2012届惠一模基础写作.ppt

1、调查报道类,Learning aims: Learn to use related vocabularies and sentence structures Describe a graph,2012届惠一模基础写作,假如你是John。 在三鹿毒奶粉事件后在学校3000名学生中进行“每天你还喝牛奶吗”的调查活动。调查结果如下,写作内容】 描述以上调查结果。只能用5个句子表达全部的写作内容； 参考词汇：三鹿毒奶粉：the Sanlu contaminated milk powder,Lead-in：some common charts and graphs,根据所给图表,用5句话描写近年来看电影

2、与看电视的人数变化的短文,a: Number of TV watchers b: Number of film goers,Number of People (in thousands,曲线图 (line graph,A Percentage of Average Family Expense in 2000,B Percentage of Average Family Expense in2005,Housing 25,other 57,Housing 32,other 46,Food drink 18,Food drink 22,饼状图 (pie chart,观察下列图表,根据图示描述该市

3、住房产权变化;说 明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响,20,40,60,80,100,1995,2000,2005,State-owned,private,条状图 (bar chart,请你根据下表提供的信息描述近5年人们饮食的变 化,并说明变化的原因,表格 (table,写作内容 根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容: 1.调查时间,调查问题,以及调查对象; 2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异; 3.”父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异; 4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同; 5.你的偶像及理由,上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据,

4、真题再现：广东省2007年高考基础写作,Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the bo

5、ys. However , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figure” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life,Self-study: Read aloud,范文赏析 注意文章的时态和语态,Self-study: 篇章结构,_Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on

6、 “Who Is Your Idol”._ The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figure” is t

7、he same as that of the girls. _ As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life,调查的时间、问题、对象,调查结果,个人观点,归纳：篇章结构 （注意时态） (1)开门见山地交待调查的时间、对象、主题等。 (1句) 时态： _ (2)描述调查结果, 一般是描述表格中数据所反映的情况, 数据间的主要差异或趋势, 或有的题目要求谈谈数据所反映出来的问题, 并分析原因。(3句) 时态: _ (3)提出个人观点或对解决该问题提出建议。(

8、1句, 根据写作内容和要求而定） 时态： _,一般现在时,一般过去时,一般现在时,Feed-back,1. 交代调查的时间、对象和主题。 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。 Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. （on关于，among在中间） 随学随练 1. 上周, 我们就每天的睡眠时间对全校学生进行了调查,Sentence structures,Last week, we did a survey among all the student

9、s in our school on the sleeping hours every day,3、在三鹿毒奶粉事件后，我们在学校3000名学生中就“每天你还喝牛奶吗”进行了一次调查,After the Sanlu contaminated milk powder issue broke out, we did a survey among 3000 students on “whether you still drink milk every day” in our school,2、最近，我们在全校3000多名学生中就“你如何度过春节”为题进行了调查,Recently, we did a

10、survey among over 3000 students in our school on “ how do you spend the Spring Festival,2. 描述调查结果,分析数据间的主要差异及描述趋势，或者分析问题和原因,Useful expressions 数字，数量的表达,80%: 1/2: 3/4 : 两倍: 剩余的,eighty (percent or percentage,percent,one/a half,three fourths,the rest (of,twice/double,30% of the students think/say/expre

11、ss (hold / share the view) that . 30%的学生认为,There are 40% of students who find/insist that . 40%的学生发现/坚持,It is believed by 20% that . 20%的人相信,根据上表/图，我们可以得出如下结论 2. 上表显示出/指出,1) From/According to the table, we can see/conclude that,The table shows/points out that,According to the survey we know that hav

12、e 55% person drink milk. As a result, have 55 percentage students drink milk. There are 55% students drink milk every day,我们一起来“找茬,percent of,of people,who,of,例句：如上表所示，一半的女生选择电影明星作为她们的偶像，而48%男孩子喜欢体育明星,According to the table, we can conclude that half of the girls choose movie stars as their idols wh

13、ile 48% boys like sports stars. The table shows that half of the girls choose movie stars as their idols while 48% boys like sports stars,随学随练：根据调查结果，我们发现55%的学生选择继续喝牛奶，因为他们相信绝大部分牛奶质量可靠而且牛奶可以增强体质,根据调查结果，我们发现55%的学生选择继续喝牛奶，因为他们相信绝大部分牛奶质量可靠而且牛奶可以增强体质,According to the results, we find that 55% of the stu

14、dents still choose to drink milk, because they believe that most milk products are reliable and can help people strengthen their body,Translate the sentences,32% 的学生不再喝牛奶，因为他们对牛奶尤其是国产牛奶失去了信心而且害怕得病。 13%的学生说他们要等待质量检测结果出来再定,32% of the students wont drink milk any more because they have lost faith in mi

15、lk, particularly milk made in China, and they fear getting diseases,13% say that they wont make a decision before the final results of the quality test are given,3. 阐述个人观点或建议。 As for me, we should take action to help students to make good use of their study time. 在我看来, 应该立即采取有效措施来帮助学生获得休息时间,总结归纳： 就我

16、而言/在我看来 As for me, As far as I am concerned, For my part, Personally, I think,2. 总而言之/总之 In general/ _ speaking In a _ In brief In short In conclusion To sum up/conclude,3. 明显地/毫无疑问地， Obviously/ Apparently/Clearly, It is obvious/apparent/clear that _ is no doubt that,There,Generally,word,1. 审题 2. 列提

17、纲/要点 3.连词成句 4.连句成篇 5. 润色修正 6. 定稿,写作步骤,体裁 时态 结构 要求,字数 内容,连句成篇：加入适当的连接词、过渡句,After the Sanlu contaminated milk powder issue broke out, we did a survey among 3000 students on “whether you still drink milk every day” in our school. _. According to the results, we find that 55% of the students still choos

18、e to drink milk, because they believe that most milk products are reliable and can help people strengthen their body. _32% of the students wont drink milk any more because they have lost faith in milk, particularly milk made in China, and they fear getting diseases. _13% say that they wont make a de

19、cision before the final results of the quality test are made/given,润色修正,人称、数 拼写 语法 时态、语态 逻辑 高级词汇/句型,评分标准：语言8，内容5，连贯2,三、小试身手 (Homework,最近我国的教育专家对中学生最喜爱的节日进行了一项调查，北京、成都两地的1000多名中学生接受了调查。 从图表看出，80%以上的学生知道我们的传统节日，50%的学生最喜爱我们传统的节日春节，其他情况如下图所示,请根据以上内容，为学校广播站写一篇英文发言稿，要求如下： 1.内容包括全部信息； 2.你的观点及原因； 3.五句话完成,1)

20、 交待活动的时间、对象、主题等,最近我国的教育专家对我国中学生“最喜爱的节日”进行了一项调查，北京、成都两地的1000多名中学生接受了调查。 Recently, Chinese educational experts did a survey among more than 1,000 students from Beijing and Chengdu on “which is your favorite festival,2). 描述调查结果,结果表明，80%以上的学生知道我们的传统节日，50%的学生最喜爱我们传统的节日春节，其他情况如下图所示。 The result shows that

21、over 80% of the students are familiar with our classical festivals. 50% of the students choose the Spring Festival as their most favorite,圣诞节，父母亲节和中秋节的喜爱情况,Next come Christmas Day, Fathers and Mothers Day and Mid-autumn Day, with 20%, 10% and about 8,3）个人观点,As for me, Fathers and Mothers Day are my

22、favorite, because they are good chances to show my love and respect to parents,中学生所喜爱的节日调查,Recently, a survey was done among more than 1,000 students from Beijing and Chengdu on/about “which festivals are most favorite one ” by Chinese educational experts. The result shows that over 80% of the stude

23、nts are familiar with our classical festivals. From the table, we can conclude that 50% of the students choose the Spring Festival as their most favorite. Next come Christmas Day, Fathers and Mothers Day and Mid-autumn Day, with 20%, 10% and about 8%.As for me, Fathers and Mothers Day are my favorite, because they are good chances to show my love and respect to parents,2. 表示增加的动词,increase / rise / climb /go up / jump / r