5月5号书面表达如何使句子润色汇总

1、本节课任务,1,翻译一段文字,2,如何给句子,增色添彩,3,佳作欣赏,一场暴风雪袭击了这个城市，不仅航班取消火车,也被耽搁。政府号召所有的市民和战士积极参加,清雪活动。况且，采取了各种紧急措施来营救被,困群众以确保市民生活尽快恢复正常,A heavy snowstorm,hit,the city,Not only were,all the flights cancelled but also many trains,were delayed,The city government,called on,all the citizens and soldiers to take,an active

2、,part in the activities of clearing snow. Besides,all kinds of,urgent,measures were taken to,rescue the people,trapped,in the snowstorm,to,ensure,that everything,returned to normal,as soon as possible,如何给句子,增色添彩”,1,多实少虚,nice,2,短语优先,I cannot,bear,it,I,want,it,generous,humorous,interesting, smart,gent

3、le, creative,warm-hearted,I cannot,put up with,it,I am,looking forward to,it,弃旧取新,e all,have,the same,chance,There,are,more opponents,1,较高级词汇,possess,opportunity,exist,学生过街在车辆中穿行危险,1. Its very,dangerous,for the students to,go,through,the traffic,2. Students are,risking their lives,when,threading the

4、ir way among,cars,社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育,1. The students should be,taught,more,about the,traffic safety,2. And also it is of great use to,strengthen,the,safety education,over the,students,较高级词汇,Exercises 1,较高级词汇,Exercises 2,1.We all think he is a great man,2. As a result the plan was a failure,3. She went

5、there in order to study music,4. In our school, there are twenty-six,classrooms,We all,of him,The plan,to be a failure,She went there,studying,music,Our school,twenty,six,classrooms,think highly,turned out,for the purpose of,is made up of,较高级词汇,Exercises 3,5. You can find my house easily,6. Because

6、the weather was good, our journey,was comfortable,7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea,Youll finding my house,A good idea to me,the good weather,our journey was,comfortable,have no trouble,A good idea suddenly me,Thanks to,occurred,struck,非,谓,语,各,种,从,句,with,复,合,宾,语,倒,装,独,立,主,格,虚,拟,等,等,强,调,句,型,运用多种语

7、法结构，句式灵活多变，可,以使文章增色不少,2,丰富的语法结构,丰富的语法结构,Exercises 1,1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail,使用,V-ing,形式,2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so,many things,使用名词性从句,3. He came in and there was a baby in his,arms.,用,with,结构,please give me an e-mail,is that,the little girl,knows so many thing

8、s,On his arriving,What surprises him,He came in,with a baby in his arms,4.,由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟,Mary,联系,用,非谓语,5. He did not know what had happened until,he had read the news in the newspaper.,使,用强调句型,6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.,使用倒,装,It was not until he had read the news in the,newspaper that,he,c

9、ant get in touch with Tom,Not knowing his telephone number,he knew what had happened,丰富的语法结构,Exercises 2,Tom likes singing songs, Mary,so does,7,She,walked,out,of,the,lab,and,many,students followed her.,使用过去分词,8,When,he,spoke,he,felt,more,and,more,excited,使用句型结构,9. Because the weather is fine, many

10、people,went,to,climb,the,Western,hill,使用独立主,格结构,by many students, she walked,out of the lab,a large number of,people went to climb the Western Hills,he spoke, excited he felt,丰富的语法结构,Exercises 3,Followed,The more the more,The weather being fine,佳作欣赏,Some people,claim,that reading selectively is,more

11、 helpful, since they,believe,that reading,without choice is a waste of time.However,some,other people,argue,that we should read,extensively, for they,hold the,view that,in such a,rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the,range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to,one or two fields,In

12、 my opinion,both sides are,going to extremes,欣,赏,一,下,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our,school,This village,is very small. It has,nearly 100 families and,about 500 people. It,used to be very poor,It has changed a lot,since 1978,People,here,are richer than,

13、before. Now it is taking,on a new look,This village is,a small one,with/which has,nearly 100,families and about 500 people,It used to be very poor,However,it has changed a lot since 1978,and has been developing very fast,People here,live a much,better life,than before,书面表达,Now it is taking on a new

14、look,In the past, the school,here was very small,Now it has been rebuilt,The newly built,teaching building has 4,storeys,It is the most,beautiful building in the,village. All the school-age,children can study here,They enjoy free,education in it,Thank you,In the past, the school here was,very small,and most children,couldnt afford to go to school,But,now it has been rebuilt,and,which has 4 storeys is the,most beautiful one,in the village,All the school-age children can,study here,Whats more