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1、How to write a summary? 高考评分标准what should we pay attention to?Basic requirements:No 1st person, No copying, No details, No 1st person, No copying, No details, No comments, No comments, 1. No comments: 即不能有考生个人主观评论，即不能有考生个人主观评论， 如如I felt angry/admired/ashamed for this behaviour/phenomenon/social issu

2、e2. No copying ：不能抄袭原文不能抄袭原文3. No details：省略例子、具体描述，用概况语言省略例子、具体描述，用概况语言How to write a summary?一、一、summary的的阅读材料阅读材料分析分析styles of passagenarrationargumentationnarration with comments exposition新高考下的读写任务分析熟记熟记不同文体的概括不同文体的概括模板模板：1. 记叙文：记叙文： 夹叙夹议：夹叙夹议：2. 说明文：说明文：3. 议论文：议论文： 谁谁+ 做了什么事情做了什么事情 + 结果如何结果如何谁

3、谁+ 做了什么事情做了什么事情 + 结果如何结果如何 + 道理或看法道理或看法 现象现象+ 造成原因造成原因 + 解决措施或建议解决措施或建议？Argumentation(the topic (the topic sentences)sentences)(supporting (supporting sentences)sentences)(the purpose of (the purpose of the passage)the passage)二、 How to summarize an argumentation well?Methods:1. Find out the topic s

4、entences/key phrases2. Find out the supporting evidences or facts3. Find out the words or phrases that appear most frequently. Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the

5、whole day. so, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the mornin

6、g than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we

7、 will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it. Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years

8、ago, people thought that if we went bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. so, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually the best conditions. Many of us may h

9、ave the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. I f we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and ge

10、t ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot f

11、rom it. 1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea): getting up early/ a good habit/ of getting up early/ a good habit/ of great importancegreat importance2. Support for the opinion (supporting 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences)sentences)a better memorya healthier bodya better pr

12、eparation for the day3. conclusion/suggestion3. conclusion/suggestiona good habit/ benefit a lot0rganizing the languagesentence patterns: 1. The passage states that.2. According to the author/passage, it is of necessity to. 3. The passage stresses/highlights the significance of.For reference: The pa

13、ssage highlights the significance of getting up early in the morning. As a good habit, it benefits us a lot, enabling us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day. (36 words)Conclusion: Summarizing an argumentation: 议论文的写作模板：议论文的写作模板： 提出观点提出观点 + + 论证观点论证观点 （回答为什么）（回答

14、为什么）+ + 结论结论 The topic sentences/phrases the supporting sentencesorganize lauguagethe writers conclusion如何写得更有档次如何写得更有档次 1. 1. 卷面整洁卷面整洁，书写漂亮，提高印象分；，书写漂亮，提高印象分； 2. 2. 句式多样化句式多样化，显示较强语言功底；，显示较强语言功底； 3. 3. 使用高中阶段所学过的使用高中阶段所学过的高级语法高级语法，避，避免低级拼写错误；免低级拼写错误； 4. 4. 用好连词，如用好连词，如 while, despite, while, despit

15、e, instead of,rather than instead of,rather than 等。等。 5.5.。Appreciation 1. The passage gives us good advice by giving an example that it is like a house with too much furniture, thus we must learn to pick out and choose the materials we read because of the limitation of time and energy. 2.There is d

16、ifference between adults and children in their ways of choosing friends，children with common interest will become friends while adults hope to benefit each other when making friends. （包含同位语从句）（包含表对比关系的并列句, ,省略句）3.With the womens liberation movement carried out, American women now enjoy a better situ

17、ation in both their families and the society. What they have done /their contribution to the society proves that women deserve(值得) as much respect as men.4. The author mainly discusses how important punctuality is and whatever we do，we shall get rid of being late, for it usually causes many problems

18、. (包含独立主格，主从和宾从)（包含宾语从句）Practice makes perfect! 阅读下面短文，然后以约30个词概括短文的要点： Hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate i

19、ncreases by 1%, the death rate decrease correspondingly by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to death. Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to d

20、o. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective (集体的) activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects m

21、an spiritually and makes him likely to disease. Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyongd words.Practice makes perfect! 阅

22、读下面短文，然后以约30个词概括短文的要点： Hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate decrease correspon

23、dingly by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to heath. Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy.

24、Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective (集体的) activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease. B

25、esides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyongd words.Write the summary of the passage according to the following informationFor reference: The auther argues that work is beneficial to peoples health, because it can rid one of loneliness as well as make one feel fruitful and proud of himself, which always contributes to physical and mental health. (36 words)More exercises 1. To his surpris