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1、写作指导 (3)看图作文看图作文也叫做图画式作文,是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文,或叙述一件事,或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。一般性图画式作文都包含六个要点:时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、结果。这些要点往往是缺一不可的,否则整篇文章就不完整。看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字,再根据这些要点谋篇布局。一、看图作文的考查特点1命制思路特点看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到:主题明确,即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想;图文一致,即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。2能力表现特点看图
2、作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力,丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力,以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。3语言表达特点表达准确,过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择,准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式,尤其要注意句与句,段与段之间的意思连贯。为此,考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等,适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。二、看图作文的写作步骤1仔细审题,确定要点2紧扣要点,组句成篇3表达准确,过渡自然4规范书写,检查润色 美国中学生Jeff将要到你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,
3、按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意:1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好;2词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff,My name is Li Hua.Im from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing._Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua案例分析1认真审题,确定人称和时态通过阅读题目,我们可以确定:此文的体裁是说明文,须用第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时,同时,也可适当使用一般将来时。2
4、挖掘材料,列出要点和提纲要认真观察每幅图片,同时还要注意参考词汇、图中所给的文字提示,准确而全面地理解图片大意。通过观察图片,我们可以知道这是一篇介绍“红星中学学习生活以及Jeff寄宿房间的布局”的说明文。此题可以归纳出以下四个要点:(1)寄宿你家以及房间的布局;(2)从你家到红星中学的距离以及上学的方式;(3)学生食堂;(4)课后娱乐活动。根据要点,拟出以下提纲:provide you with a rooma room with a bed,a desk,a couple of chairs and a TV;have your own bathroomthe school is clos
5、e to our home;go to school together by bikehave lunch at the school dining hall;talk with friends over lunchfinish classes at 4 in the afternoonjoin other students in playing ball games or swimming3选用句式,连词成句巧成文根据文章体裁的不同适当补充时间、地点、目的、方式、原因、结果等细节扩展句式;恰当地使用一些具有承上启下作用的过渡性词汇或过渡句;适当调整句子顺序,使文章语言简练、连贯、流畅。(1)
6、We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed,a desk,a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lu
7、nch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.(7)Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4认真核查,注意语言的连贯和得体要做到“四查”:(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等。(2)查动词。看谓语动词的时态、语态是否正确,主谓是否一致,非谓语动词形式是
8、否正确等。(3)查习语、搭配。看是否符合英语表达习惯。(4)查拼写、词数。看拼写是否有误、词数是否合适。Dear Jeff,My name is Li Hua.Im from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.While you are here,well provide you with a room of your own with a bed,a desk,a couple of chair
9、s and a TV set.Youll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home,so we could go to school together by bike.At noon well have lunch at the school dining hall.Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually fin
10、ish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.Itll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests,please let me know.Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章,请你根据题目要求及下面图
11、画的内容提示,为学校的壁报写一篇稿件,谈谈你对交通状况的思考。注意:1.词数不少于120;2应包括图画中的全部内容:3标题与开头已为你写好;4参考词汇:行人 pedestrian;人行横道 zebra crossing;隔离护栏 divider。Whats Wrong with Them?Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with todays people._【参考答案】Whats Wrong with Them?Take a look at the road conditions of t
12、oday.Something must be wrong with todays people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like,even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing divid
13、ers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on thehighways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings,even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection,pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They al
14、l forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses,or worse,drink and drive,which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion,it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people ignore various traffic rules,road safety,or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior,which ma
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