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1、论文写作与投稿的几点论文写作与投稿的几点体会体会Email： or 报告提纲报告提纲心得心得nFirst pagenIntroductionnMethodsnResultsnDiscussionnConclusionnAcknowledgementnReferencesDear Editor, I attach a manuscript entitled The direct and indirect benefits of dispositional mindfulness on core self-evaluations and life satisfaction intended to

2、be published in Personality and Individual Differences. I am sure that the manuscript has not been published elsewhere and that it has not been submitted simultaneously for publication elsewhere. If you need any further information regarding this article, please feel free to contact me as the addres

3、s below. Thank you very much for your kind consideration.Yours sincerely,Feng Kong State Key Laboratory of Cognitive Neuroscience and LearningBeijing Normal UniversityBeijing, China感谢主编、感谢审稿人感谢主编、感谢审稿人。不要吝啬。不要吝啬你的感激之情！你的感激之情！同时说明你根据审稿同时说明你根据审稿意见做了认真的修改意见做了认真的修改。 逐条、逐点回复审稿人的意见逐条、逐点回复审稿人的意见。nResponse:

4、 Thank you for your good advice. In the introduction, we only pay attention to the core self-evaluations. We did not mention other hidden variables, for example, positive orientation (Caprara). There are the following reasons. nFirst, positive orientation is a relatively new concept which is raised

5、by Caprara, Steca, Alessandri, Abela, & McWhinnie (2010). This concept is believed to mainly include self-esteem, life satisfaction, and optimism. However, the present study aimed at investigating the relationship between mindfulness and life satisfaction, and the potential mechanisms involved i

6、n this relationship. This purpose has been introduced at the beginning of the article, so we did not mentioned “positive orientation”.用用一些这样的语句，以示你对审稿人意见的尊重一些这样的语句，以示你对审稿人意见的尊重。回复尽可能。回复尽可能分点回答，并且尽量详细。分点回答，并且尽量详细。 nSecond, we state that both core self-evaluations and life satisfaction are correlated

7、but distinct constructs. These two concepts indicate ones global evaluations, yet the direction of these evaluations is different. Core self-evaluations reflect an individuals perceptions and evaluations of himself or herself, whereas while life satisfaction involves an individuals evaluation of his

8、 or her life as a whole. On the other hand, from the life satisfaction perspective, core self-evaluations reflect an individuals judgments of herself or himself and is seen as a component of global life satisfaction, which involves evaluations of different areas of life like the family, job and frie

9、nds as well as oneself.回复尽可能分点回答，并且尽量详细。回复尽可能分点回答，并且尽量详细。 nIn addition, we only selected the core self-evaluations. This is because mindfulness includes focusing ones attention in a nonjudgmental or accepting way on the experience occurring in the present moment (Kabat-Zinn, 1994; Linehan, 1993b; Ma

10、rlatt & Kristeller, 1999). In the mindfulness neuroscience, numerous studies have found dispositional mindfulness is negatively correlated with resting activity in self-referential processing areas (e.g., Way, Creswell, Eisenberger, & Lieberman, 2010). Meantime, mindfulness is also found to be correlated with default mode network is a group of areas in the human brain characterized, collectively, by functions of a self-referential nature. Self-referential processing has been found to be im