初三Unit1topic1作文讲解

1、The Changes in My Hometown,书面表达,1. 围绕中心，拟定提纲,2. 语言流畅，表达准确,3. 不会表达，另辟蹊径,4. 锦上添花，量力而行,Correct the following sentences.,1. In the 2002s, we had playground. So we were play football, play basketball and run. 2. This is my hometowns changes. 3. Nowday, everythings have great changes. 4. Im more and more

2、like my hometown! 5. My hometown more and more beautiful.,2002,played,played,ran,These are,Nowadays,everything,I like my hometown much more as the time passes.,is/become,has,6. Great changes have take place there. 7. The road is big and light 8. There have trees, rivers and birds. I like living in t

3、here. 9.The buildings has taller. 10. The childrens can get a education.,taken,wider and wider,are,are/become,children,an,The Changes in My Hometown,Sample writing,Do you want to know something about my hometown? Let me tell you something about it. In the past, the living conditions were poor. The r

4、oads were narrow and the houses were small and dark. Many families couldnt get enough food to eat and only a few children had the chance to receive a good education. Whats more, some children had to be child laborers to help support their families. They were so poor.,But nowadays, my hometown develo

5、ped rapidly. More and more ring roads have appeared and the buildings are becoming taller and brighter. The children can receive a good education. Peoples living conditions have improved a lot. They can get enough food to eat and there are many kinds of clothes to choose from. Whats more, people can enjoy more so