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1、书面表达书面表达在平时紧张的高中生活中，你发现许多同学都在平时紧张的高中生活中，你发现许多同学都变得寡言少语，很少主动与他人沟通合作。请变得寡言少语，很少主动与他人沟通合作。请你用英语写一篇你用英语写一篇100120词的演讲稿。内容词的演讲稿。内容包含以下两个方面：包含以下两个方面：1.与他人合作的益处与他人合作的益处 2.怎样成为一个好的合作怎样成为一个好的合作者者 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯重视重视小小错错 少丢少丢冤枉分冤枉分 1.Dont be sensitively when your classmates said something what you

2、 dont like. 2.Many students become silence. 3.These do harm to we/our students. 4.It is obvious that they lack of awareness of cooperation. 5.How to be a excellent cooperater重视重视小小错错 少丢少丢冤枉分冤枉分 6. It is a importance way to accumulate social experience. 7. Devote your time and energy to solve the pro

3、blem. 8. They ignore cooperate with others. 9.To a certain extent, the busy work contributes to our are lack of cooperation. 10.So I want to tell you what should we do.重视重视小小错错 少丢少丢冤枉分冤枉分 11.Cooperation is the mother of the success. 12. For one thing, cooperate with others will improve your learning

4、 efficient. 13.Not only it gives us relaxation , but also it promoted our friendship. 14. Seldom have they communicate with others. 15.It can built our friendship. 16.They are more pay attention to the study.重视重视小小错错 少丢少丢冤枉分冤枉分 17. Communicate with others can get you relaxed. 18. Only cooperate with

5、 others can we solve problems easier. 19. As the pressure of high school life increasing, many 20. The phenomena is awful. 21.Our relationship will be more stronger.重视重视小小错错 少丢少丢冤枉分冤枉分 22. They are concerned about texts. 23. Give them confident. 24. We senior high school students feeling nervous and

6、 have stressed. 25. Cooperation will benefit for us.重视重视美美语语 跳出跳出大众分大众分 试用高级词语代替划线部分试用高级词语代替划线部分1.We are becoming more hardworking.2.Finally we can solve the problem.3. As a result, we should communicate more.4.We should pay more attention to cooperation.5.Youshould cooperate with others very often.

7、6.We often take part in all kinds of activities.7.Developing a good cooperation between students is important.试用复杂句式翻译句子试用复杂句式翻译句子 1.对人礼貌是必须的，这有助于进一步合作。对人礼貌是必须的，这有助于进一步合作。（动名词，定语从句）（动名词，定语从句） 2.只有通过沟通交流，人们才能合作的更好（倒只有通过沟通交流，人们才能合作的更好（倒装句）装句） 3.就是你的态度将决定你的未来（强调句）就是你的态度将决定你的未来（强调句） 4.如果同学们都不互相交流，那将是一个可怕的如果同学们都不互相交流，那将是一个可怕的班级氛围（虚拟语气）班级氛围（虚拟语气） 5.我建议我们多举行一些活动（同位语从句）我建议我们多举行一些活动（同位语从句） 6.我想要强调的是每个人应该多倾听（主语从句我想要强调的是每个人应该多倾听（主语从句表语从句）表语从句）书面表达书面表达 假如你是李华，你的网友假如你是李华，你的网友Tony 给你发来一给你发来一封邮件说距离高考的时间越来越来了，他封邮件说距离高考的时间越来越来了，他却感到焦虑不安，有时候会失眠。请以却感到焦虑不安，有时候会失眠。请以H