、情感和手势offer

8、 me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture第三步：由词扩句雏形现Para. 2说明比赛要求，请他推荐英文诗并请教朗诵技巧。第2页/共5页1 .我们学校下个月将举行英语诗歌朗诵比赛。An English Poetry Recitation Competition is going to b> held next xionth in our school.2 .我们参赛者被要求在3分钟内朗诵一首英文诗。We competitors are required to lo

9、cite an English poem within 3 minutes.3 .我想知道您是否可以为我推荐一些比赛用的诗。I am wondering if you could recommend some poems to me for the competition.4 .如果主题是关于挑战和梦想，那就更好了。It would be bettei if the topics ase related to challenges and dieams.5 .您能不能给我一些阅读技巧方面的指导，比如语气、情感和手势。W ould you bi kind enoiyh to offer me s

10、ome guidance on my leadin? skills such as the tone, the emotion and the Restuie?Para. 3表达感谢，希望得到帮助6 .如果您能为我提供帮助，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your eaily leply.第四步：过渡衔接连成篇逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇排序关系first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at f

11、irst; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; fbr one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand;finally递进关系what's more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what's worse; worse still;举例关系for example; for instance; like; su

12、ch as; as follows; take. as an example转折关系but; however; while; though; on the contrary因果关系because (of)； since; owing to; due to; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore归纳总结in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion; in general; in summary; on the whole; in brief并列关系and; too; as

13、well as; along with; together with; both. and not only. but also.One possible version：Dear George,I'm writing for your help.An English Poetiy Recitation Competition is going to be held next month in our school. We competitors are requked to recite an English poem within 3 minutes. Therefore, I a

14、m wondering if you could recommend some poems to me for the competition. And it would be better if the themes are related to challenges and dreams. Moreover, would you be kind enough to offer me some guidance on my reading skills such as the tone, the emotion and the gesture?Pd appreciate it if you

15、could lend me a hand. Looking fbnvard to your early teply.Yours,Li Hua五、课堂练习假定你是李华，下个月要参加新华外国语学校的入学英语面试，给外教Mr Chris写信请教，内 容包括：1 . 口语表达；2 .面试技巧；3 .注意事项。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：构思首段：表明写信目的一一请教入学英语面试技巧。主体段落：咨询口语表达、面试技巧以及着装建议。结尾：表达感谢，希望能够得到帮助。第二步：核心词汇入学英语面试 English admission intewiew语言流畅

16、language fluency急需你的专业指导 in urgent need of your professional guidance英语口语 ond English面试技巧 interview techniques着装礼仪 dressing manners第三步：由词扩句雏形现Para. 1表明写信目的一一请教入学英语面试技巧。1 .我是李华，您班上的一名学生。我写信是想咨询你关于我下个月参加新华外国语大学英语入学面 试的事。I'm Li Hua, a student in your class. I'm writing to consult you about my E

17、nglish admission interview of Xinhua Foieign Studies University next month.Para. 2咨询口语表达、面试技巧以及着装建议。2 .语言的流利程度对于这样的面试来说是非常重要的，所以我非常需要您对我的英语口语进行专业 的指导。Language fluency is of oital importance for such an interview、so I'm in urgent need of youi professional guidance in my oral English.3 .此外，任何关于面试技

18、巧的建设性建议我们都将非常感谢。Besides, any constructive advice on interview techniques will be highly appreciated.4 .最后，如果在着装礼仪等方面有什么注意事项，请务必告诉我。Finally, if theie aie any do's and don'ts in terms of dressing manners and so on, please do let me know.Para. 3表达感谢，希望能够得到帮助。5 .如果你能花点时间帮助我，我将非常感激。期待你的尽早回复。I wou

19、ld be gratefbl if you could take some time and help me with it. Looking fbrward to your earliest 【epiyOne possible version：Dear Mr Chris,I'm Li Hua, a student in your class. Pm writing to consult you about my English admission interview of Xinliua Foreign Studies University next month.Language f

20、luency is of vital importance for such ail interview, so I'm in urgent need of your professional guidance in my oral English. Besides, any constmctive advice on interview techniques will be liighly appreciated. Finally, if there are any do's and don'ts in tenns of dressing manners and so

21、 on, please do let me know.I would be grateful if you could take some time and help me with it. Looking fbnvard to your earliest reply.Sincerely,Li Hua六、课外作业假定你是学校英语社团负责人李华，计划组织英文视频配音比赛。给外教Mr Albert写信，请他 帮忙审定策划书，并就比赛的形式、内容等方面提供建议。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：配音dubbing核心词汇英语配音比赛 English dubbing competition这是我们第一次举办这样的活动 this is the 第st time thatheld such an activity我希望您能抽出时间告诉我您对这个i卜划的看法I hope you could spare some time to tell me your opinion on the plan在比赛的形式、材料的内容等方面给我们一些建议give us some advice on the fbrm of the competiti