初中英语作文指导

1、初中英语作文指导英语作文指导要想在测试有限的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的书面表达,须掌握熟练的解题技巧,把握几个解题关键,这里介绍一种五步写作法.1.细心审题审题,即考生动笔前通过仔细阅读试题,明确目的要求.通过审题可以到达：(1)明确体裁.书面表达虽然重在内容,但格式也不能无视.(2)确定内容.弄清题目设置的情景或提供的要点,便能紧扣题意,定什么不写什么,做到心中有数,预防随心所欲,文不对题.(3)确定人称.弄清命题者要求考生用什么人称.(4)确定时态语态.时态语态的准确运用,亦是判断书面表达好坏的一条重要标准.一般说来,说明文、议论文多用一般现在时,记日记多用一般过去时,记叙文多用一般过去时和

2、过去进行时.通过审题,明确体裁,知道事情发生的时间,对确定时态起着关键作用.2 .理顺要点根据考纲要求,漏写或没写清要点均要失分.理顺要点,是预防多写、漏写、乱写,保证内容完整的行之有效的方法,有的书面表达要点并非按事件发生顺序提供,考生须通过严密的构思加以条理化,最好在写作前将试题中的要点用笔标出,然后按事件先后或各要点之间的内在联系排列好.3 .组织句子将理顺的要点逐句表达出来,这是书面表达的关键的一步.完成这个步骤要注意：(1)书面表达重在达意,不要简单直译,而要用自己最有把握的短语或句型将意思完整表达出来,切忌使用冷僻词语,切忌用汉语句型去套用英语,乃至写出大量汉式英语.(2)如果碰上

3、汉语提示中一时找不着相对应的英语词语或句型,不要轻易放弃,要开动脑筋,学会用内容相近的句子来表达.(3)尽可能写结构简单的句子,少用自己尚无把握的复合句.(4)选择正确的人称、时态、语态,注意冠词、单复数、大小写、标题等.上述几点在组织句子时假设能高度重视,那么错误便可大大减少.4 .串句成篇这个过程就是将写好的句子连贯地组织起来,形成短文.串句成篇,绝不是将一句话一句话简单地排在一起,要注意上下句的逻辑关系,必要时使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语.有的书面表达还可以分段,但段与段之间要过渡自然.假设词数少于题目要求,可适当增加一些与内容相关的句子；假设词数多于题目要求

4、,也可考虑将能够合并的句子合并起来.5 .检查修改文章草稿写成后,默读一至两遍,检查修改,看文章是否对题,格式是否正确,内容是否完整,文句有无语病,行文是否连贯,拼写是否错误,词数是否恰当.有的书面表达题要求考生自拟标题,考生这时要注意不要丢掉标题,还要注意标题首字母的大写(标题中实词那么大写首字母,虚词那么不必大写)；如命题者不要求考生自拟标题的那么不必拟标题,以免画蛇添足.经过检查修改后,再认真誉写,力求卷面整洁.这样经过周密思考、按步骤写出来的文章,比起毫无方案、信手拈来的文章质量肯定要好得多.书面表达.(15分)暑假生活即将开始,小明打算提升他的英语成绩,但不知该如何去做,请把你的秘诀

5、告诉他好吗?timportantthingisthemethodoflearning.It'snotverydifficulttolearnEnglish.ButthemosFirstly,youcanjoinanEnglishclub.Thereyoucanpracticespeakingwithothers.Andyoucanalsomeetalotofnewfriends.Secondly,youcandomorelisteninginthemorning,listentothetapesandrepeatafterit.Inthisway,youcanimproveyourli

6、stening.Thirdly,youcanfindapen-pal,andwritetohimasoftenaspossible,yourwritingskillmustbeimproved.Allinall,Ithinkthemostimportantthingistobeconfident.书面表达.15分请以HaveyoueverbeentotheGreatWall?为题写一篇记述文.内容提示如下：1、长城的景色及地理位置2、游长城的感受3、文章以设问句HaveyoueverbeentotheGreatWall?开头.HaveyoueverbeentotheGreatWall?OK,I

7、havebeenthereonce.Thatwasasunnyday,myfriendsandItookabustotheGreatWall.Whenwegotthefootofit,wesawalotofvisitors.Webegantoclimbthewall.Atthistimewesawthebeautifulscenery,thewallislikeahugedragon.theGreatWallisfamousasitsoldwallsintheworld.It'snotfarfromthecityofBeijing.It'ssaidthatitisoneofth

8、esevenwondersintheworld.It'sverylong,themostfamouswallisBadalingWall,I'mproudthatIgottothetopofthewall.Thoughwewerealltired,wefeltveryhappy.书面表达1假设你的新笔友叫Mikeo请你给他写一封回信,介绍你的情况.信的内容必须包括：你的姓名,年龄,所就读的学校,年级、班级,爱好,最喜欢的学科及理由,最喜欢的影片及理由等.信的内容不得少于十句话.信的开头和结尾已给出.January12th,.2002DearMike,Thanksforyourl

9、etter.NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Yours,BobJanuary12th,2002DearMike,Thanksforyourletter,NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Mynameisxx.I'mtwelve.IstudyatBeiDaResourceMiddleSchool,I'minclassFourGradeOne.MyfavoritesubjectisscienceandIalsoLikegeography.Becausetheyarevery

10、importantanduseful.ILikeplayingtheviolin.Ilikeanactionmovie.Becauseitisexciting.Whataboutyou?Doyoulikeanactionmovie?pleasewritetotellmesoon.书面表达2请你仔细阅读下面的招聘广告.lBoysandgirlsaged12-15.lAreyougoodwithchildren?lHappykidswintercampNeedshelpwith:lsportsmusiccomputerslComeandjoinus!Sendyourpersonal(个人infor

11、mationtohkwc163假设你是李平想要应聘,请你根据招聘广告中的要求,在表格空白处至少填出两项你所能做的事情.并根据表格中的所有信息,发一封e-mail,介绍你的个人情况、兴趣爱好及水平.字数4060.信的开头、结尾已给出NamageASchoolLikean11LiPing31No.3MiddleSchoolReading,computers,PlayingbasketballDearsir,IwanttojoinyourWinterCamptohelpthechildrenwithsportsandmusic.MyIthinkIcanbegoodwiththechildrenand

12、Ihopetogetyourlettersoon.Yours,LiPingDearsir,IwanttojoinyourWinterCamptohelpthechildrenwithsportsandmusic.MynameisLiPingIamthirteen(yearsold).Istudy/amastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.Ilikereadingandplayingbasketball.Ilikecomputers,too.Icanplayfootballwell.IcanstagmanyEnglishsongs,AndIcandanceandswim.Ican

13、surftheInternetandsende-mails.IthinkIcanbegoodwiththechildrenandIhopetogetyourlettersoon.Yours,LiPing(书面表达3)根据提示,请以“SchoolRules为题,写一篇短文或对话提示：每所学校都有规章制度,下面是你们学校的一些规章制度,请你向一位新生Mary作一下介绍.内容包括：1 .上课不能迟到.2 .教室要保持(keep)干净和安静.3 .见到老师要问好.greet4 .不允许在教室里吃东西.5 .不许在课堂上听音乐,玩游戏.6 .不要损害花草树木.pickflowers;climbtrees

14、SchoolRulesWelcometoourschool,Mary.Herearesomeofourschoolrules.Letmetellyou:Wecan'tarrivelateforclass.Wecan'ttalkloudlyinclass.Wehavetobequietinclass,andwehavetokeepourclassclean.Whenwemeettheteachersontheway,wemustgreetthem.Wecan'teatordrinkintheclassroom.Butwecaneatoutside.Wecan'tl

15、istentomusicorplaygamesinclass,either.Wecan'tpickflowersorclimbtrees.书面表达4根据以下中英文提示写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的一段话.不少于50个字Jim是个中学生,学习努力,平时喜欢上网冲浪和看英语书.他每周锻炼一至两次,饮食习惯良好,天天步行上学,身体健康.提示词：Internet,onceortwice,eatinghabit,hardly,junkfood,healthyJimisahighschoolstudent.Heworkshardatschool.HeusuallylikessurfingtheInter

16、netandreadingEnglishbooks.Heexercisesonceortwiceaweek.Hehasgoodeatinghabits.Hehardlyevereatsjunkfood.Everydayhegoestoschoolonfoot.Soheisveryhealthy.书面表达5根据提示写一封6080字的信.Tom邀请LiPing参加他这周日的生日宴会,但LiPing的父母出差要到下个月回来,奶奶又卧病在床,需要人照顾.再说英语测试即将来临,因此,无法前去参加生日宴会.LiPing感到很抱歉,只好写信辞谢.DearTom,Thankyouverymuchforinvi

17、tingmetoyourbirthdayparty.I'dlovetogobutIcan't.Myparent.FromLiPingDearTom,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourbirthdayparty.I'dlovetogobutIcan't.Myparentsareoutonbusiness.Theyarecomingbacknextmonth.AndnowIhavetolookaftermygrandmabecausesheisillinbed.AndIalsoneedtostudyformycomingEngli

18、shexam.I'mverysorrybutIcan'tgotoyourparty.Thankyouforaskingme.Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.书面表达6请用所给资料写一篇短文.Name:LiBinDateofbirth:September12th,19901996:startedtolearnEnglish1999:startedtoplaybasketball2002:jointheschoolboys'basketballteam2003:winthefirstprizeofEnglishSpeechContestatschoolLi

19、Binismygoodfriend.Hewasbornonthe12thofSeptember,1990.HismotherisanEnglishteacher.SohestartedtolearnEnglishwhenhewassix.Hestartedtoplaybasketballattheageofnine.Heplayedwellandhejoinedtheschoolboys'basketballteamin2002.LastyearhewonthefirstprizeoftheEnglishSpeechContestatschool.书面表达7根据以下班级活动调查表,用英

20、语写一篇文章.Class12,Grade8:ActivitySurveyActivityEveryDayTwiceaWeekFourTimesaWeekWatchTV60%20%20%HaveSports10%20%70%Dohomework100%0%0%Allstudents=100%Moststudents=51环99%Somestudents=1%50%Nostudents=0%HerearetheresultsofthestudentactivitysurveyinClass12,Grade8.MoststudentswatchTVeveryday.Somestudentswatch

21、TVtwiceaweek.SomestudentswatchTVfourtimesaweek.Somestudentshavesportseveryday.Somestudentshavesportstwiceaweek.Moststudentshavesportsfourtimesaweek.Allthestudentsdohomeworkeveryday.Nostudentsdohomeworktwiceorfourtimesaweek.书面表达8根据以下第三中学八年级3班学生上学方式的调查表,用英语写一篇短文.不少于70个单词.许俊语辅导严iI+经验=好成绩！上

22、学方式BusWalkingBikeCar学生人数1510250TherearefiftystudentsinClass1,Grade8atYuyingMiddleSchool.Everydaytheygotoschoolindifferentways.Fifteenstudentstakebusesbecausetheylivefarfromtheschool.Tenstudentswalk.Theythinkwalkingisgoodfortheirhealthandtheyliveneartheschool.Twenty-fivestudentsridetheirbikestoschool

23、becausetheylikeridingbikesverymuchandtheirhomesarenotveryfarfromtheschool.Noonegoestoschoolbycar(书面表达9)一些英国朋友要来参加你们班举行的英语晚会.作为主持人,你需要用英语准备一份60-80个词的欢送辞.包括以下英文提示的内容(开头已给出)：1. thenumberofstudents(boys32,girls28)2. WhatdoyouthinkofEnglish?3. HowdoyoulearnEnglishinyourfreetime(magazines,TV,radio,etc)?4.

24、 YourEnglishprograms(plays,songs,etc).5. ending(结束语)Goodevening!Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoourclassandwelcometoourEnglishEvening.Firstofall,letmesayafewwordsaboutourclass.Goodevening!Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoourclassandwelcometoourEnglishEvening.Firstofall,letmesayafewwordsaboutourclass.Thereare

25、60studentsinourclass.32ofusareboysandtheothersaregirls.MostofuslikeEnglishandstudyhardatit.InourfreetimeweoftenreadEnglishbooks,newspapersandmagazines.SometimeswelearnEnglishontheradioandsometimesonTV.Thiseveningyou'llenjoysomeshortplays,songs,dancesandsoonbyourclassmates.Ihopeyou'lllikethes

26、eprogramsandhaveagoodtime.Thankyou!(书面表达10)请你写一篇制作玉米花(popcorn)的小短文.注意使用first,next,then,finally等表示过程的词.不少于50个词.HowtomakepopcornIlikepopcornverymuch.Ilearnedfrommymotherhowtomakepopcorn.Nowletmeshowyoutheways.Firstyouputthepopcornintothepopper.Next,turnonthepopper.Waitforseveralminutes.Thenyoupourthep

27、opcornintothebowl.Andputsaltonthepopcorn.Finallyyoucaneatthepopcorn.书面表达11根据以下情况写一篇短文介绍你的这位笔友李华,英文名叫Tony,是第一中学一年级二班的学生.他出生于1989年8月12日.他的出生地在广东深圳.他今年13岁,爱好音乐和篮球.他喜欢英语,爱玩电脑游戏.他经常放学后与同学打篮球.B写短文介绍,开头已给出Ihaveagoodpenpal.Letmetellyousomethingabouthim.Ihaveagoodpenfriend.Letmetellyousomethingabouthim.Hisna

28、meisLiHua.HehasanEnglishname.ItisTony.HeisamiddleschoolstudentinClassTwo,GradeOneofNo.1MiddleSchool.Heis13yearsoldnow.HewasborninShenzhen,Guangdong.HisbirthdayisAugustthetwentieth.Helikesplayingbasketballandlisteningtomusic.Heoftenplaysbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.HisfavouritesubjectisEngl

29、ishandhelikesplayingcomputergamesbest.Iliketowritetohim.Heismygoodfriend.书面表达请你以校办公室的名义用英语发一那么Noticeo告知初二学生明天将去四个地方作调查,考前须知写在提示里,题目：Notice.写作提示：1 .visitfourplaces2 .tomorrow,leaveafterbreakfastat8:003 .lunchattheplaceofvisit4 ebackintheafternoon5 .fourgroups,eachgrouptoaplace6 .eachclassagroup,saywh

30、ichplaceyouwanttovisit,thentelltheofficeNoticeAllthestudentsinGradeTwowillvisitfourplacestomorrow.Youwillleaveschoolafterbreakfastat8o'clock.Lunchwillbeattheplaceofvisit.Allmustcomebackintheafternoon.Eachclasswillbeagroup.There'llbefourgroupstogether.Eachgroupwillvisitaplace.Pleasetellthesch

31、oolofficewhichplaceyouwanttovisit.SchoolOfficeinNo.14MiddleSchoolMay16th,2005书面表达你和你的好朋友Jean发生了争执,在自我反省过后,你觉得有必要给她写一封信向她抱歉,并向她提一些意见.请就此向她发一封e-mail表示你的诚意,60词以上.DearJean,1.Iamsorrytoarguewithyouseveraldaysago.Wehaven'ttalkedwitheachotherthesedays.Youaremybestfriend,aren'tyou?FewdaysagowhenIhea

32、rdyoulostmylovelybook,Iwasreallymad,soIarguedwithyou,andsaidthatIcouldnotbeyourfriendfromthenon.Later,Ididn'tsleepwellthosedays.Ialwaysrememberedalotoffunwehad.SoIdecidedtowritealettertosaysorrytoyou.Ialsothinkyoushouldbecarefulandtakegoodcareofyourthings.Let'sbebestfriendsagain,OK?书面表达请你谈谈在

33、本学期有何打算或方案,就此写一篇短文,题目自拟,词数80左右.ThistermIshouldstudyharder.Iamgoodatmath,physicsandsciencelessons.MyEnglishisnotgood.IthinkIshouldlearnfrommyfriendNari.HisEnglishisgood.Perhapshewouldliketohelpme.Teachersaid,mycompositionswerenotgood.SoIshouldreadmoreusefulbooksafterclass.IbelieveIwilldowellinEnglish

34、.Ontheotherway,Ishoulddomoreexercise,thiswillmakemestrong.Ilikeplayingballgames.AfterclassIshouldmakemorefriends,becausethemorewearetogether,thehappierweare.Yoursever,Julia书面表达假设彳叫HanMeimei,现在青州一中上学.你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会.请你用英语写一封信给Mary要点如下：1 .你很抱歉,不能去.2 .你母亲病了,医生叫她卧床几日,你要照顾母亲.3 .谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片,你很喜欢,将它放在书桌上

35、.No.1MiddleSchoolQingzhouMarch8,2003DearMary,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourparty.ButIamverysorryIcan'tcome.Mymotherisill.Thedoctoraskshertostayinbedforseveraldays.Ihavetotakecareofmymother.Ilikeitverymuch.IamThankyouverymuchforsendingmesuchabeautifulpostcardgoingtoputitonmydesk.CouldIhearfr

36、omyousoon?Givemybestwishestoyourfamily.Yours,(书面表达)你有集邮(collectstamps)的爱好吗？请谈谈你集邮的历史.如果没有,也可以谈谈你别的爱好,以此为内容写一篇60词左右的短文.Iliketocollectmanythings,suchasnicestones,namesofmovies,books,toys,photosoffamouspeople.ButIlikecollectingstampsbest.Ihavebeencollectingstampsforfiveyears.WhenIwasveryyoung,myunclese

37、ntmeastampfromAustralia.Iloveditatonce.SincethenItriedtocollectstampsandfellinlovewithit.Ihavemorethanonehundredstamps.Someweresentbymyfriends,somewerecollectedbymyself;somewerefromfoiregncountries,somewereChinese.Ilikethem.Often,Itakethemoutandshowthemtomyfriends.(书面表达)Kelly今天生日,你准备为她准备一次surprisepa

38、rty,并邀请你的朋友参加,并且还准备了一顿specialmeal.请用英语介绍你的准备情况及邀请的客人.需要用到的单词及短语：invite,ready,present,laugh,haveagoodtimeTodayisKelly'sbirthday.Sheismybestfriend.I'mgoingtohaveasurprisepartyforherinmyhouse.IinvitedLeina,Sally,Macia,andmanyotherfriends.Allofthemareteenagers.Leinapromisedtobringsomedrinks.Sallywillbringsomesnacks.Davidsaidhewouldbringsomeflowersandpictures.Iboughtabigcakeandapresentforher.Iamgoingtogetreadyforaspecialmeal.Iboughthumburgers,Frenchfries,andImadesomesalad.Kellylikeshamburgersandfruitsalad.Macialikescak