进行中作品三邦訳比较

1、Ulysses 04.455-484 進行中作品三邦訳比較2000年3月4日伊東栄志郎LEVELMS & TS of U04.455-484; 三邦訳01The Little Review (vol.VI, no.2: June 1918), pp.50-51.02MS (Rosenbach Foundation):the TS sent to Pound & HSW prior to 20 March 1918.03Placards 8 (Harvard; Buffalo V.C.4): JJA17.76-77.04Page Proofs: first version (Bu

2、ffalo V.C.1-5a): JJA22.234-35: dated 30 juin 1921. 05Placards 9: first version (Buffalo V.C.3): JJA17.177-78.¾A duplicate of Level 05¾05.1Page Proofs: second version (Buffalo V.C.1-5b): JJA22.251-52.¾A duplicate of Level 05¾05.2Page Proofs: third version (Texas): JJA22.265-66.

3、90;A duplicate of Level 05¾05.3Page Proofs: fourth version (Texas): JJA22.281-83.¾A duplicate of Level 05¾06Ulysses. Paris: Shakespeare and Company, 02/1922.07Ulysses: A Critical and Synoptic Edition. Ed. Hans Walter Gabler et al.New York and London: Garland, 1984.丸谷96 I丸谷才一、永川玲二、高松雄一

4、訳(集英社,06/1996)柳瀬97 ¾柳瀬尚紀訳(河出書房,08/1997)中林97 第一挿話¾第八挿話中林孝雄(近代文芸社,11/1997)4.455. The cat, having cleaned all her fur, returned to the meatstained paper,LEVEL 06 The cat, having cleaned all her fur, returned to the meatstained paper,LEVEL 05 The cat, having cleaned all her fur, returned to th

5、e meatstained paper,LEVEL 04 The cat, having cleaned all her fur, returned to the meatstained paper,LEVEL 03 The cat, having cleaned all her fur, returned to the meatstained paper,LEVEL 02 The cat, having cleaned all her fur, returned to the meatstained paper,LEVEL 01 The cat, having cleaned all her

6、 fur, returned to the meatstained paper,中林97訳 猫毛繕、肉新聞紙戻、柳瀬97訳 猫、毛、臓物残戻、丸谷96訳 猫全身毛舐終、腎臓血包紙帰、4.456. nosed at it and stalked to the door. She looked back at him, mewing. WantsLEVEL 06 nosed at it and stalked to the door. She looked back at him, mewing. WantsLEVEL 05 nosed at it and stalked to the door.

7、 She looked back at him, mewing. WantsLEVEL 04 nosed at it and stalked to the door. She looked back at him, mewing. WantsLEVEL 03 nosed at it and stalked to the door. She looked back at him, mewing. WantsLEVEL 02 nosed at it and stalked to the door. She looked back at him, mewing. WantsLEVEL 01 nose

8、d at it and stalked to the door. She looked back at him, mewing. Wants中林97訳 臭、歩行。猫振返、彼見鳴。柳瀬97訳 一嗅、 向。振返、鳴。丸谷96訳 鼻嗅 向歩。 彼振返、鳴。4.457. to go out. Wait before a door sometime it will open. Let her wait. Has theLEVEL 06 to go out. Wait before a door sometime it will open. Let her wait. Has theLEVEL 05 to

9、 go out. Wait before a door sometime it will open. Let her wait. Has theLEVEL 04 to go out. Wait before a door sometime it will open. Let her wait. Has theLEVEL 03 to go out. Let her wait.LEVEL 02 to go out. Let her wait. LEVEL 01 to go out. Let her wait.中林97訳 外出。前待開。 待。柳瀬97訳 出。 前待開。丸谷96訳 外出。 前待開。待。

10、4.458. fidgets. Electric. Thunder in the air. Was washing at her ear with her backLEVEL 06 fidgets. Electric. Thunder in the air. Was washing at her ear with her backLEVEL 05 fidgets. Electric. Thunder in the air. Was washing at her ear with her backLEVEL 04 fidgets. Electric. Thunder in the air. Wa

11、s washing at her ear with her back中林97訳。電気帯。空中雷鳴。 暖炉火背向、柳瀬97訳 始。 雷雲出。暖炉背向手舐丸谷96訳 。電気。 雷来。火背向4.459. to the fire too.LEVEL 06 to the fire too.LEVEL 05 to the fire too.LEVEL 04 to the fire too.中林97訳 耳。柳瀬97訳 耳後掻。丸谷96訳 耳洗。4.460. He felt heavy, full: then a gentle loosening of his bowels. He stood up,LEVE

12、L 06 He felt heavy, full: then a gentle loosening of her bowels. He stood up,LEVEL 05 He felt heavy, full: then a gentle loosening of her bowels. He stood up,LEVEL 04 He felt heavy, full: then a gentle loosening of her bowels. He stood up,LEVEL 03 He felt heavy, full: then a gentle loosening of her

13、bowels. He stood up,LEVEL 02 He felt full, heavy: then a gentle loosening of his bowels. He stood up.LEVEL 01 He felt heavy, full: then a gentle loosening. He stood up.中林97訳 彼体重、腹¾¾、通感。柳瀬97訳 、満腹感。腸。丸谷96訳 満腹感。腸。4.461. undoing the waistband of his trousers. The cat mewed to him.LEVEL 06 undo

14、ing the waistband of his trousers. The cat mewed to him.LEVEL 05 undoing the waistband of his trousers. The cat mewed to him.LEVEL 04 undoing the waistband of his trousers. The cat mewed to him.LEVEL 03 undoing the waistband of his trousers. The cat mewed to him.LEVEL 02 undoing the waistband of his

15、 trousers. The cat mewed to him.LEVEL 01 The cat mewed to him.中林97訳 彼立上、緩。猫彼向鳴。柳瀬97訳 立上、 。 猫訴。丸谷96訳 彼立、 。 猫彼向鳴。4.462. ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till I'm ready.LEVEL 06 ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till Im ready.LEVEL 05 ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till Im ready.LEVEL

16、04 ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till Im ready.LEVEL 03 ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till Im ready.LEVEL 02 ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till Im ready.LEVEL 01 ¾Miaow! he said in answer. Wait till Im ready.中林97訳 ¾¾！彼応言。支度出来待。柳瀬97訳 ¾¾！、返事返。待。丸谷96訳 ¾

17、;¾！彼返事。用意待。4.463. Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fag up the stairs toLEVEL 06 Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fag up the stairs toLEVEL 05 Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fag up the stairs toLEVEL 04 Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fa

18、g up the stairs toLEVEL 03 Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fag up the stairs toLEVEL 02 Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fag up the stairs toLEVEL 01 Heaviness: hot day coming. Too much trouble to fag up the stairs to中林97訳 ¾¾暑日。 踊場上、疲。柳瀬97訳 重感、今日暑。階段踊場上面倒。丸谷96訳

19、 重苦。 暑日。 踊場階段昇。4.464. the landing.LEVEL 06 the landing.LEVEL 05 the landing.LEVEL 04 the landing.LEVEL 03 the landing.LEVEL 02 the landing.LEVEL 01 the landing.中林97訳 柳瀬97訳 丸谷96訳 4.465. A paper. He liked to read at stool. Hope no ape comes knocking justLEVEL 06 A paper. He liked to read at stool. Hop

20、e no ape comes knocking justLEVEL 05 A paper. He liked to read at stool. Hope no ape comes knocking justLEVEL 04 A paper. He liked to read at stool. Hope no ape comes knocking justLEVEL 03 A paper. He liked to read at stool. Hope no ape comes knocking justLEVEL 02 A paper. He liked to read at stool.

21、 中林97訳 新聞。彼便所読好。 、柳瀬97訳 新聞。 便座読。 出阿呆丸谷96訳 新聞。 彼便器腰掛読好。 馬鹿4.466. as I'm.LEVEL 06 as Im.LEVEL 05 as Im.LEVEL 04 as Im.LEVEL 03 as Im.中林97訳 。柳瀬97訳 丸谷96訳 。4.467. In the tabledrawer he found an old number of Titbits. He folded itLEVEL 06 In the table drawer he found an old number of Titbits. He folde

22、d itLEVEL 05 In the table drawer he found an old number of Titbits. He folded itLEVEL 04 In the table drawer he found an old number of Titbits. He folded itLEVEL 03 In the table drawer he found an old number of Titbits. He folded itLEVEL 02 In the tabledrawer he found an old number of Titbits. He fo

23、lded itLEVEL 01 In the table drawer he found an old number of Titbits. He folded it中林97訳 彼引出、古見。 柳瀬97訳 引出 古号。 丸谷96訳 引出 古一冊。 彼4.468. under his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat went up in softLEVEL 06 under his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat went up in softLEVEL 05 unde

24、r his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat went up in softLEVEL 04 under his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat went up in softLEVEL 03 under his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat went up in softLEVEL 02 under his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat

25、went up in softLEVEL 01 under his armpit, went to the door and opened it. The cat went up in soft中林97訳 折畳、腋下、行開。 猫跳、柳瀬97訳 脇下折挟、 戸口行、開。 猫跳階段丸谷96訳 折脇、 戸口歩。 猫柔駆4.469. bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed.LEVEL 06 bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed

26、.LEVEL 05 bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed.LEVEL 04 bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed.LEVEL 03 bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed.LEVEL 02 bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed.LEVEL 0

27、1 bounds. Ah, wanted to go upstairs, curl up in a ball on the bed.中林97訳 上行。、上行、 上丸寝。柳瀬97訳 駆上。、上行。丸寝。丸谷96訳 行。、上行、上。4.470. Listening, he heard her voice:LEVEL 06 Listening, he heard her voice:LEVEL 05 Listening, he heard her voice:LEVEL 04 Listening, he heard her voice:LEVEL 03 Listening, he heard her

28、 voice:LEVEL 02 Listening, he heard her voice:LEVEL 01 Listening, he heard her voice:中林97訳 耳澄、彼女声聞¾¾柳瀬97訳 聞、細君声。丸谷96訳 耳澄彼女声聞。4.471. ¾Come, come, pussy. Come.LEVEL 06 ¾Come, come, pussy. Come.LEVEL 05 ¾Come, come, pussy. Come.LEVEL 04 ¾Come, come, pussy. Come.LEVEL 03 &#

29、190;Come, come, pussy. Come.LEVEL 02 ¾Come, come, pussy. Come.LEVEL 01 ¾Come, come, pussy. Come.中林97訳 ¾¾、小。柳瀬97訳 ¾¾、。丸谷96訳 ¾¾、猫。 。4.472. He went out through the backdoor into the garden: stood to listenLEVEL 06 He went out through the backdoor into the garden:

30、 stood to listenLEVEL 05 He went out through the backdoor into the garden: stood to listenLEVEL 04 He went out through the backdoor into the garden: stood to listenLEVEL 03 He went out through the backdoor into the garden: stood to listenLEVEL 02 He went out through the backdoor into the garden: sto

31、od to listenLEVEL 01 He went out through the backdoor into the garden: stood to listen中林97訳 彼裏口庭出¾¾立止、隣庭柳瀬97訳 自分裏戸庭出。隣庭気配窺立。丸谷96訳 彼裏口庭出。立止、隣庭4.473. towards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps hanging clothes out to dry.LEVEL 06 towards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps hanging clothes out

32、to dry.LEVEL 05 towards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps hanging clothes out to dry.LEVEL 04 towards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps hanging clothes out to dry.LEVEL 03 towards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps hanging clothes out to dry.LEVEL 02 t owards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps han

33、ging clothes out to dry.LEVEL 01 towards the next garden. No sound. Perhaps hanging clothes out to dry.中林97訳 耳澄。物音。恐洗濯物出、乾。柳瀬97訳 物音。洗濯物外吊頃。丸谷96訳 聞耳立。何聞。洗濯物外干。4.474. The maid was in the garden. Fine morning.LEVEL 06 The maid was in the garden. Fine morning.LEVEL 05 The maid was in the garden. Fine mo

34、rning.LEVEL 04 The maid was in the garden. Fine morning.LEVEL 03 The maid was in the garden. Fine morning.LEVEL 02 Fine morning.LEVEL 01 Fine morning.中林97訳 女中庭出。 朝。柳瀬97訳 女中庭出。 朝。丸谷96訳 女中庭出。 朝。4.475. He bent down to regard a lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.LEVEL 06 He bent down to regard a

35、 lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.LEVEL 05 He bent down to regard a lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.LEVEL 04 He bent down to regard a lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.LEVEL 03 He bent down to regard a lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.LEVEL 02 He bent down to

36、regard a lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.LEVEL 01 He bent down to regard a lean file of spearmint growing by the wall.中林97訳 彼身屈、塀生列眺。柳瀬97訳 屈込、壁際生見。丸谷96訳 彼、壁生痩列眺。4.476. Make a summerhouse here. Scarlet runners. Virginia creepers. Want toLEVEL 06 Make a summerhouse here. Scarlet runners. Vi

37、rginia creepers. Want toLEVEL 05 Make a summerhouse here. Scarlet runners. Virginia creepers. Want toLEVEL 04 Make a summerhouse here. Scarlet runners. Virginia creepers. Want toLEVEL 03 Make a summerhouse here. Scarlet runners. Virginia creepers. Want toLEVEL 02 Want toLEVEL 01 Want to中林97訳 東屋建。 。場

38、所（）、柳瀬97訳 四阿（）造。紅花隠元。 蔦。全体丸谷96訳 建。隠元。 蔦。 土地全体4.477. manure the whole place over, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All soilLEVEL 06 manure the whole place over, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All soilLEVEL 05 manure the whole place over, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All

39、soilLEVEL 04 manure the whole place over, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All soilLEVEL 03 manure the whole place over, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All soilLEVEL 02 manure the whole place over, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All soilLEVEL 01 manure the whole place ove

40、r, scabby soil. A coat of liver of sulphur. All soil中林97訳 不毛土地肥料施。厚硫化肥。 土地、柳瀬97訳 肥、瘡蓋土地。硫肝塗。 糞丸谷96訳 肥料。 土壌。 一面硫化色。 4.478. like that without dung. Household slops. Loam, what is this that is? TheLEVEL 06 like that without dung. Household slops. Loam, what is this that is? TheLEVEL 05 like that withou

41、t dung. Household slops. Loam, what is this that is? TheLEVEL 04 like that without dung. Household slops. Loam, what is this that is? TheLEVEL 03 like that without dung. Loam, what is this that is? TheLEVEL 02 like that without dung. Loam, what is this that is? TheLEVEL 01 like that without dung. Lo

42、am, what is this that is? The中林97訳 肥。家庭落水。 、何？柳瀬97訳 土地。 家汚水。壌土（）、。丸谷96訳 土地。 台所流水。土壌、何？4.479. hens in the next garden: their droppings are very good top dressing. Best ofLEVEL 06 hens in the next garden: their droppings are very good top dressing. Best ofLEVEL 05 hens in the next garden: their droppi

43、ngs are very good top dressing. Best ofLEVEL 04 hens in the next garden: their droppings are very good I heard top dressing. Best ofLEVEL 03 hens in the next garden: their droppings are very good I heard. Best ofLEVEL 02 hens in the next garden: their droppings are very good I heard. Best ofLEVEL 01

44、 hens in the next garden: their droppings are very good I heard. Best of中林97訳 隣庭雌鶏¾¾ 糞良敷肥。柳瀬97訳 隣庭鶏何羽。落極上上肥。丸谷96訳 隣庭鶏。鶏糞極上撒布肥料。4.480. all though are the cattle, especially when they are fed on those oilcakes.LEVEL 06 all though are the cattle, especially when they are fed on those oilcakes

45、.LEVEL 05 all though are the cattle, especially when they are fed on those oilcakes.LEVEL 04 all though are the cattle, especially when they are fed on those oilcakes.LEVEL 03 all though are the cattle, especially when they are fed on those oilcakes.LEVEL 02 all though are the cattle, especially when they are fed on those oilcakes.LEVEL 01 all though are the cattle, especially when they are f