2017 2018高中英语 Module 1 Our Body and Healthy HabitsSection Ⅴ Writing 有关健康生活习惯的说明

1、Section_,Writing,_,有关健康生活习惯的说明文,写有关健康生活习惯的说明文时，一般要写明什么样的做,法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。这,样的文章尽管属于说明文，但也不可避免地会使用叙述、议论,等手法,一、写作策略,该类文章一般采用以下写作策略,1,开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的关于健康问,题的现象,2,分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容,时可以先说现象，也可以先说结果，再说引起这种结果的,原因,3,最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是,提出解决办法及给出自己的保持健康的建议,二、增分佳句,1,As far as I am concern

2、ed, health is more important than,wealth,依我看，健康远比财富重要,2,Taking exercise is closely related to health,运动和健康息息相关,3,Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy,wealthy and wise,早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明,4,It is widely believed that plenty of fresh air contributes to,good health,人们普遍认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康,5,Now

3、adays people are beginning to pay more attention,to their health than ever before,目前人们开始比以前更关注健康,6,We,should,reject,junk,food,such,as,instant,noodles,and hamburgers,我们应该拒绝垃圾食品，例如方便面和汉堡,7,Doctors advise us teenagers to sleep at least 8 hours,each day,医生建议我们青少年每天至少要睡,8,个小时,8,People,come,to,realize,tha

4、t,good,health,is,the,most,valuable thing a person can have,人们开始意识到健康是人所能拥有的最有价值的东西,题目要求,假设你是王林。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的,健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健,康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括,1,之前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少,锻炼,2,导致的问题：肥胖，易生病,3,解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起,4,给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以,保持身体健康,注意,1,词数,100,左右,2,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,第一

5、步：审题构思很关键,一、审题,1,确定体裁：本文介绍生活习惯的改变，属于,但叙述会占,相当大的部分,2,确定人称：本文的主要人称为,3,确定时态：本文主要用,二、构思,第一部分，引入：介绍过去不健康的生活习惯以及造成的危害,第二部分，阐述：介绍摆脱不良习惯的几种方式,第三部分，总结：给其他学生提出建议,说明文,第一人称,一般过去时,第二步：核心词汇想周全,1,不健康的生活习惯,2,不吃早餐,3,垃圾食品,4,熬夜,5,锻炼,unhealthy living habits/unhealthy lifestyle,skip breakfast/no breakfast,junk food/rubb

6、ish food,stay up late,take exercise/have physical training/do physical exercise,6,结果；因此,7,意识到,8,保持健康,9,摆脱坏习惯,10,均衡饮食,as a result,therefore,thus,become aware of,keep fit/healthy,break oneself of/get out of bad habits,a balanced diet,第三步：由词扩句雏形现,1,过去，我养成了一些不健康的生活习惯,主谓宾结构,2,我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼,and,连接两个并列谓

7、语,3,结果，我肥胖，易生病,and,连接两个系表结构,4,我意识到了不健康的生活习惯引起的危害,which,引导定语从句,_,In the past, I formed some unhealthy living habits,I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise,As a result, I became too fat and often fell ill,I became aware of the harm which was caused by unhealthy living,habits,5,为了保持健康

8、，我决心改掉这些坏习惯,so that,引导目的状语从句,不定式短语作宾语,6,我养成了早睡早起的习惯,主谓宾结构,7,两个月过去了，我恢复了健康,as,引导时间状语从句,8,我建议其他学生尽快改掉他们不健康的生活习惯。因为健康比任何其,他事情都重要,suggest,because,引导原因状语从句,I determined to break myself of these bad habits so that I could keep fit,I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early,As two mon

9、ths passed, I recovered,I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as,possible, because health is more valuable than anything else,第四步：句式升级造亮点,1,用过去分词作定语改写句,4,2,用不定式作目的状语改写句,5,3,用,with,复合结构改写句,7,I became aware of the harm caused by unhealthy living habits,To keep fit,

10、I determined to break myself of these bad habits,With two months passing, I recovered,第五步：过渡衔接联成篇,In the past, I formed some unhealthy living habits. For,example,I,often,skipped,breakfast,and,liked,eating,junk,food. Besides, I often stayed up late and took little physical,exercise. As a result, I be

11、came too fat and often fell ill,Luckily,I,became,aware,of,the,harm,caused,by,unhealthy living habits. To keep fit, I determined to break,myself,of,these,bad,habits,Firstly,I,began,to,have,a,balanced diet. Secondly, I took exercise actively every day,Lastly,I,developed,the,habit,of,going,to,bed,early,and,getting up early.