专题10书面表达解析版

1、书面表达止土六步走六步走 ”指的是：一审、二列、三扩、四连、五美、六抄。一审 审文体、要求、人称、时态、内容 ( 主题二列列提纲 ,确定文章框架 ,列全要点三扩 扩写句子在主的基础上添枝加叶四连连句成文 ,句子与段落之间适当加入连接词五美美化文章 , 使用修饰词、复合句、谚语、俗语等六抄 书写工整，卷面整洁1仔细审题，切忌急于下笔。对于所提供的材料要认真分析，反复推敲，抓住要点，掌握大意。在审题过 程中应大概确定写作目标、文章格式、体裁等。2考生应综合分析所提供的语言信息和语言材料，找出其内在联系，把它们有机地组织起来，编拟出要点 提纲。3尽量使用自己最熟悉、最有把握的句型和短语表达，但也要尽

2、量灵活变通，使用多种句型句式，避免重 复、单调。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所 造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。4用英语思维和表达，切忌汉语式英语。5行文要连贯，语句要通顺，层次要清楚。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此考生应尽量使用一 些表示并列、递进、转折、总结等的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。6通读文章，检查改错。作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣 分。因此，考试时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。 检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1) 查格式。特别是应用文的格式，如书信、

3、通知等，注意检查各要素是否齐全。(2) 查时态。检查通篇文章时态是否正确，特别是从句中的时态一致问题。(3) 查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等(如宾语从句的语序 )；看语言表达是否流畅，切忌将题目13要求中的内容逐句译成英语。(4) 查动词。看谓语动词时态是否使用得当、主谓是否一致等。(5) 查习语、搭配。看作文中使用的习语、搭配是否符合英语表达习惯等。(6) 查单词拼写、标点符号和大小写。尤其要注意检查动词的过去分词拼写形式、名词的单复数形式，检查 书写是否规范，有无拼写、标点等笔误。观点类作文观点话题类写作常用短语和句型In my opinion/view/I think 我认为

4、In a word 总之Some students think/believe that. while the others think/believe. 些学生认为 而另一些认为 First. Second. Third.第一第二第三It is very important for us to do sth. 对我们来说做某事很重要。Every adva ntage has its disadva ntage .有利就有弊。On the one hand. on the other hand.一方面另一方面 As far as I know 据我所知Nowadays, it is com m

5、on to. Many people like. because. Besides. 现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢 因为另外(而且)Man is now facing a big problem. which is becoming more and more serious.人类正面临着一个严重的问题 这个问题变得越来越严重。What's more 而且，此外Most important of all. 最重要的是Why.? The first reason is that. The second reason is. The third is. 为什么 ？第一个原因是 第二个原因是第三

6、个原因是I fully agree with that, because.我完全同意这种观点 (陈述)，因为However, from a personal point of view, I find. 然而，就我个人而言，我发现 写作训练1.假如你们学校要开展“ 创建和谐校园(to build a harmonious campus )”的活动，请根据提示写一篇倡议书，号召大家为创建和谐校园而努力。请根据以下要点提示以“Howto Build a Harmonious Campus 为”题写一篇短文。写作要点： 1. 学校像我们的家，应该努力创建和谐校园；2.努力学习； 3.与他人友好相处；

7、 4.保持校园干净 整洁，不乱扔垃圾；5应该尽最大努力使我们的学校美丽。注意：1词数100词左右。2文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。【写作指导】开头：引出话题1.学校就像我们的豕(is like our home )2.我们应该努力创建和谐校园(try best to build a harmonious campus )正文：如何创建和谐校园并提出建议1.学生应努力学习( work hard, improve )2.对别人友好，尊重老师，与他人友好相处 (be friendly to , respect get on well with )3.保持学校干净整洁，不乱扔垃圾 (shouldnt

8、throitter around)结尾：总结全文尽最大的努力使我们的学校美丽(do our best to make our schoobeautiful)【参考范文】How to Build a Harmonious CampusOur school is like our home. So we should try our best to build a harm onious campus.First of all, the students in our school should wo rk hard at our lessons. After school, we' d

9、better take part inkinds of activities to help improve our health and study. Then we should be friendly to one another. We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates. Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clea n andtidy. We shouldn ' t throw litter around or pick f

10、lowers.Please do our best to make our school beautiful.2.随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越关注健康。下周你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“ Living a Healthy Life为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如李芳要参加演讲比赛，请你以李芳”的名义写一篇演讲稿。参考要点：1.饮食(好的饮食习惯、多吃蔬菜水果)；2.运动(骑自行车、打球 )；3.要求：1.从不同的角度谈论；2.100词左右，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。【写作指导】开头：引出话题健康生活很重要(It ' s important )正文：阐述学英语的

11、好方法1.养成良好的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜水果(vegetables and fruit)2.作息：保证足够的睡眠，合理安排时间，早睡早起(eno ugh sleep， go to bed early and get upearly)3.卫生：勤洗手，不随意丢垃圾，勤打扫房间，保持空气清新( wash hands, litter， keep the air fresh )。结尾：总结话题我们生活得越健康，我们就会感到越开心(thehealthier.the happier.)【参考范文】Livi ng a Healthy LifeHello, every on e. I' m Li Fan

12、 g. It' s nice to give a speech about livi ng a healthy life .It' shealthy life.First of all, we need to form good eating habits. We' d better eat more vegetshOUriaind frtihaWetoo much meat or sugar.Secon d, it' s importa nt for us to have eno ugh sleep. So we should pla n our time c

13、arefully so that we can go tobed early and get up early.Last, keep ing clea n is also importa nt. We must wash our hands ofte n so that we can preve nt some diseasesfrom spreadi ng. We should n't drop litter everywhere. What' s more, it' s necessary for us to clean our r(day. We can ope

14、n the win dows to keep the air fresh.In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.记叙说明类写作记叙说明类写作常用句型How time flies !时光飞逝!I really had a good time today.我今天过得很愉快。I've learned a lot from it.我从中学到了很多。I will remember it forever. 我永远不会忘记的。Today, I went to.今天，我去 Although we were tir

15、ed, we were still very happy.虽然我们很累，但是我们很高兴。写作训练1假如你叫李华，是一名中学生，想申请做“ 2022年北京冬奥会”的志愿者。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下列的全部内容。提示： How old are you and where are you from?(2) What ' s your hobby and what are you good at?(3) How can they connect with you?要求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；2书写工整、规范；3根据所给内容和参考词汇，可适当发挥；

16、注意：1词数：100词左右；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。【审题指导】细读所给文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 本文要求写一篇自我介绍，故文体为说明文，应用第一人称，介绍自己的目前情况用一般现在时，介绍 过去的事情，用一般过去时。词数100词左右。短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。要点提示素材串联开头：弓1出话题我想要做志愿者(1 d like to be a volu nte正文：介绍情况1.出生年月，出生地，学习情况(be born, work hard at2.爱好：读英语小说，收集邮票(reading English novels and collecting stamps)3.特

17、长：电脑和央文与作(do well in computer andEnglish writing )4.获奖：央语比赛第一名(got the first place )结尾：给出联系方如果你想要了解我的更多情况，请联系(get in touch式，表示感谢with me)【参考范文】Dear Editor,m quite pleHow are you? rd like to be a volun teer duri ng the Olympic Win ter Games in 2022.1 to you to in troduce myself.I ' m a middle scho

18、ol boy born in February, 2003. My birth place, Zhangjiakou, is a very beautiful city in He bei Province. I work hard at my lessons while at school. Meanwhile, I have many hobbies in my spare time. I like reading English novels and collecting stamps. Also, I do well in computer and English writing. I

19、 was very lucky to have got the first place in the En glish con test in our school in 2017.If you ' d like to know more about me, you can get in touch with me aihua.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua真题训练如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式共享单车(bike-sharing)，它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以"Bike-sharing "为题写一篇英语短文，表

20、达自己的看法和建议。1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3. 词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。【参考范文】Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.It ' s known that it has many advantages. So it' s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it

21、s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. Therewill be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it ' s helpful to people' s health.However, it also brings some problems. For

22、example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stole n.In my opinion, every one should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environmen

23、t will be more beautiful.假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以 The Changes in Class "为题目，用英语写一篇 100词左右的 文章给教务处，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；3. 文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。The Chan ges in ClassYour feeli ngsin terest ing and

24、 livelyope n and freetell stories play games listen to musicget more kno wledgestudy and think by ourselves discuss in groupsshow ourselves【参考范文】Thanks for givi ng us stude nts a cha nee to express ourselves about how we study in class.Now our classes are ope n and free. All of our classmates feel t

25、he classes are in terest ing and lively as we ofte n tell stories and play games. Therefore, we can not only learn but also have fun. The teachers often use the computer in class. We can lear n more by liste ning to music and watchi ng videos. Our teachers give us eno ugh time to study and think by

26、ourselves to develop our ability of in depe ndent study. We also have more cha nces to discuss in groups freely so that we can lear n how to com muni cate with each other and lear n from each other. Sometimes we even show ourselves in front of the whole class. And we can ask questions during or afte

27、r class freely.In a word, I am glad to see the good cha nges in class. We can get more kno wledge and make great progress easily.假如现在是2116年，你是Kate，生活在火星上。你的朋友Jim现在在地球上，他即将来火星生活。请你用英语写一封信，向他介绍你在火星的生活。1. 总词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 信中须涉及上述几个方面的内容，并要求合理想象，适当发挥，使意思表达更加完整。【参考范文】Dear Jim,Now, I ' m

28、writing a letter to you on Mars. It'Ito reoHyiwMaderfI think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on earth. We have online schoolsin stead of real on es. We have less ons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates throughthe computers connected to

29、 an interplanetary network at home. It' s not so crowded here so we have more spaclive. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is verybeautiful. There are gree n trees and fresh flowers everywhere, and there is no polluti on here. We have supe

30、rmarkets in our n eighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.YoursKate四家乡盐城正在创办新型的科技之城。盐城已经举办了好几场科技产品展，现在将举办2017年的科技展，请你根据下表的提示内容，结合自己对科技展的看法，为盐城晚报写一篇英文版的报道。活动目的为了让更多的人了解科技改变生活注意事项活动内容1. 本次科技展将持续1个月。2. 设计国际机器人展、手机展和4D电视展3. 可以参与电子游戏（失重篮球赛，观看火星电影等，发挥1 2 点）孩子免费成人20元到展有小礼物你的观点自由发挥2 3点写作要求：1 要点齐全，可

31、适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2 .词数100左右，条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。【参考范文】In order to let more people lear n more about how scie nee and tech no logy has cha nge people' s lives, we wilhold a 2017 Science And Tech no logy Exhibiti on in the Science Museum.This exhibiti on will last for a mon th, coveri ng the intern ati onal

32、 robot show, mobile phone show and 4-D TVshow, and so on. Of course, you can take part in the computer games, such as low-gravity basketball matches,watch ing the films on Mars. You can also watch robots help people solve the problems and how n ewly-type mobile phones work. The price is free for chi

33、ldren and 20 yuan for per adult. You can get a gift if you come here.Our hometow n Yan che ng is creat ing a new type of Science and Tech no logy City. I am sure you will lear nmore about the developme nt of modern scie nce and tech no logy from this great exhibiti on. And we will certai nly make a

34、contribution to our city in the future .五今年年初，你们学校组织同学们学习八礼四仪”，并开展了一个 争做文明市民”的活动。同学们在人际交往，社会公德方面都比以前有了很大进步。请你根据下表所提示的要点，以To be a civilized citizen为题，用写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们现在的表现，并谈谈你对这个活动的看法。表现人际交往尊敬他人乐于助人诚信友善礼貌待人社会公德遵守交规宽容礼让爱护环境（自拟一点）感受你对这个活动的看法（请考生自拟一点内容）1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

35、3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。【参考范文】To be a civilized citize nOur school orga ni zed an educati onal activity called“ To be a civilized citize nthe year. Alt the begi nningthe stude nts took part in this activity and they have improved a lot i n many ways.It ' s really nice to see the students being polite

36、now. They know it' s important to respect the old aiyoung. They also realize they should have good manners and be honest. As a result, they are always friendly to others. Moreover, they are willing to help people any time. When they are on the bus, they always give their seatsto people in n eed.

37、 They are always patie nt eno ugh to liste n to others about their joy and worries.Now the students don' t just care about themselves. They tell others it' s very necessary to follow tThey also protect the environment. They show great respect to others and treat people politely.I ' m so

38、happy ththe students have learnt a lot from this activity!最近一项调查表明，你校大约40%的学生有不吃早饭的习惯。请根据表格中的提示内容用英语用一篇题为 The most important meal of the day 的短文。原因1、晚上作业多，睡觉迟，不吃早饭可以多睡一会儿；2、有的家长工作忙，无暇准备早饭，给钱让孩子自己解决;3、部分女生为了保持苗条身材不吃早饭。结果1、由于饥饿，上课注意力无法集中，听课效果差；2、 有些冋学经常有胃痛(stomachache),身体健康受影响。个人看法(请考生自拟至少两点看法)1把表格中的提

39、示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。2.词数100字左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。3 句式规范，字迹工整，表达中不得提及考生所在学校和个人真实姓名。【参考范文】The most importa nt meal of the dayA recent survey done in our school shows that n early 40 perce nt of the stude nts do not eat break fast, which should catch our atte nti on.According to the survey, some students don&

40、#39; t have breakfast to have a few extra minutes in bed because theyhave too much homework and stay up too late. Others are given money to buy food themselves because their parents are too busy with their own work to spare any time to prepare breakfast for them. Some girls want to stay slim and oft

41、e n go to school without breakfast.Without havi ng breakfast, many stude nts cannot pay atte ntio n to what the teachers say in class and do badly intheir lessons. What' s worse, some students even suffer from stomachache and their health is worrying.In fact, breakfast is the most importa nt mea

42、l in a day because it provides our body with much en ergy. Having a proper breakfast not only makes us energetic and healthy but also helps us avoid overeating. So, we should start our day with a regular breakfast.七?请你以"Less stress, better life为题，根每个人在生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢 据下表内容写篇演讲稿。Stres

43、s人们会因为困难觉得失望、疲惫或者忧伤，承受着巨大的压力1. 想一想最喜欢的人或事，不要总是想那些麻烦事Ways to relax2. 听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等3寻求帮助，和父母、老师或朋友多沟通 4.要求:1.语言表达准确、连贯、通顺2短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥3词数100左右,文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【参考范文】Less stress, better lifeLadies and gen tleme n,Thank you for your coming today. I ' mery glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. And yes, everyone has to face difficulties in his life. People will feel down, tired or unhappy, and they will be under much stress. We should know how to deal with the stress.Try to relax yourself. First, cha nge your mind.