高三英语写作专练

1、高三英语写作专练 ( 一 一 . 写作指导 ( 句字类型 对英语句子的认识意义:英语的句式与中文的不同。我们在学习英语的时候要注意到这 一点。有的同学在学习中对此没有足够的认识,常常受中文的干扰。在写作中表现出不 能写出正确的句子。I. 什么是句子?长的是句子,短的是词。× 无论字数多少, 只要有主语和谓语 (动词 , 而且能表达完整的意义的一句话就是一 个句子。I am tired.Pressing ones palm together and resting ones head on theback of ones hand while closing the eyes as i

2、f sleeping means “I am tired. ” (双手合拢,闭上眼,把头靠在手背上像睡觉的 样子,意思是说“我累了。 ” 这两个句子都具备了主语和谓语。都是完整的句子。要记住:在英语中,一个句子必须 且只能有一个谓语。1. 省略主语的句子Come in, please. (You Open the door. Sit down. Stand up. What a day! (What a terrible day it is!2. 一个句子不能同时有两个谓语。典型错误:1 The old man likes take a walk in the village after su

3、pper. The old man likes to take a walk in the village after supper.2 I enjoy talk with him over a cup of coffee. I enjoy talking with him over a cup of coffee.3 The boy ran to his mother cry. The boy ran to his mother crying.4 After write the notice, he put it up on the wall. After writing the notic

4、e, he put it up on the wall.After he wrote the notice, he put it up on the wall.3. 不要把从句的谓语当成句子的谓语 , 或把主句的谓语当成从句的谓语。如果是一个复合句,主句和从句都应该分别有自己的主语和谓语。典型错误:1 1 Those who eat too much will easily ill. Those who eat too much will easily get ill.2 When he walking in the park, he felt a little tired. When he

5、was walking in the park, he felt a little tired.3 When I at school, I studied very hardWhen I was at school, I studied very hard. II. Practice: 判断以下是否是句子。1. Birds can fly2. The birds in the cage which I bought yesterday3. Wait for me at the station4. If you know how to play with words to make people

6、 laugh5. A way of saying “Im sorry”6. Patting the stomach before a meal7. The bread my mother makes is much better than what you can buy at the store.8. To make friends in the school which was not far from my new home9. If you want to know what it feels like to fall through the air, take off in a ro

7、cket, fly a helicopter or fight alien creatures in outer spaceIII. 常见的句子结构由于英语动词种类的不同, 构成了不同的句子类型。 和中文不同的是, 英语的动词分为 及物动词和不及物动词。表达同一个意思时,有的是及物动词,有的就是不及物动词。 如:表示“听” 这个意义时, listen 是不及物动词; hear 是及物动词。表示 “看” 这 个意义时, look 是不及物动词, see, watch和 notice 就是及物动词。 表示 “到达” , arrive 是不及物动词, reach 是及物动词。不及物动词是不能接宾语的

8、。只能加上一个介词, 才能接宾语。如:listen to, look at, arrive in等等。1. 主语 + 不及物动词e.g. He came in.The airplane from Hong Kong arrived at four p.m.How did the accident occur?In July, the ship set out for the Pacific.Australia has changed a lot in the past forty years.2. 主语 + 系动词 + 表语常见的系动词有:be, seem, appear, become, g

9、o, get, grow, turn, look, sound, feel, taste, smelle.g. She is very happy. (×She very happyHe became nervous when thinking of stealing.To become a top gymnast, it is important to start when very young.Its much cheaper to camp than to stay in a hotel.I got caught in the traffic.He seemed to have

10、 misunderstood you.3. 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语e.g. We learn English at school.He wondered whether Bill had managed to escape.I didnt mean to be so rudeI hope that one day I shall be able to repay you.被动:English is learnt at school.These goods will be sent to the flooded area.4. 主语 + 及物动词 + 间接宾语 + 直接宾语有些动词需要接两

11、个宾语。间接宾语一般由人担任,直接宾语一般由物担任。give, offer, teach, tell, read, ask, bring, pass, lend, return, write, throw, allow,send,cost ,make, buy, do, get, save, cook, sing, find等。e.g. My brother gave me a boo.I wont tell you anything about it.Can you sing us an English song?这样的句子变为被动时可根据需要,将任何一个宾语作为句子的主语。e.g. I w

12、as given a book. A book was given to me.5. 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 + 宾补e.g. Unfortunately they find it difficult to repay this money.The growth in population made New York the largest city in the USA.Do you think it possible to finish it in one day?We are making our country more and more beautiful.【模拟试题】改错练习

13、:1. Please speak louder so that everybody can listen you.2. Great changes have been taken place in my hometown.3. Listen! Someone knocking at the door.4. He told me dont call him before 9 oclock.5. Does your parents allow you make your own decision?6. Although it is only August, but the weather is g

14、etting worse daily.7. Because the professor had fallen ill, so he was not able to be present at the conference.8. In Japan, a person sees the “OK” gesture may think it means money.9. When I past his room, I heard him singing an English song.说出下列句字类型1. When she saw this, she turned red.2. They remain

15、ed in sad poverty.3. The reason for my lateness is that I missed my bus.4. He found his new job rather boring.5. I think it possible to finish everything in one week.6. He noticed a crowd of people shouting and cheering.7. He kept his eyes shut and stayed where he was.8. He handed me a letter.9. He

16、offered to lend me some books.10. She could not help feeling depressed.11. I wonder whether you could give me some advice.12. The sun is rising.13. Her temperature came down in the morning.二. 写作。 (记叙文记叙文主要是记述所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有:故事、传记、游记、日记、新闻 报道等1. 要交代清楚五要素的内容即:where, when, what, who, how 。2. 事件可按时间或空间

17、顺序叙述。3. 时态通常是与过去有关的时态。 (如果是当前的经常性事件,自然,社会现象。通常 用与现在有关的时态2. 开头 the beginning-交代必要的背景,如:时间,地点,人物等。中间 the middle-交代故事情节(事情的主体 。如:事件的发生,发展和前因后果 结尾 the ending-事情的结果或感想,愿望等(the result or feeling记叙文的篇章结构调整 First . Then . Next . FinallySome . Some . OthersThe boys . The girls .;Some Ss . Tome others . The r

18、est of us / them .时间顺序:Early in the morning / In the early morning;In the middle of the day / At noon;Late in the afternoon / In the late afternoon;Far / Deep into the night;In the past / At present / In the future ;First, second, next, then, finally;At first, in the beginning; at last, in the end;S

19、hortly afterwards, at once, immediately, all of a sudden, suddenly, soon; The moment, as soon as,the first time, not until, next time, before, after, etc;模拟试题一 . 假如你是李华, 昨天学校为你们举办了 18岁成人仪式。请你根据下列要点给你在美 国的笔友发一封电子邮件,描述仪式过程并简述你的感受。1. 成人宣誓2. 感谢家长和老师的教育培养3. 老师送贺卡4. 表演节目注意:(1邮件必须包括以上要点,可以适当发挥;(2词数:100左右;(3开头结尾已为你写好。生词:宣誓:make an oath 仪式:ceremony参考答案Dear TomIt is great to receive your email. Now Id like to tell you something that took place yesterday._ Dear Tom,It is great to receive