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1、第一页，共30页。010203第二页，共30页。01第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（0-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。第三页，共30页。021、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉。3、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划

2、掉即可。 eg:He can speker speak English very well.第四页，共30页。第五页，共30页。第六页，共30页。第七页，共30页。第八页，共30页。第九页，共30页。第十页，共30页。03第十一页，共30页。04审列整连美第十二页，共30页。My room写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间，注意用到房间里的物品和位置，短文不少于40个单词 第十三页，共30页。My room。审第十四页，共30页。写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间，注意用到房间里的物品和位置，短文不少于40个单词 审字数要求文章体裁主题文章内容第十五页，共30页。My room。列第十六页，共30

3、页。My roomTalk in your group介词或介词短语:on ，Next to，Above，In front of关键句型：There be，I have，you can see列in 第十七页，共30页。My room将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯整第十八页，共30页。My room1，There is a big bed in my room 2,Above my bed is a map of China 3,Next to my bed is my bed stand4, I have a book case too, many books a

4、re on it. 5, In front of the case, you can see my desk. 整第十九页，共30页。My room恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。连第二十页，共30页。My roomThere is a big bed in my room. Above my bed is a map of China. Next to my bed is my bed stand. I have a bookcase ，and many books are on it. In front of the case, it is my desk. On t

5、he desk, there is a fish tank, some fish are in it. There is also a globe on the desk .连第二十一页，共30页。My room修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。美第二十二页，共30页。My roomMy RoomThis is my room. There is a big bed in my room. Above my bed is a map of China. China is my Motherland. Next to my bed is my bed s

6、tand. I have a book case ，many books are on it. In front of the case, it is my desk. On the desk, there is a fish tank, some fish are in it. I like them very much. There is also a globe on the desk .This is my room. Do you like this room?美第二十三页，共30页。My RoomThis is my room. There is a big bed in my r

7、oom. Above my bed is a map of China. China is my Motherland. Next to my bed is my bed stand. I have a book case ，many books are on it. In front of the case, it is my desk. On the desk, there is a fish tank, some fish are in it. I like them very much. There is also a globe on the desk .This is my roo

8、m. Do you like this room?第二十四页，共30页。第二十五页，共30页。英语书面表达写作技巧回顾审列整连美第二十六页，共30页。第二十七页，共30页。Dear Mary, This is a photo of my room. There is a big bed in my room. Next to the bed ,you can see a bookcase .There are some things in it. I have a lot of sports collection. I have three baseballs, two basketballs and a ping-pong bat. I love spo