2020届高考英语书面表达“读后续写”高三模拟练习(三)写作指导和解读(含范文)

1、2020届高考英语书面表达“读后续写”高三模拟练习（三） 写作指导与解读一、续写原题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故 事。I stood under the mistletoe （榭寄生）.The green, leafyclusters（ 团，簇）spotted with waxy-white berries hung from thebranches of every apple tree. That's the same stuff they sell inthe stores for Christmas decorations, I said to my

2、self. Why can'tI sell mistletoe too? It would be a perfect way to earn money to buy a Christmas gift for my brother, Derek.I took a few steps back, ran, leaped, and reached as high asI could. But the lowest mistletoe cluster was too high. Frustrated,I had started for home, when something strange

3、 caught my eye. Atthe edge of the apple orchard （果园）,one tree stood bare. All the mistletoe had fallen off the branches . Delighted, I carefully picked out the best clusters and put them in my lunch box. Whenit was full,I rushed across the cornfield to go home.I entered the side door, listening. Yes

4、, a guitar was playing.I pounded on the door. The guitar stopped. A moment later the doorwas open. My brother stood there wearing his brown leather jacket.Where are you going?" I asked. "None of your business," he muttered, sailing past me. It wasn't easy sharing that small bedroo

5、m with my older brother.With Derek out of the room, I emptied the contents of my lunchbox onto my bed. As I looked for something to put the mistletoe in, I saw Derek's guitar on his bed, wrapped in an old towel. That guitar was the only beautiful thing Derek owned, and I knew what to buy with th

6、e mistletoe money: a case for that guitar. Even if Derek was bad-tempered sometimes, he was still my brother, and I loved him.Obviously I needed more mistletoe. The next day, I cut through theapple orchard again. A surprise awaited me two more trees were bare, and more mistletoe! I came across the o

7、rchard owner who said he paid a guy to cut all that mistletoe out of his apple trees.He was happy I collected the mistletoe. As I raced for home, I sawDerek, in his leather jacket, was crossing the cornfield. But he ignored me.That night I picked more mistletoe. With all mistletoe sold out, I hurrie

8、d over to the music store. In the front display window lay a row of wooden recorders . I had learned to play a plastic one at school, and I wanted one of those wooden ones. Each year that was at the top of my Christmas list. But each year there wasn'tenough money.Paragraph 1 : I was calculating

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19、 guitar case for my older brother, Derek.J 2. However, eagerness to own a wooden recorder built inside me.J 3. I couldn't help but rush into the store.J 4. To myjoy, the moneyis just enough for meto buy a recorder, and I paid for it without a second thought.J 5. The instant I raced out with the

20、recorder, I realized what I had done.J 6. I stood there, deeply ashamed of my selfish choice.J 7. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for a long time,I thought to myself, "I have to return to the orchard to earn enough money."J Paragraph 2 : I reached the orchard again, overhearing a f

21、amiliar voice talking with the orchard owner.J 1. Sure enough, it was my brother.J 2. "How can you let another guy cut the mistletoe from the branches?" he exclaimed angrily. "I need money to buy a gift for my younger brother!"J 3. But the orchard owner turned around and left, re

22、fusing to respond to any complaint.J 4. It was not until then that I figured out how muchmybrother loved me.J 5. Hiding behind an apple tree, I didn't dare to tell him what had happened.J 6. Over the next few days, I secretly went to the apple orchard and finally my hard work paid off.J 7. A few

23、 days before Christmas, when I gave money to mybrother and told him everything, he hugged me tightly.Paragraph 1 : I was calculating how much more money I'd need to buy a recorder when I saw the towers of guitar cases in the back of the store. I was torn between a recorder for myself and a guita

24、r case for my older brother, Derek. However, eagerness to own a wooden recorder built inside me. I couldn't help but rush into the store. To my joy, the money is just enough for me to buy a recorder, and I paidfor it without a second thought. The instantI raced out with the recorder, I realized what I had done. I stoodthere, deeply ashamed of my selfish choice. Having wanderedaimlessly in the street for a long time, I t