中考英语作文复习之地点介绍PPT课件

1、第1页/共22页【话题解读】 地点介绍类的写作对象涉及公园、博物馆等具体的场所，也包括城市、国家等。对一般性的场所进行介绍，首先要注意安排好介绍顺序。空间顺序使用居多，常用的有：从外到内，从左到右，由远及近，由高到低，从整体到局部等。也可以以参观者的行踪为顺序进行介绍。而对于城市、国家等，介绍层面通常包括位置、历史、名胜古迹、今昔变化等。不论是哪种类型，最后在结尾处通常都需要作者发表一下个人观点或意见。第2页/共22页【真题回放】 假如下图是你学校的平面建筑示意图。请你根据所给提示，以“My School” 为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你学校的建筑布局情况并谈谈你对学校的看法。第3页

2、/共22页第4页/共22页注意：1. 短文中不能出现真实的学校名称和考生姓名；2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。My SchoolThis is a map of my school. _(2016 山东聊城)第5页/共22页【真题分析】 该写作任务要求介绍学校的建筑布局，属于地点介绍类的说明文。写作前先确定介绍顺序，可以从校门开始，按照从前到后、从左到右的顺序依次介绍。谈谈对学校的看法是写作任务中明确要求的，可以表达自己的喜爱之情，也可以表达不满或意见等。第6页/共22页【标准范文】My School This is a map of my school. Walking into the

3、 school gate, you can see a big playground in the middle of the school. Behind it is the teaching building. On theleft side of the playground, you can see the office building. A stadium is to the northof it. In the northwest corner is the dining hall. On the right side of the playground,there is the

4、 science building. 第7页/共22页And the library is located in the northeast corner. I love my school. Its the best school I have ever seen.第8页/共22页第9页/共22页【高分突破】My School This is a map of my school. The school gate faces the south. Two lines of big tall trees stand on each side of the gate, welcoming eve

5、ry student. Right in front of the gate is a big playground. It is a center for fun. Behind the playground is the teaching building where I study. On the left side of the playground, you can see the office building. And a stadium is to the north of it. In the northwest corner stands the dining hall.

6、第10页/共22页Now lets turn to the right side of the playground. As you can see, there are two buildings. The science building is near the school gate and the library is located in the northeast corner. I love my school. It is not only a place for learning, but also a place for fun.第11页/共22页【高分揭秘】1. 习作按照

7、从前到后、从左到右的顺序依次介绍 了学校的建筑布局，结构紧凑，层次合理。2. 习作中用了不同的词语来描写位置关系，避免 了单调和重复，如in front of, behind, to the north, in the northwest corner, near the school gate等。3. 习作不仅介绍了建筑布局，也穿插了一些个性 化的、情感化的表达，使习作生动有趣，如 welcoming every student, a center for fun等。第12页/共22页【素材积累】1. 词汇位置：on the right / left, in front of, behind

8、, at the foot of, on the top of, near, next to, close to, inside, outside, across, through存在：be, lie, stand, locate特征：large, small, huge, deep, long, modern, ancient, popular, attractive第13页/共22页2. 句子 I like my school very much and I am proud that I belong to it. My favorite thing about my city is t

9、he fact that it has so many wonderful parks. The museum is just like a huge book to tell you the history of China. My hometown has left many soft and sweet memories in my heart. Its beauty is beyond words. I really hope you could get a chance to come and experience it for yourself.第14页/共22页【写作任务】 假设

10、英语课上将以“家乡的名胜”为话题展开讨论，请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍中国十大历史文化名街之一的福州三坊七巷。第15页/共22页三坊七巷三坊七巷Three Lanes and Seven Alleys位置：市位置：市中心中心交通：便利交通：便利特色：特色：老式建筑，老式建筑，明清风格明清风格名人故居，名人故居，保护完好保护完好民俗展示，民俗展示，传承文化传承文化美食特产，美食特产，品种丰富品种丰富感想感想(写写1-2点点)第16页/共22页要求：1) 内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规 范；2) 请不要逐字翻译；词数90左右，不包含已给 出的句子的词数。参考词汇：便利的

11、 convenient 明清风格 the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty故居 former home 民俗 folk custom 传承 pass on 特产 special local product第17页/共22页 Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China. _(2014 福建福州)第18页/共22页【参考范文】 Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou i

12、s among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China. It lies in the city center and the traffic is convenient. Its famous for old buildings in the style of the Ming and Qing Dynasty. Many famous persons in history used to live here. Their former homes are well protected and attract lots of people from home and abroad. There are wonderful folk custom shows that pass on the culture of Fuzhou. 第19页/共22页Besides, the tourists can e