书面表达讲解与训练如何写好情景写作人教版

1、书面表达讲解与训练 如何写好情景写作一. 本周教学内容：书面表达讲解与训练如何写好情景写作写作体裁训练 1）记叙文 2）描述文考题的设置和要求：教学大纲的要求:书面表达是来考查学生是否能够运用所学过的英语知识和掌握的技巧进行思想交流，也就是说考查综合运用英语的能力。试题的设置: 更贴近实际生活，与日常生活息息相关，让考生有话可说,更能充分的考察出学生的语言交际能力。考查目标和要求：要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。（北京试卷要求字数不少于60字）情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。近年来的书面表达一览表：2000全国卷根据目击的交

2、通事故给警察局写一份材料2001全国卷根据表格所提供的内容谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化2001春邀请你的美国朋友Peter来你校在下月举办的美国电影节上给学生讲一次关于美国电影方面的讲座2002全国卷根据表格所提供的内容谈一谈公园要不要收门票2002北京卷写一篇野外生存训练的日记2002 春给你的美国朋友写信介绍你们是如何庆祝申奥成功的，并邀请他2008年来中国2003全国卷写信给你的朋友介绍为他找的住房情况2003北京卷记述一次配合迎奥运宣传学雷锋活动2003春向一外教请求有关选择剧目方面的帮助，请他给予一些建议2004北京卷根据图表说明学生课外生活并谈谈你的看法。出题方式：文字，表

3、格，图画，图表出题趋势：叙述加议论，说明加议论如何写好情景写作1. 认真审题，确定体裁及篇章结构或提纲（包括开头点题句，中间具体内容以及结尾（包括再现主题，感想和希望）。记叙往往和议论密不可分，说明也会包含于议论中，成为它的支撑论据。2. 再读细节，确定人称、时态、主要情节、句式等。尤其要考虑动词：搭配(动词与名词的搭配、动词与介词的搭配)，相关同义词或词组(例如，visit, have a visit, pay a visit, on a visit to)。3. 成文（10句左右），囊括要点，按照文体和篇章要求组织语篇。4. 润色，注意措辞、复杂句式及承上启下的自然衔接，校对细节。写作体裁

4、练习：学习如何写记叙文：记叙文主要是记述所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、传记、游记、日记、新闻报道等。记叙文的写作要素：1. 要交代清楚五要素的内容即：where, when, what, who, how。2. 事件可按时间或空间顺序叙述。3. 时态通常是与过去有关的时态。（如果是当前的经常性事件，自然，社会现象。通常用与现在有关的时态。）记叙文的篇章结构： 开头the beginning-交代必要的背景，如：时间，地点，人物等。中间the middle-交代故事情节（事情的主体）。如：事件的发生，发展和前因后果结尾the ending-事情的结果或感想，愿望等（the result

5、 or feeling）在记叙文中常用到的连接词：横 线First . Then . Next . Finally纵 线Some . Some . Others;The boys . The girls .; Some Ss . Tome others . The rest of us / them .时间顺序Early in the morning / In the early morning; In the middle of the day / At noon; Late in the afternoon / In the late afternoon; Far / Deep into

6、the night;In the past / At present / In the future ;First, second, next, then, finally;At first, in the beginning; at last, in the end; Shortly afterwards, at once, immediately, all of a sudden, suddenly, soon;The moment, as soon as, the first time, not until, next time, before, after, etc;2002年高考书面

7、表达（北京卷）你和李明参加一次野外生存训练。以下5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。注意：1词数100左右 2日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。生词：指南针：compass 手电筒：flashlight 急救包:first-aid kit 宿营地：campsiteSaturday,May4,2002 Cloudy Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival programme yesterday, and it was one of the most unforgettable experiences since high

8、 school. The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems in the field. It was quite an experience for us both, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.2002.高考学生习作分析（ 北京卷）1.Saturday,May4,2002 Cloudy Li Ming and I took part

9、 in a wilderness survival programme yesterday, and it was one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school. The two of us were to reach the campsite by evening. We set out early in the morning , eager to face the adventure. I was carrying a camp and a compass in my bag, while Li Ming load

10、ed his with some bread, matches, candles, a map , a knife , a first-aid kit, a flashlight, and some clothes. We followed the marked route until we reached a brook. We had to swim across it, floating our supplies on a piece of wood in order to keep them dry. Whats worse, we lost sight of the signs on

11、 the other side of the brook! Thanks to the compass, we finally arrived at the campsite on time, and managed to make the camp and a fire. The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems in the field. It was quite an experience f

12、or us both, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.如何写描述文描述文是把人物， 事件， 景观， 地点，环境等用语言生动、形象地描绘出来。描述人物 ：1）开头要进行简明的介绍(introduction) 2）文章主体(main part)可按时间顺序或事件的主次进行描述 3)结尾(conclusion)可进行评论或谈感受。描述地点 ：1）要准确使用表示方位的词及短语 2）描述地点的位置通常要从上到下，从里到外，从左到右，从远到近。 3）注意详略。重点部分要突出，详细描述。学习并牢记下列常用短语和句型空间顺序at the fron

13、t/back of something, with . in the centre /around a place; in front of, behind; next to, close to, in and around;on the left/ right;in the south, in the west / east / north;on the other side / opposite side of, inside, outside; where etc;常用短语和句型：方位1. There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.(on

14、the right of, in the front of, near the window)2. Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. (on the right of the room)3. Next to it is a bed. (in front of it, at the back of, in the middle of, to the right of)4. They are opposite the door.(on the left/right of the room.)5. The office

15、 building is in the east of the campus.(in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of )6. The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述国家，城市状况等1. China is located in Asia. (be situated be surrounded by , lie to the east of )2. It covers a huge ar

16、ea of 9,600 000 square kilometers.3. The population of this city is 100,000 .路线1. When you come out of(get toreach)2. Cross the street (river) (keep walking along walk down)3. Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. (the second traffic lights, the first crossing)4. Take the first

17、 turning on your left. 5. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.6. Youll see(find) it next to the cinema.2003年高考书面表达假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将9月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据画面提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告之住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1. 词数 100左右；2. 房租rentDear Bob,_ Yours, Li Hua Possible version:Dear

18、Bob, Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September. Ive found a place for you. Its a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,

19、which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, its only one stop. Do you think youd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 一. 假如你是李华， 昨天学校为你们举办了18岁成人仪式。请你根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件，描述仪式过程并简述你的感受。1.

20、成人宣誓2. 感谢家长和老师的教育培养3. 老师送贺卡4. 表演节目注意：（1）邮件必须包括以上要点，可以适当发挥；（2）词数：100左右；（3）开头结尾已为你写好。生词： 宣誓：make an oath 仪式：ceremonyDear Tom,It is great to receive your email. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday._二. 假设你是李华， 你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。 要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并

21、对各地点加以简单的介绍。注意：（1）包括示意图中的主要内容（2）词数100左右（3）信的开头已写好（4）生词：图书城 Book TownDear Mike, Im glad to hear you are coming soon. Ive planned a one-day trip for you in Beijing. _三. 假如你是王平，即将赴英国学习，今天早上刚刚买到机票，请根据票上标明的起飞时间，中途停顿的地点，在英国等候的时间及到达终点的时间，写信告诉将到机场接你的英国朋友John。FROMTOFLIGHTDATETIMEARRBeijingHongkongCA368Dec212

22、0:00PM21:30PMHongkongLondonDec2122:00PM8:00AMLondonGlasgowBA163Dec2210:00PM11:00AM注意：1）词数100-120 2） 信的开头已给出。 Dec 10th 2001Dear John,_ 【试题答案】一. Dear Tom,It is great to receive your email. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up c

23、eremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teacher

24、s also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think its very important for us. I will remember the day in my life.二.Dear Mike, Im glad to hear you are coming soon. Ive planned a one-day t

25、rip for you in Beijing. In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace, which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing. There you can go boating and climbing. Its also a nice place for taking pictures. Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a Chinese lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, I suggest you visit Beijing University. As you know, it is famous b