实例讲解托福高分作文的写作技巧.doc

1、实例讲解托福高分作文的写作技巧言简朴实原那么是行文主张不写啰嗦或绚丽的字眼(flowery or wordy)，一句能用两个字，绝不多加一个。例如：At this point in time, we should pull together for our goal.(如今我们应该为我们的目的团结一致)这句话中At this point in time表示如今，我们完全可以用now来代替。Despite the fact that my English is not very good, I am not discouraged.(虽然我的英语不好，但我不灰心。)这句话中despite the

2、 fact tha t= although = though, 因此我们完全可以改成Although my English is not very good, I am not discouraged.In the majority of cases, he likes to ride bike to the offe.(他通常喜欢骑单车到办公室)。很简单的一句话，完全可以写成 He usually likes to ride bike to the offe.平时我们所说的用词多样化和地道并不是表达在这些时间副词或者是完全可以简化的啰嗦句型上，而是指实用性极强的词如动词和形容词，比方：Ori

3、nal: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social eperience and help you to understand other peoples feelings and learn to be kind.Revised: Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrh your social eperience and help you to understand other peoples feelings and learn to be considerate.

4、add,kind表达的含义都比拟广泛。add可以指数量上的增加，也可以指程度的加强，对于丰富经历、增加知识这个意思，用enrh会使表达更准确。kind从字面意义上讲是好的、仁慈的，用kind来形容人无法详细地表现出一个人的性格特征到底怎样，原句中是想表达考虑周到、体贴入微的特点，要准确表达这个含义应选择considerate。另外，我们常见的一些负担用词表如今句意的理解上，比方：He has had many years of (actual) eperience in business.(他有多年经商的经历) actual是多余的，因为eperience已经有actual的意味了。We as

5、sembled (together) all the parts for our radio.(我们装好收音机的零件)assemble本身就有together的意思，因此together是多余的。此外还有，in reference to=about; draw to close=end; at an early date=soon等。总是，在托福的写作过程中，大家始终明确准确不代表负担，能吸引阅卷人注意的内容，不一定是冗长的句子和高难的词汇。托福写作要防止9种开头方式本文为大家整理了托福写作备考之需要防止的开头方式，便于考生托福备考。1、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式废话连篇典型失败案例： 1-

6、Should college students beallowed to get marriedThis is very interesting.Im very interestedin talking about this .Because Im also a collegestudent and Im not married2、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式中式英文典型失败案例：1-The hiest moment in your lifeIn our life, there are always some moments whh make your heart flower opened

7、angrily2- The population problemThe population problem is a very big problem.For ele, in the city centers ofShanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.3、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式观点模糊典型失败案例： -Should college students be allowed to get marriedI think this is very hard to say.Because I am still v

8、ery little, only 17, and not married,so this is very diffult for me4、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式偏离主题典型失败案例：-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifations andquality essential to success through university education.To what etent do you agree ordisagree with the statementI think to success, we mus

9、t have a lot of important qualities.To have these importantqualities, we must learn a lot of things, for ele, English, mus tools, and etc.We can learnthese qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books.All in all, we can learn from manyplaces.5、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式语法错误典型失败案例：-If children behave

10、badly, should their parents accept responsibility andalso be punishedAbout this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parents responsibility.So we also punish parents too besides children isalso should.6、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式过分简单典型失败案例：-The importa

11、nce of environmental protectionThis issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!7、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式意思重复典型失败案例：-Your opinion on DINK familiesMy opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing.And it is a bad thing.It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes ha

12、rmful to our society.8、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式胡乱翻译典型失败案例： 1-Is it good to have a large familyI think it is good to have a large family.Because we Chinese believe a sentence: Manysons, many lucks9、托福作文中需要防止的开头方式观点武断典型失败案例：1-The importance of confidenceIn my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person.All the successfulpeople in the world are full of confidence.While those people who dont have confidence,they all have failed.2 - The solution to the traff problem