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1、2014烟台一模作文 假如你是高三学生李华，今年高考英语学科阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示写信向你的前外教MrJohnson求助：1英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；2希望得到他的指导和帮助。注意：1词数：l20l50，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear MrJohnson，Yours, Li Hua审题立意审题立意( (体裁，人称，时态体裁，人称，时态) ) 应用文，书信应用文，书信 第一人称第一人称 I I 时态：时态： 一般现在时一般现在时 罗列要点罗列要点 第一部分，第一部分，openingope

2、ning 寒暄语寒暄语+ + 简明点明写信原因简明点明写信原因 第二部分，第二部分，bodybody（可分两段）（可分两段） 1英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；2希望得到他的指导和帮助。 第三部分，第三部分，endingending（期待与希望）（期待与希望） 第四部分，第四部分，落款落款signaturesignature它山之石它山之石- -Opening:1. It has been a long time since you returned to America. (瑜)2. Hows it going with you ? Stressed and worried,

3、Im writing to you to seek for your help in learning English.(诚)3. Im sorry to bother you but I really have had trouble studying English recently and I need your help eagerly. (驰+喆) 它山之石它山之石- -Body: 4. As you know, I had difficulty in learning English when you taught me. Although I have made progress

4、 after strict training, I still do not well in English. What makes thing worse is that （宇）5. First , I always find myself lost in words while expressing myself. Unfortunately, reading is exactly what I am not good at.（知）6.Im not good at reading, so it always takes me a lot of time to understand the

5、articles . Because of this, Im under big pressure.（凡）7. Whats more, I always get puzzled in reading when faced with(=facing) sentences that consist of unfamiliar words and phrases.（敖）8. All of teachers attach great significance to the capability of reading. Hard as I try, I still find it hard to imp

6、rove.（郭）Ending:9. Id appreciate it if you could Ill appreciate it if you can10.Looking forward to your early reply. 小姜与小颜（盐）的作文 Salt and ginger are very important in our daily life.As the saying goes,冬吃萝卜夏吃姜（jiang），不用医生开处方（fang）。西方人推崇吃苹果：An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 翻译一下：“一天一苹果（guo），医生远离我（w

7、o）” 颜家骥Dear Mr. Johnson, How time flies! I have not seen you for a long time. Now,I m busy preparing for the NationalCollege Entrance Exam. But I havesome problems in English.As you know, the examimproves th requirementsof reading. But Im not good at reading. So I feel the pressure more and more hea

8、vy, which evenmakes me cant sleep (unable to sleep)well. Although I have taken somemeasures to change the situation, Imake no progress. So Im very puzzled. I would appreciateit if you could give me some guidanceand help. I believe I could make itwith your generous help. Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writin

9、g to tell you someTroubles I meet these days and hope to get some advice from you. 姜奕帆 With the college entranceexam approaching, I feel moreStressful than ever. What makesthings worse is that we have to read more articles to finish the paperduring the English exam. As you know,Im not good at Englis

10、h, especially atreading. I am always fighting againstthe English words while readingarticles. It makes me more and more nervous and I really dont haveenough confidence to continue.Every time I open the English book, I just feel helpless and hopeless.So what can I do to change it?Id appreciate it if

11、you could give me advice on improvingReading ability. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, LihuaDear Mr. Johnson,（范文） How are things going with you? Im writing to ask for your help. Asyou know, Im weak in English readingcomprehension. Although I have triedevery means to improve it, likeexpanding my

12、 vocabulary and doing alarge number of exercises, so far allmy efforts have ended up in failure,which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higherpercentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing

13、near, I feel more and more stressed and worried. If I didnt take effective measures, I wouldntbe able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream. Ill appreciate it very much if you can giveme some advice on how to improve myreading ability effectively and Im lookingforward to your

14、early reply. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 回信假如你是一家报社的编辑布莱克先生，收到了高三学生李华的来信。近来他在英语阅读上有些困难，做阅读理解题时常出错，由于时间紧，任务重，很着急，不知该如何做，请求你给想想办法，尽快调整好，适应高三的学习生活。请你根据以上的情况写一篇120150的回信。 Dear Li Hua， Im glad to hear from you. Imhonored to be believed.（寒暄）I know you have trouble in doingexercises in reading and you arewo

15、rried. Here is some advice, whichmay be of help to you.（点明写信原因） Firstly, you should know everyonecan meet with the same difficulty. Youshould have confidence, which is thekey to success. Secondly, youd betternot be afraid of making mistakes. Thirdly, you should go on reading the passageone passage a

16、 day.After a short period of time, youwill find you make fewermistakes. Insisting on Readingthe end is to victory. Lastly, youshould make a proper plan foryour subjects, which will behelpful to your future study.（body） As far as Im concerned, if youdo like this, I believe you willmake great progress. （ending） Best wishes! Yours， Mr Black 附表达答案66. experience/suffer/have/face water shortage/crisis or: be short of