雅思作文——柱状图和表格培训讲学

1、n雅思作文雅思作文柱状图和表格柱状图和表格 Bar Chart (Bar Chart (柱状图柱状图) )nThe bar graph shows the average science test scores of students in Grade 8 in relation to the hours they spend watching television.n Overall, the students who watch less television have higher scores, and the average test score decreases as numbe

2、r of viewing hours increases. nThe highest score of 80 is for students who usually watch one hour or less of television a day. nThe next highest score is approximately 79. This is for students who average two hours of television viewing. nStudents who watch no television and students who watch about

3、 3 hours of television per day have a score of about 76.nThe lowest score approximately 65 is for students who view six or more hours of television daily. Model Model nThe bar chart shows the respective amounts of money in thousands of dollars spent on different types of advertising by two companies

4、- Acme and Famous.n Overall, Acme spent more on advertising than Famous. nBoth companies spent the most money on television promotion, with Acme spending $250,000 while Famous spent $200,000. nAcme spent the second highest amount on newspaper advertising, at approximately $125,000, whereas Famous sp

5、ent only about $75,000 on this type. nIn contrast, Famous spent twice as much on the Internet as Acme, at $100,000 and $50,000 respectively. nBoth companies spent the least money on billboard promotions, at about $25,000 each. nAnalysis: nTS+分类对比两公司分类对比两公司 (top1+top2+top3+bottom)n使用比较级使用比较级B. Table

6、1: Study AbroadChina IndiaJapanBrazilTotal35,00015,0006,0002,00058,00022,00016,0004,0008,00050,000Model Paragraph 1. Model Paragraph 1. nThe table illustrates the number of students from four different countries who attended tertiary institutions in a western country in 2000 and 2005. noverall, the

7、number of international students dropped slightly over this five year period, nand in particular there was a significant decrease in numbers from China, although it still remained the largest group. nThere was a four fold rise in Brazilian student enrolments. Model Paragraph 2. Model Paragraph 2. nI

8、n 2000, the number of students who came from China, at 35,000, was more than twice the number of Indian students, at 15,000. small numbers came from Japan and Brazil, at 6,000 and 2,000 respectively. nIn 2005, the proportion of students changed considerably. Chinese student numbers decreased to 22,0

9、00, but there was a dramatic increase in the number of Brazilian students, which went from 2,000 to 8,000. Indian student numbers stayed mostly unchanged, at 16,000 and there was a small decrease in the number of Japanese students, from 6,000 in 2000 to 4,000 in 2005.Analysis:分时间论述四国分时间论述四国, , 进行比较进

10、行比较 ( (横向和纵向横向和纵向) )Different Ethnic Groups Making up the Population of Atlantis City over Two Decades YearS. E. AsianIndianCaucasianPolynesianTotal Population198811,00012%2,0002%60,00068%16,00018%89,000199818,00016%2,5002%65,00059%25,00023%110,500200835,00023%8,5006%72,00047%37,00024%152,000Model P

11、aragraph 1. Model Paragraph 1. nThe table shows the changes in ethnic population groups in Atlantis City over a twenty year period. nOverall, the city population grew significantly and all ethnic groups grew in size, but the percentages of each group changed considerably. nAnalysis:nTopic + overview

12、 (看看total 的变化的变化)Model Paragraph 2. Model Paragraph 2. nThere was a massive reduction in the percentage of Caucasians, which decreased by about a third, from 68% in 1988, to 59% in 1998 and 47% in 2008, although their numbers increased from 60,000 to 72,000. nThe Indian population stayed relatively

13、stable from the first decade and then more than trebled from 2,500 to 8,500, in the decade from 1998 to 2008, even though it remained the smallest group in the city. nThe Polynesians and South East Asians had a similar growth pattern, increasing from 18 and 12 percent respectively in 1988 to 24% and

14、 23% of the population in 2008, although the South East Asian population, which grew from 11,000 in 1988 to 35,000 in 2008, had a greater percentage increase.nAnalysis:n以个国为标准根据年代的变化分析以个国为标准根据年代的变化分析, 增加增加/ 减少减少/ 不变不变, 国家之间的联系国家之间的联系nThe ice cream making process has five key stages. In the first sta

15、ge, sugar, cream and milk are mixed together in a 3,000 gallon vat to make the basic ice cream mix. In stage two, this mix is pasteurized, or heated to 70 degrees centigrade for 20 seconds, to kill any bacteria. After that, flavour such as chocolate, vanilla or strawberry is added and mixed using steel blades. In the fourth stage, the mix is frozen in a tube to -1