托福写作独立写作万能段子分析

1、【托福写作】独立写作万能段子分析一.成就感(achievement)关键词句:asenseofachievementvirtuouscycle良性循环grandfeat/exploit辉煌的业绩attainmentofgoalselevateourself-esteembeconductivetoself-actualization有助于自我实现万能段落：bydoing(something),wecanenjoyasenseofachievement.thefeatofaccomplishingisconductivetoself-actualization,whichwillinevitab

2、lyelevateourself-esteem.inflatedesteemwillproportionallycontributetoevenmoresolidachievement.thisisvirtuouscycletowardabettercareer.forexample,ihavearelativewhoworksinabigcompany.hewasonceawardedtheopportunitytotravelabroadthatexcitedhimforquitealongtime.afterthatheworkedevenharderandgainedtheelevat

3、edesteem.二.被认可感(acknowledgement)关键词句:awillingox任劳任怨的人selflesscontributionthestatofbeingrecognizedasenseofbelongingprovidesatisfactionmotivationforfurtherimprovement万能段落:byacknowledgement,imeanthestateofbeingrecognized.whenwearerecognizedbyourcompany(school/college/group/communityorsociety),wecanexpe

4、rienceasenseofbelonging.thefeelingofbeingrecognizedprovidessatisfactionandmotivationforfurtherimprovement.hence,whenapersoncanbeidentifiedbyothers,thesubsequentoutcomecanbebeyondimagination.billgates,throughluck,diligence,andteamspiritleadsmicrosofttosplendor.andhedistributeshiswealthgenerously,whic

5、hwonhimaname:thegreatestphilanthropistaroundtheworld.hissuccessisacknowledgedbyoursociety.andhissatisfactionindexcanbehigherthanthatofanyotherpeers.三.健康(health)关键词句:ingredientstosoundhealth健康的要素physicalhealthpsychologicalhealthwell-adjustedtothesocietysoundhealthasfitasafiddle身体好discardhealthhazardr

6、obuststrength体力充沛healthisabovewealth.万能段落：freshair,cleanwaterandnutritiousfoodareindispensableingredientstosoundhealth.soifweliveingoodenvironmentandenjoyhealthfuldiet,ourphysicalhealthcanbeguaranteed.alsoifwehavepositivehobbieslikereadingandothermentalpursuits,ourpsychologicalhealthcanbeelevated.an

7、yway,healthisabovewealth,weshouldexertoureffortstodiscardhealthhazardinordertoattainabetterlife.四.安全(safety)关键词句:beprotectedagainstfailure,damageasenseofsecurityfacilitatetheharmonyofsocietysafetyisthetoppriority.万能段落：safetyreferstotheconditionofbeingprotectedagainstfailure,damage,error,accidents,ha

8、rm,etcetera.safetyisusuallyourmainconcern.五.方便(convenience)关键词句:performdailyerrands从事日常业务geteasyaccessto容易接近donothavetoexertourselvestoomuch不用太费力气conveniencematters.便利至关重要万能段落：conveniencemeansbeingsuitableandusefulforustocarryoutdailytasks.ifsomethingisconvenientandeasytobemadeuseof,wegeteasyaccessi

9、t,thenthepotentialcanbefullyexploited.wedonothavetoexertourselvestoomuchtoobtainthebenefit.asaresult,wecandevotemoretimeandeffortstoaccomplishingotherbusinessthatisurgentandpivotal.2六.沟通(communication)关键词句:peopleskill人际交往能力disparatepeople各色人等bareonesheart敞开心扉exchangeofideastransmissionofmessagesharm

10、onyoftherelationshipcommunicationcanbeheart-warmingchannelsofcommunicationareopen万能段落：communicationisabouttheexchangeofideas,opinionsandinformationthroughwrittenorspokenwords,symbolsoractions.thesmoothexchangeofinformationandideasbetweendisparatepeoplecanbethrillingandheart-warming.whenwebareourhear

11、tstocommunicate,wecaneliminatetheconflictorcontradiction.thus,thedistanceamongpeoplewillsurelybeshortened.thus,wecanachievethepurposeoftransmissionofmessages.inthemeanwhile,theinteractionarises,whichdefinitelyimprovesteamwork.hence,wecanharvest(garner/reap)boththesuccessofcooperationandtheharmonyoft

12、herelationship.七.持久性(durability)关键词句:lastingnessofgoodsdeepimpressioneternal/everlastingimpactfar-reachinginfluenceunforgettablememorygarner/assimilatenutrition汲取营养万能段落：bydurability,imeangoodsmayhavelastingness;loveiseternal;friendshipiseverlasting.whensomethinggivesusdeepimpression,wesurelywillhave

13、anunforgettablememory.forexample,paperwritingandclassroomdiscussionsaremoredurableinourmindthanexaminationscangive.whenwebuildalibrary,webuildacradleofknowledge.thisisatransformationoflife,whichcanbedurableandfar-reaching.八.愿望(desire)关键词句:cravefor/longfor/yearnfor/pineforcreaturesofdesire欲望之物meetour

14、needstoonesheartscontent尽情享受fulfillonesdreamsatisfyonesvanity满足虚荣心万能段落：desirereferstoourhopeorinclination.weareallcreaturesofdesires.wetryourbest/endeavortosatisfyourdesireandvanity:thedesiretorelaxtoourheartscontent;thedesiretogainmoreknowledge;thedesiretoearnbigmoneyandthedesiretobeloved.tomeetone

15、sdesireistoenjoyahappylife.hence,weareallwillingtosacrificeourtimeandeffortstomakeourheartsdesirefulfilled.九.效率(efficient)关键词句:makefulluseofresourcenottosquanderefficiency-conscioustakeashortcut走捷径efficiencyisgold.weusehalfoftheeffort,butwecandoubletheresult.万能段落：beingefficiencymeansnottowasteandnot

16、tosquander.sometimesweusehalfoftheeffort,butwecandoubletheresult.modernpeoplechaseafterefficiencythatisthecatchwordaroundtheglobe.ourworkefficiencycanbeenhancedifweadoptpropermethod;ourlearningefficiencycanbeelevatedifwetakeashortcut.anyway,whenwemakefulluseofthedevicesatourhands,wemayachieveefficie

17、ncy,whichcansaveourtimeandefforts.十.节约(economical)关键词句:money-conscious重金钱的cutdownthepricesteadydevelopmentwastenot,andwantnot.不浪费，不短缺husbandenergy,andcutemission.节能减排tosaveistoearnoursocietyiseconomy-driven.节约型社会apennysavedisapennyearned.万能段落：beingeconomicalmeansusingtheminimumoftimeorresourcesneces

18、saryfor3effectiveness.beingeconomicalormoney-savingisvitaltopeopleasanenglishproverbputswhitthat“apennysavedisapennyearned”.enweachieveeconomyinexpenditure,weareinfactmakingmoneyworkforus.whenwebargainandcutdowntheprice,wearemoney-conscious;whenwetakebusinsteadofdrivingourowncars,wearereducingthecos

19、tforpetrol.十一.环保(environmental)关键词句:emithazardousmaterialsalternativeenergymaintainecologicalbalancegogreen多种树，讲环保environmentalawarenessenvironment-friendlyreduce,reuse,andrecyclesustainabledevelopmentexhaustnaturalresourcesthereisnoboundarybetweenhumanandnature.万能段落：beingenvironmentalisrelatedtothe

20、naturalenvironment,itsprotectionandconservation.inordertomaintainecologicalbalance,ourenvironmentawarenessshouldbeenhanced.whenwearegreen-washed;whenwebecomeenvironment-friendly,wemayrealizethree“r”s:reduce,reuse,andrecycle.thesethree”r”sarevitaltothepreservationofacleaner,betterenvironmentthatwillb

21、enefitpeopleswellbeing.十二.经验(experience)关键词句:undergoordealfirst-handexperienceaccumulationofknowledgeexperienceiswealth.experienceisahelmsmanguidingourvoyage.otherpeoplesexperiencecanbeofhelp.它山之石可以攻玉theproofofthepuddingisintheeating.事物的好坏需要经过实践检验万能段落:experiencereferstotheaccumulationofknowledgeorskillthatresultfromdirectparticipationineventsoractivities.ourexperienceisawealththatcanenrichourlife.whenweenjoymoderneducation