初中英语写作公开课实用教案

1、 I like Liu Qian.He is a creative magician. I like Liu Qian because he is a creative magician.第1页/共18页第一页，共19页。2009 CCTV Spring Festival Galasurpriseddid magic showsHe did magic shows so well that everyone was really surprised.sothat(春节(Chn Ji)联欢晚会）He did magic shows well. Everyone was surprised.第2页

2、/共18页第二页，共19页。He took the ring out of an egg.People cheered for him.whenas soon asafterbecause第3页/共18页第三页，共19页。won many prizesworked hard,Make sentences with suitable conjunctionbecause sothatbeforeafterwhen(连词(linc)）第4页/共18页第四页，共19页。not like, fish, healthyalthoughsothat butbecauseMake sentences wit

3、h suitable conjunction(连词(linc)）第5页/共18页第五页，共19页。knew Liu Qian,met, 2001, Beijingnotuntil whenas soon as beforeaftersinceMake sentences with suitable conjunction(连词(linc)）Jay第6页/共18页第六页，共19页。Which article do you think is better? Why? Liu Qin was 7 years old. He fell in love with magic. He graduated

4、from the university, then he became a magician. He doesnt have a teacher to teach him, but he works very hard. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. Everyone knows it is the biggest challenge for a magician. When Liu Qian was 7 year

5、s old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on street

6、s to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician. complex sentence(复合句） 第7页/共18页第七页，共19页。JackLiu Qian s pen pal第8页/共18页第八页，共19页。NameJackFamilyparents, died, car accidentHobbywatch Liu Qians magic showsweekendactivitiesbusy, do homework, take lessonsProblemstressed out, ex

7、amHis parents died in a car accident.He likes watching Liu Qians magic shows.On weekends he is busy. He does his homework and takes lessons.He is too stressed out because of the exams.BirthdayMarch. 12th, 1994He was born on March. 12th, 1994.The boys name is Jack.第9页/共18页第九页，共19页。 Jack used to have

8、a happy family. Unluckily, his parents died in a car accident. He was 10 years old. However, he doesnt give up himself. He works very hard. He gets good grades. He likes watching Liu Qians magic shows to relax himself. He is a top student. He has a big problem these days. He is too stressed out. The

9、 important exam is coming.whensothatAlthoughbecausebecause, although, when, sothat第10页/共18页第十页，共19页。Dear Jack, I know you have many problems. You have much homework. You have to sleep late. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. You study hard. Your English is

10、not good. Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? You dont waste time. You can finish your homework quickly. Second, youd better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident. I hope you will be better soon. Yours, Liu Qian第11页/共18页第十一页，共19页。Dear Ja

11、ck, I know you have many problems. You have so much homework that you have to stay up. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. Although you study hard, you are not good at English. Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? If you ma

12、ke full use of every minute, you will finish your homework quickly.Second, youd better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident. I hope you will be better soon. Yours, Liu Qian充分利用第12页/共18页第十二页，共19页。 proper conjunctions (适当(shdng)的连词) Other ways :good phrases（词组(cz)）How can w

13、e make the articles more fluent (流畅(lichng)的）and more beautiful?wonderful sentence patterns（句型）第13页/共18页第十三页，共19页。假如你是Jack, 写信给刘谦，感谢他的建议(jiny)，并告诉他你的变化以及对考试的信心。你的变化包括：你的变化包括：1. 按时完成作业，睡眠每天按时完成作业，睡眠每天8小时小时2. 学习努力学习努力取得好成绩取得好成绩(chngj)3. 自信，不紧张自信，不紧张第14页/共18页第十四页，共19页。Dear Liu Qin, Thanks for your last

14、 letter. Your advice is really helpful. I have changed a lot. Now The exam is coming soon. Actually I am not worried at all. I believe I will do a good job after working hard. Yours, JackDont forget to show us wonderful sentences!第15页/共18页第十五页，共19页。 I have changed a lot. Now, I finish my homework on

15、 time and hardly stay up late at night . Because I sleep 8 hours every day, I am energetic in class. Also, I make full use of every minute. I study so hard that I can get good grades. To tell you the truth, I am pretty confident now and dont feel nervous at all. Whats more, I often watch your shows when I feel tired. How wonderful your shows are!第16页/共18页第十六页，共19页。A. Improve the letter you wrote .B. Share the letter with your friend, find