专业英语八级写作-39

1、 专业英语八级写作-39(总分：200.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、test one(总题数：1，分数：20.00)1.nowadays, children are apt to spend a lot of time playing computer games. many parents pointout that computer games have little educational value, children should be prevented from computergames. what is your opinion? write an essay of abo

2、ut 400 words to state your view. you shouldsupply an appropriate title for your essay.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(参考范文the merits of playing computer gamesnowadays, more and more adolescents have lingered in net-bar for days to experience what theyperceive to beexcitement. but there is such a largeamount of cri

3、ticism concerning the computergames that they are generally regarded as a vile way of infecting hostility and belligerence.and the managers of such business are severely criticized by the schools and parents .alike. onthe other hand, this business seems never fading. it has become a success in many

4、places, evenif it is strictly controlled by certain policies. in my opinion, the advantages of playing computergames outweigh its disadvantages.to begin with, computer games present a worlda much simpler world than our own, wherein successis very clearly defined and easily attained. through practice

5、, a player can control the worldfor a while as he pleases. he can escape from the anxieties of the real world and hide into aplace where his own actions always count, where he can be a hero and can fulfill his goal andgain satisfaction. when the game is over, he is neither lost nor beaten.then, most

6、 computer games call for some delicate and intriguing hand-and-eye coordination. somehospitals are now using them in rehabilitation programs for brain-damaged patients. it has beenfound that some patients who were otherwise thought to be unreachable have been brought outthrough their use. moreover,

7、experimental research is now being conducted regarding thefeasibility of computer games as a test for drunken driving. this is because the intoxicants tendto slow reaction and impair coordination.computer games are not restricted to mere twitch games, however, strategy games are becomingmore and mor

8、e popular, and among these are the so-called fantasy role-playing adventures. thesegames allow players to construct a whole personality, choosing strengths and weakness from a listof possible character traits. in due course, the players train their abilities in confrontingwith new circumstances, and

9、 whats more, they learn how to communicate with their targeted rivals,in a novel and friendly way.to sum up, the computer game mirrors a balance between reality and our own wishes. it has becomean outlet for emotion. whenever we are happy or in frustration, we can get into the world of computergames

10、. but we should bear in mind that everything has two sides. the computer game would alsodo harm to us if we are reduced to its prisoners.)解析：本话题描述的是当前孩子花费大量的时间用来玩电脑游戏，这一现象让家长很担心。文章开篇从反面引出作者的观点：电脑游戏利大于弊。接下来具体阐述其原因：首先，电脑游戏的世界是一个比现实简单的世界，在那里孩子可以轻松体验到成功的喜悦，忘掉现实生活中的焦虑。其次，电脑游戏可以培养孩子的合作精神。再次，一些电脑游戏提供了真实场景，

11、可以磨炼孩子的性格，让其发瑚自己的优缺点，从 而正确寻找解决问题的方法，达到目标。最后，电脑游戏是现实世界和美好愿望的一面镜子。它可以让我们快乐，忘却烦恼。但是，任何事物都有其两面性，因此，我们必须正确看待电脑游戏。二、test two(总题数：1，分数：20.00)2.most companies consider ones degree when recruiting new members. some think it is necessarysince degree is the proof of ones education.others doubt if degree is the

12、 only thing valuable.what is your opinion? write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic:（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(参考范文is degree the only thing valuable?university, as a significant cultural force, has brought itself to wide recognition and undeniablehigh social status, therefore, people beli

13、eve ones academic performance in university willsignificantly set his future. in our society, the most commonly recognized standard of a studentsacademic achievement is the degree. some people regard the degree as the only thing valuable whilestudying in college. admittedly, the degree is essential

14、for students who want to have a prosperousfuture, but it is by no means the only opportunity university grants us.first of all,the university provides us with a huge amount of knowledge but not a paper of acertificate. students in the university should be fascinated by the knowledge they wants to kn

15、ow,but not forces themselves to learn the textbooks so as to pass the examination to get their degree.this can only prevent students from building a solid foundation for their professional knowledgeand destroy their interest in learning. only when students realize the degree is not the onlything can

16、 they hold the proper attitude towards learning and study efficiently and happily.second, the university presents us an enjoyable atmosphere of study as welt as of other activities.associating with different people on campus, discussing with your professor over a practical topic,and reading in the q

17、uiet library, all these can strongly shape your inclination, mature yourthoughts, widen your horizon, and enrich your personality. when students consider the universityas a place to enhance their standard of appreciation and taste, and to receive education in allaspects, the university can give them

18、 more than degrees-it will be an all-round reward.lastly, it is not always absolutely true that the higher the degree, the better the job. manygreat men made their startling contribution without a good degree or even without a good schoolrecord. for example, einstein got many poor grades in college

19、and sometimes he even thought theexams as intolerable. but he turned out to be one of the most brilliant scientific giants inhistory. the truth is that his university career and the new ideas he contacted with in collegegave rise to his profound insight of the world and then the theory of relativity

20、 was born. sowe can see clearly that degree isnt everything.so, as i see it, though the degree plays an important role in ones future career, it will byno means dominate ones life. universities furnish a variety of opportunities for students; degreeis only one of them. what youd learned in universit

21、y is more essential, for it is your real asset.seize every opportunity and take full advantage of what the university provides, then there canbe no future save a brilliant one.)解析：本文要求针对学历是否是唯一有价值的东西这一论题陈述自己的观点，并且给出充分的论据，最后，在以上议论的基础上得出一个自然而合理的结论，或者总结。行文上，第一段提出观点要明确，切忌模棱两可。可以用反驳法，先说明学历对人们的影响，然后提出自己明确

22、的观点。第二部分分段写论据，要做到层次分明、论述充分，有条理、有逻辑地从不同方面阐述自己的观点。可首先论述大学提供给我们的是知识而不只是一纸文凭；其次论述大学营造了学习和其他活动的氖围；最后论述学历并非是找到好工作的 保障。最后一段，自然得出结论，语言要精辟，以加深读者对本文的印象。最后，也可再次强调大学提供给学生的并非只有文凭，做到首尾呼应。三、test three(总题数：1，分数：20.00)3.for most senior students there are mainly two alternatives: one is to find a job; the otheris to

23、pursue postgraduate study. for different senior students there should be a choice that ismore suitable than the other. which do you think is more suitable for you? why do you think so?write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic:（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(参考范文finding a job or going on studyin

24、g?do you plan to take the entrance examination for postgraduate study, or to find a job? it is achoice that almost all university graduates have to face nowadays. after careful consideration,i believe that pursuing postgraduate study is more suitable for me.first and foremost, pursuing postgraduate

25、study can allow me to learn more knowledge. i am alwaysfascinated by things that i do not know, and dream to be a learned person. if i stay at universityfor three more years, i certainly can know more about english, especially about english literature.whats more, postgraduate study will not only exp

26、and my knowledge scope, but also enhance theknowledge quality. undergraduate students spend most time learning facts, but postgraduatestudents will learn about understanding, evaluating, and criticizing. therefore, afterpostgraduate study, i will be better at research work and judging different opin

27、ions. this isof a higher level than the knowledge of undergraduate students.the second reason, which is more practical, is that pursuing postgraduate study can secure a betterjob. since universities in china have tried to admit more students, the competition in the jobmarket is becoming more and mor

28、e fierce. every year, universities turn out hundreds of thousandsof graduates, but there are simply not enough job opportunities for them. in such a situation,well-paid jobs are virtually impossible for an undergraduate. if i finish my postgraduate study,i will be able to compete with better qualifi

29、cations, and i will certainly hold more chances toget a better job.the third reason, which i would hesitate to admit, is that i dont think i am ready for the society.although i am already an adult, my four years of adult life is spent entirely on campus, whichis little similar to the real society. i

30、 am afraid that if i started working now, i would notbe able to handle the complex situations in the society well. i suppose that if i can go on studying,i can try to understand and experiment with the society in the next three years. i believe i willcope with the society well by the end of the thre

31、e years.in a word, to acquire more knowledge, to get a better job, and to prepare myself better for thesociety are the three major reasons why i choose to go on studying. i know postgraduate studymay be challenging, but i expect that when i finish it, i will achieve these three targets, andfeel deli

32、ghted that i have found the correct answer for myself.)解析：本文要求针对高年级大学生是找工作还是继续学习这一论题进行论证。行文上，第一段提出观点要明确，可以先提出选择性问题，然后明确表明自己的观点。切忌在问题讨论上冗长繁缛。在句式上，可以用较经典的复合句提出自己的观点；第二部分分段写论据，要注意层次分明、论述充分，有条理、有逻辑地从不同方面论述自己的观点，比如可以从大学生自我发展的角度出发，分析大学毕业后学生是否具有足够的专业知识、是否能够解决所面临的现实问题，以及是否具备应对社会的能力等，内容上要符合时代特征；最后一段自然得出结论，再次

33、重申自己的观点，并进行总结，对未来进行预测，做到首尾呼应。 四、test four(总题数：1，分数：20.00)4.nobody is living alone and people are living in a team or teams, so team spirit is of greatimportance in the present society. what do you think of team spirit? write an essay of about 400words entitled.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(参考范文on team spiritnow

34、people in increasing numbers are coming to recognize the importance of team spirit. in myopinion, there are two main reasons for this : one is that some work cannot be finished by a singlepersons ability ; the other is that a competitive society cannot be separated from cooperation,namely, the team

35、spirit.after all, on the one hand, ones ability is limited. whatever you do, as long as you are cooperative,the achievement will be much greater than what you have made with your own effort. for example,if a construction project is totally left in the hands of a single person, some irreparable damag

36、emay come into being because his planning is inevitably short of perfection. as the saying goes,two heads are better than one. on the other hand, today we still have many challenges beforeus. for instance, medical science faces the challenges of conquering many diseases which stillattack human being

37、s; engineers and planners must build new cities, design and produce new kindsof transportation; scientists must develop new forms of energy. only based on the team-work canwe meet these challenges.moreover, in a society submerged in diverse competitions, cooperation between members of a teamor teams

38、 can guarantee success. with social competition becoming more and more furious, the closerelationship between competition and cooperation is increasingly recognized. nobody can affordto deny the importance of cooperation if he expects to make himself and his team more competitive.take a basketball g

39、ame for example. while one team is competing with the otherteam, each playerof the team is cooperating with his or her teammates. in most cases, we cant go on competingwithout cooperation. only together with cooperation will competition help us a lot in obtainingour goals and push us to strive ahead

40、 for success. to make this human world more beautiful, weshould lay equal stress on competition and team spirit.the reasons we have advanced justifies the unmistakable conclusion that team-work is thefoundation of achieving success. surely, these reasons are worth considering in any discussionabout

41、team spirit. it is, therefore, my philosophy of life to becooperative in my undertaking.)解析：本文要求对团队精神进行论证。行文上，第一段应该提出明确的观点，提出团队精神在当今社会如此重要的原因：个人力量有限和社会不是孤立存在的。接下来具体阐述其两点原因。在这一阐述过程中，可以运用举例说明，名人谚语等；使用很多亮点词句，如 on the other hand, two heads are better thanone，moreover, surely等。最后得出结论：只有合作、发扬团队精神，才能成功。五、t

42、est five(总题数：1，分数：20.00)5.almost all university students want to be successful in learning, but many of them fail to achieveit. what are the principles of successful learning? write an essay of about 400 words on thefollowing topic: （分数：20.00）_正确答案：(参考范文successful learningthe problem of learning so

43、much during the four years of school life is often discussed. in myopinion, to be successful in ones learning, the following principles should be borne in mindtheyare good study habits, perseverance, and full concentration.the first key factor for successful learning is to establish good study habit

44、s. students withpoor study habits often frantically do all their reviewing just in a day or two before examination.the result usually is that they come to examination not only exhausted but also confused by amass of unrelated facts. however, they could have avoided all this by keeping up with theira

45、ssignments, making orderly notes, and reviewing their notes regularly. periodic review andbeginning to study for the exams early will save the time in the long run and prevent cramming.in this way they can be well rested and more motivated and less anxious on test day. of course,studying shouldnt oc

46、cupy all of the free time on the schedule. its important to set aside timefor relaxation, hobbies, and entertainment as well. whats more, a good attitude toward testsbenefits a lot. the purpose of a test is to check what students have learned about a subject.if they dont pass a test, they ought not

47、to be unduly upset about the result. tests provide grades,but also let them know what they need to spend more time studying, and make the knowledge permanent.besides, students needperseverance to stick to their habits. just as the old saying goes, itseasier said than done. day after day, learning is

48、 terribly boring for some students, so theymay likely give up. however, no pains, no gains. the thing that they need most is perseverance,or a strong will. with perseverance, there is nothing that they can not achieve. but if withoutit, any good habits are sure to prove fruitless.lastly, full concen

49、tration is essential. while studying, many students just inattentively runtheir eyes over a page between frequent distractions from a cell phone and conversation. fivehours of this kind of study are worth less than an hour of uninterrupted concentration. whatevercourse we are learning, we must learn

50、 it wholeheartedly. only when we set our minds on the coursecan we achieve success in our academic learning.in summary., students should make a great effort to form good study habits, to stick to them,concentrate fully on what they are learning. only in this way can they stand a better chance toachi

51、eve successful learning.)解析：本文要求对大学在校生如何在学习上做到行之有效这一论题进行论述。首先应指出“大学四年里学习上遇到的问题很多”，提出自己的观点：形成良好的学习习惯，贵在持之以恒等；接下来对观点进行论述。注意层次分明，论据充分。比如可以通过正反举例说明要有良好的学习习惯的关键性；再次，需要毅力去坚持这种好习惯；最后，提出学习的基本因素在于集中精力。文章最后重申主题，做到首尾呼应。六、test six(总题数：1，分数：20.00)6.currently, every college student knows that ability is important

52、. they would like to attendvarious training programs and apply for different certificates so that they are more competent.do you think that attending training programs and getting more certificates can improve competence?write an essay of about 400 words entitled: do more certificates stand for bett

53、er ability?（分数：20.00） _正确答案：(参考范文do more certificates stand for better ability?this is the very hot season for the college graduates to hunt for jobs in the market. you maysee a lot of graduates holding a variety of certificates indicating their versatile skills. everycollege student knows that abil

54、ity is important. they would like to attend various trainingprograms and apply for different certificates so that they are more competent. however, canattending training programs and getting more certificates improve their competence? as far asi am concerned, the certificates do not really mean comp

55、etence.first of all, the certificates are simply several pieces of papers proving that you have attendedsome training programs. whether you are competent or not really depends upon your cleverness andexperience. for example, many english majors have passed the tem-8, an english test specific forthe

56、language students. does that mean their english is perfect once getting such a certificate?not exactly. the fact is you may find, more often than not, that many students speak broken englishand write poor english. the reason is that they may assume that a certificate can prove theirenglish is very good. so they stop their daily exercises and training and rest on the