小升初小学英语作文指导与欣赏兴趣爱好习惯篇

1、小 升 初 英 语 作 文小学英语作文指导与欣赏-兴趣爱好习惯篇hobbieshi, i am amy. i am a student. i like plying football and reading books. i also like listening to music. mike and tim are my friends. mike likes playing the pipa. he alsolikes reading books. tim likes reading books, too. he also likes doing chinese kung fu. we a

2、re good friends.i like zhongshan parki often go to zhongshan park. in the park you can see many trees and flowers.some flowers are red, and some are purple. the trees are big and tall. you can see ahill in the park, too. at the foot of the hill, there are several paths. a lot of people in thecity li

3、ke going to the park. some young people like taking a walk there. some old peoplelike singing there. some children like dancing or playing games there. zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation.生单词：1. several:几个2. relaxation:放松点评：这篇作文简单明了。首先，作者向大家简单地描绘出了公园的风景：有山有水有花。然后，作者写了人们在公园里的活动：青年人在公

4、园里散步，老年人在公园里唱歌，小孩子在公园里玩游戏，多么快乐的一组画面啊！最后，作者作 出总结：中山公园真的是一个放松心情的好地方！1小 升 初 英 语 作 文li ying s hobbyli ying likes english very much. she works hard at it. she reads english everymorning. she likes speaking english. she often listens to the radio. she watches tvonly on saturday evening.does she like danci

5、ng? no, she doesnt. but she likes drawingand singing. her parents love her. and all the teachers and her friends like her, too. she says her hobbies make her happy.【要领点评】这一篇写爱好的文章，小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习，他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好，而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手，对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画。从“ 爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。小朋友们写这种 “叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角

6、度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和范文一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另外在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的 “do es she like dancing? no, she doesnt.” 和“she says her hobbies make her ha ppy.” 就是十分不错 的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。my favourite animalmy favourite animal is rabbit. its name is sweet. sweet has long ears. its verysmall. its whit

7、e. it has a short tail. it has red eyes. it likes eating carrots. it likes jumping.it goes jumping three times a day. i like it very much. its lovely. its my best friend. i like the rabbit.2小 升 初 英 语 作 文my favourite seasonmy favourite season is summer. its hot in summer. there is a summer vacation i

8、nsummer. i dont go to school. i think many children like this season, because they caneat ice cream and go swimming. i can go swimming. sometimes i go to the beach withmy parents. sometimes i go to the swimming pool with my friends. i usually visit many places in summer vacation.my favourite fooddo

9、you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow. its long and thin. it lookslike a small boat. oh, it is a banana. do you know what that is? guess again! its colouris orange. its round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange.i like the m a lot. i like ice creams. i li

10、ke to chew ing gum. chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much. how about you? whats your favourite food?【要领点评】my favourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地 进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。my hobbymy hobby is collecting stamps. there are many stamps in

11、 my room. i like stampsvery much. there are many things on the stamps. they are colorful and beautiful. after3小 升 初 英 语 作 文school i usually go to the post office and there are many people there. i learn a lot from collecting stamps. i like collecting stamps very much.my hobbyi am cindy. i am in no.1 primary school. i am in class 9, grade 6. i am tall andthin. i live in dali. i have many good friends. i often play with them. i have manyhobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading b