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1、http:/ 托福独立写作托福独立写作主体段主体段范例范例: 高级高级http:/ Sample 21论证论证: 大学毕业生数量增加有利于国家发展大学毕业生数量增加有利于国家发展Main Idea: A growing number of university graduates generate benefits to the country. 提升整体智力水平 推进国民生产率 提高生活水准 国家更强大、更繁荣 enhance intelligence level boost national productivity have higher living standards become

2、stronger and more prosperous http:/ Obviously, a growing number of university graduates generate various benefits to the country. In fact, this can directly increase peoples scope of knowledge and enhance the general intelligence level in the society. Since knowledge is power, it would undoubtedly b

3、oost a countrys national productivity as well as technological progress. On the individual level, citizens will have higher living standards and enjoy more leisure time. Thus, it is no exaggeration to say that a greater proportion of knowledgeable individuals mean that a nation will become stronger,

4、 more prosperous and even more politically stable.Sample 21论证论证: 大学毕业生数量增加有利于国家发展大学毕业生数量增加有利于国家发展Main Idea: A growing number of university graduates generate benefits to the country.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 事实事实SS1: SS1: 强调强调SS2: SS2: 因果因果SS3: SS3: 缩放缩放SS4: SS4: 小结小结http:/ Sample 22论证论证: 现代人永远不满足已经拥有的东西现代人永远

5、不满足已经拥有的东西Main Idea: People are always encouraged to chase one dream after another. 满足的人会被视为 没有雄心壮志 科技的加速发展使得 人们追求更多的东西 people who feel gratified is likely to be regarded as having no aspirations the accelerating development of modern science and technology http:/ Moreover, living in the fast-paced

6、modern society where success is synonymous with wealth and fame, people are always encouraged by to chase one dream after another. On the other hand, if a person feels gratified with what he has already had, he is most likely to be regarded as having no aspirations and unfairly labeled as being comp

7、lacent. In the ultimate analysis, what compels people to have strong desires for more things is the accelerating development of modern science and technology, which turn out a great number of new products to be consumed at an alarming tempo.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 递进递进SS1: SS1: 对比对比SS2: SS2: 小结小结Sample 22论证

8、论证: 现代人永远不满足已经拥有的东西现代人永远不满足已经拥有的东西Main Idea: People are always encouraged to chase one dream after another.http:/ Sample 23论证论证: 使用太多的机器会阻碍我们的个人发展使用太多的机器会阻碍我们的个人发展Main Idea: Using too many machines tends to hinder our personal development. 现代人过于依赖机器 造成人的惰性 阻碍人们的创造力 develop an unhealthy dependence br

9、eed a tendency of human laziness modern peoples creativity has been severely impaired http:/ A clear disadvantage to using too many machines is that they tend to hinder our personal development. First of all, todays humans have developed an unhealthy dependence on labor-saving machines, which is evi

10、denced by the numerous appliances in households and workplaces. This reliance on machinery breeds a tendency of human laziness which has already manifested itself in many aspects of the society. As a natural consequence, modern peoples creativity has been severely impaired because they are indulged

11、in the joys and thrills brought by digital devices and electronic innovations.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 优劣优劣SS1: SS1: 递进递进SS2: SS2: 指代指代SS3: SS3: 因果因果Sample 23论证论证: 使用太多的机器会阻碍我们的个人发展使用太多的机器会阻碍我们的个人发展Main Idea: Using too many machines tends to hinder our personal development.http:/ Sample 24论证论证: 在发展经济的同时要考虑到环

12、境在发展经济的同时要考虑到环境Main Idea: In economic development we need to take environment into consideration. 很多灾难会降临 自然报复人类的方式 许多动物丧失了领地 many disasters will descend on us nature takes its revenge on mankind thousands of birds and animals are losing their natural habitats http:/ Nonetheless, in the development

13、of housing and industry, we also need to take our natural environment into careful consideration. Indeed, if we pursue our economic goals so blindly as to ignore the creeping environmental degradation, many untold ecological disasters, such as acid rain and depletion of the ozone layer, are bound to

14、 descend on us. And this is exactly how nature takes its revenge on ignorant and arrogant mankind. Moreover, with humans conquering and inhabiting large tracts of land for housing and industrial purposes, thousands of birds and animals are losing their natural habitats.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 转折转折SS1: SS1:

15、强调强调SS2: SS2: 指代指代SS3: SS3: 递进递进Sample 24论证论证: 在发展经济的同时要考虑到环境在发展经济的同时要考虑到环境Main Idea: In economic development we need to take environment into consideration. http:/ Sample 25论证论证: 传统游戏有利于孩子的逻辑思维传统游戏有利于孩子的逻辑思维Main Idea: Some traditional games are conducive to childrens logical thinking. 善于打牌的孩子有更 高的逻

16、辑思维能力 象棋促进孩子的评估、 分析及预测能力 good card players show a higher level of logical thinking chess encourages children to assess, analyze and predicthttp:/ Moreover, some traditional games such as card games and chess are especially conducive to the development of logical thinking in young children. According

17、 to a recent study published in Popular Science, children who are good card players show a much higher level of logical thinking than their peers who never play cards. And when it comes to chess, this ancient game not only creates numerous challenges for young children, but also encourages them to a

18、ssess their circumstances, analyze their opponents strengths and weaknesses, and predict their next move.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 递进递进SS1: SS1: 引用引用SS2: SS2: 对比对比Sample 25论证论证: 传统游戏有利于孩子的逻辑思维发展传统游戏有利于孩子的逻辑思维发展Main Idea: Some traditional games are conducive to childrens logical thinking.http:/ Sample 26论证论证:

19、空运的发展促进了旅游相关产业的增长空运的发展促进了旅游相关产业的增长Main Idea: Development of air travel promotes growth of tourism-related industries. 酒店和餐馆业在发展 其它交通产业也兴旺 为工薪阶层创造工作 机会 hotels and restaurants are expanding transport businesses are thriving create a huge number of job opportunities for the working classhttp:/ In a bro

20、ad sense, the development of air travel has promoted the exponential growth of a lot of tourism-related industries. On the one hand, as air travel can bring more holiday-makers and business travelers, the hotel and restaurant industries are expanding unprecedentedly in many popular destinations. On

21、the other hand, other transport businesses such as coach, taxi and car rental are thriving as tourists are being led or allured to visit one sightseeing spot after another. All this economic prosperity has created a huge number of job opportunities for the working class in many less developed region

22、s of the world.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 缩放缩放 SS1: SS1: 对比对比SS2: SS2: 对比对比SS3: SS3: 指代指代Sample 26论证论证: 空运的发展促进了旅游相关产业的增长空运的发展促进了旅游相关产业的增长Main Idea: Development of air travel promotes growth of tourism-related industries.http:/ Sample 27论证论证: 电子邮件会破坏人与人的情感交流电子邮件会破坏人与人的情感交流Main Idea: Email may damage emotional

23、exchanges between modern people. 缺乏个人的风格 注入更少的情感 收到大量的垃圾邮件 lack a personal touch infuse less emotion into the process receive an annoying amount of junk mail every week http:/ Sample 27论证论证: 电子邮件会破坏人与人的情感交流电子邮件会破坏人与人的情感交流Main Idea: Email may damage emotional exchanges between modern people.Firstly,

24、sending email via the Internet may damage the emotional exchanges between modern people. In comparison with letters, this electronic communication lacks a personal touch because its standards and functions have been predetermined to produce a universal format and appearance. Also, using keyboard and

25、 screen instead of the pen and paper, we often find ourselves infusing less emotion into the writing process. What is even worse, most Internet users have the experience of receiving an annoying amount of junk mail every week, which is infested with various unsolicited advertisements.论证方法论证方法TS: TS:

26、 递进递进SS1: SS1: 对比对比SS2: SS2: 递进递进SS3: SS3: 递进递进http:/ Sample 28论证论证: 科学研究的私有化隐藏着潜在的危险科学研究的私有化隐藏着潜在的危险Main Idea: There is a hidden risk in the privatization of scientific research. 科研有可能失控 转卖科研成果 从事大规模杀伤性 武器的研发 research is likely to get out of control be allured to sell scientific findings be engaged

27、 in developing weapons of mass destructionhttp:/ However, there is a hidden risk in the privatization of scientific research. This means that the research is likely to get out of control in the hands of private companies whose single purpose is to accumulate wealth. For instance, some private corpor

28、ations are allured to sell their scientific findings to people with anti-social ambitions. What is worse, they may be engaged in the lucrative but dangerous business of developing weapons of mass destruction, plunging the whole world into grave jeopardy.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 转折转折SS1: SS1: 指代指代SS2: SS2: 举例

29、举例SS3: SS3: 递进递进Sample 28论证论证: 科学研究的私有化隐藏着潜在的危险科学研究的私有化隐藏着潜在的危险Main Idea: There is a hidden risk in the privatization of scientific research.http:/ Sample 29论证论证: 一个人的心理成熟与其独处的时间有关一个人的心理成熟与其独处的时间有关Main Idea: A persons mental maturity is in direct proportion to their time alone. 培养明辨思维能力 情绪更稳定 减少与朋友吃

30、吃喝喝 的时间 develop critical thinking abilities show greater emotional stability cut down their spare time spent in dining and wining with friends http:/ According to an established theory of psychology, a persons mental maturity is in direct proportion to the amount of time they spend alone. This is be

31、cause people who are inclined to spend time in undisturbed solitude can develop more critical thinking abilities than those who enjoy the company of others. Moreover, a team of researchers from Cambridge University have proved that the former category of people generally show greater emotional stabi

32、lity and are less prone to traffic accidents. Thus, they suggest that modern people should cut down on their spare time spent in dining and wining with their friends.论证方法论证方法TS: TS: 引用引用SS1: SS1: 因果因果SS2: SS2: 递进递进SS3: SS3: 因果因果Sample 29论证论证: 一个人的心理成熟与其独处的时间有关一个人的心理成熟与其独处的时间有关Main Idea: A persons mental maturity is in direct proportion to their time alone.http:/ Sample 30论证论证: 帮助穷国的发达国家其实也在帮自己帮助穷国的发达