中考英语书面表达知识点(大全)经典1

1、中考英语书面表达知识点( 大全 ) 经典 1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1“ 帆起航新学期，学姐学 提建 ”。你 上就要 了，在初中的学 和生活中你一定有很多收 ， 学弟学妹 提几点建 吧！要求： 1. 内容完整， 言流 ， 写 范清晰。2. 短文中不能出 正式姓名，校名。100 左右。【答案】 Im going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes

2、Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful

3、 school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be going to ，graduatefrom ， to begin with ， both and，get along well with others ， be active in， as important as ， as well 等。而 To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not leas

4、t, 等短 的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。2随着社会的 展，通 的方式从 古 代的 信到当今的互 网， 着巨大的 化。 你写一篇短文， 你 代通 工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1. 你喜 使用的通 方式有哪些？2. 它

5、的 点和缺点是什么？3. 你 使用 代通 工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出 真 的学校名称和姓名；2. 意 ， 数80左右。开 已 出，不 入 数。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,【答案】 As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by

6、 mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones.By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about

7、mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 代通 工具的使用及看法。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：thereare ， I prefer t

8、o ，Mobile phones bring ，we can ， we should ，So let 等s句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了我喜 使用的通 方式有哪些；接下来介 它 的 点和缺点是什么，以及使用 代通 工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用 代通 工具。此 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in ones opinion,try one s best等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。3 面表达“小手拉

9、大手 ,同做文明人。 ”自 建文明城市文明 村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城 ,让人点 的行 随 可 。作 中学生,我 也做出了自己的努力。 根据以下所 要点 ,写一篇 100 左右的英 短文。1.种植花草 木；2.遵守交通 ；3.公共 合不大声喧 ；4.公交 上主 有需要的人 座；（自主 ,至少两点）参考 : civilized 文明的make joint efforts 共同努力obey 遵守【答案】 Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint eff

10、orts （共同努力） . Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addi

11、tion （此外） , we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never litteringanywhere. Furthermore （而且） , we are accustomed to （习惯于） queuing up （排队） for a ti

12、cket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 make joint efforts ， as junior students ， for example ， obey the traffic rules ， run red light， in addition ， no longer ，in public ， an

13、d so on ，whats more ，on a bus， in need， be accustomed to ， queue up ， all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo ci

14、ty more civilized. 等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。提示：1. 体育锻炼2. 上下楼梯3. 交朋结友4. 食品卫生要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；2短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。3词数： 801

15、00 词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to usstudents._ _【答案】 Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially importantto us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we ar

16、e having sports.Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So donwith each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don t quarrel or even fight. Last but tnot least

17、 , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, its important to remember these for us all.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。5书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding sc

18、hool ）和走读（ a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以 “A boarding school or a day school为题。”写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。注意： 1. 词数 ;100 词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We

19、 are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we

20、 choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高

21、中，面临寄宿（ a boarding school ）和走读（ a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：bo

22、th kinds of 、If we choose a boarding school 、 At the same time 、 As for me, I prefer a boarding school 、 payattention to 、来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。6诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming 最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling 相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把

23、这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling 很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise 为题”，内容要点如下：1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。注意：1、词数 80100；2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they h

24、ate people who break their promise.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it wa

25、s really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling

26、 s anger, but also made her lo trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. WhatDaming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和

27、玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。【详解】首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。【点睛】文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but ， so，because of 等，使文章更加通顺。7书面表达假如你是李明，你

28、的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for t

29、he weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my

30、hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government sug

31、gests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li M

32、ing【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间

33、使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more peopl

34、e have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the

35、 people I meet to protect the environment. 等。8假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy 想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。提示词语： Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示问题： Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】 Hi, Lucy! I know you l

36、ike Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinesetraditional culture there. Let s meet at the gate of Laoshe

37、Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，我通 微信告 Lucy 要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何 何地 面。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般将来 ，人称 第一人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：I wantto ， We are going to，We can ， Let s meet at 等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了我想要邀 你去老舍茶 ，接下来介 我 去那里做什么，最后指出我 要在何 何地

38、 面。此 want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb dosth, at the gate of等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。9假 你是Beth,前段 曾向英 校刊投送一篇 My English Teacher Miss Zhang 的短 。近日，又至 季， 生 忙着互致 言。 此， 部策划开“A Letter to MyTeacher ” ，邀 你以信件的形式重新投稿。短 如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and hel

39、pful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her.注意事 ：1.稿件内容 根据短 展开合理想象，不得抄写短 原文：2.要求 句通 、意思 、符合情境。3. 数在 70 个左右，稿件的首尾已在答 卡上 出，不 入 数：4.稿件必 写在答 卡指定的位置上。_【答案】 Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher She is Miss Zhang.She

40、is my English teacher She is in her forties Her small round glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind and helpful ， too She always helps us with our study She loves jogging， so she looks healthy To my surprise， she has donated blood

41、many times since 2001 She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope that you agree with me Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【

42、详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。根据编辑部策划开 “A Letter to My Teacher专栏”，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【点睛】点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细