2020年中考英语-满分作文评析

1、满分作文评析2020北京卷根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom 上周刚过完生日。他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日，怎么过的，你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么，以及你喜欢它的原因。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：cake, noodles, sing songs, make a wish, get presentsWho do you often celebrate your birthday with? Your parents? Yo

2、ur friends? Or?What do you usually do on your birthday?What is your favorite present? Why do you like it?To TomFrom Li HuaSubject BirthdayHi! Tom,Im glad that you had a nice birthday party last week._ Yours, Li Hua【思路点拨】文章格式已经给出，所以我们可以直接回答“跟谁在一起？经常做什么？最喜欢什么礼物？”三个问题。在回答问题时，要言之有理有据，注意衔接。文章写作模版如下：回答问题提

3、出祝愿I often celebrate it withMy favourite present isbecauseI hopeIm glad that Let me tell youI usuallyon my birthday引出话题问题2问题1问题3【标准范文】Hi! Tom,Im glad that you had a nice birthday party last week. Now Ill tell you something about how I celebrate my birthday.I often celebrate my birthday with my paren

4、ts and my friends. I often have a birthday party. My parents buy me a birthday cake and some delicious foods. Many friends come to my home. They send me many presents. We sing and dance. We eat food and fruit and play games together. We often have a good time.Among all the birthday presents that I r

5、eceived, my favourite one is a special calendar designed by my parents, because there are family pictures taken during the whole year and words with encouragement.I hope everyone has a good time every day.Yours, Li Hua【强化训练】假如你是Lisa, 6月19日是你的生日，请根据一下表格的内容，向你的好朋友群发一封邀请信。Time: Friday, June 19, at 2:30

6、 pmPlace: Lisas homeActivities: watching a new movie, playing games, having dinner要求：1.词数：80左右 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。_【参考范文】Hi friends, Im very happy because my birthday is coming. I will have a birthday party at my home at 2:30 pm on June 192. We have a lot of food and drink. I think we can have a big d

7、inner. At the same time, we can do many interesting activities. Such as watching a new movie or playing games. Welcome everyone to come to my birthday party. Remember to come if you are free on Friday.Yours,Lisa2020天津卷在初中即将毕业之际，请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：三年前你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独三年中Brian多次给你写信，他在信中：

8、鼓励你多交朋友；告诉你学好英语的方法；和你分享快乐；你变得近年来天津发生很大变化，你邀请他来天津游玩参考词汇：分享快乐share happiness要求： 词数：80100个 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥Dear Brian，How time flies! We have been friends for three years. Im writing to thank you for your help!Three years ago, _Hope to see you soon! Yours, Zhang Ming具体帮助发出邀请You wrote t

9、o me always encouraged me to. When I had trouble. Besides, you were always sharing Thanks to your helpI hope you can come to Tianjin toWhen I came to a new class, everything was and felt当时处境【标准范文】Dear Brain, How time flies! We have been friends for three years. Im writing to thank you for your help!

10、Three years ago, when I came to a new class, everythingwas strange tome. I had no friends and felt very lonely. It was you who helped me a lot.During these three years, you wrote to me many times and always encouraged me to make friendsas many as possible.When I had trouble with my English, you told

11、 me many good ways to improve it.Besides,you were always sharing happiness with me,which made my life more colorful.Thanks to your help, I have become more confident and positive. I reallyappreciateyour help.These years,great changes have taken placein Tianjin and I hope you can come to Tianjin to e

12、xperience the new changes.Hope to see you soon! Yours, Zhang Ming【强化训练】假设你是一名中学生，名叫李华，曾经到英国学习、生活了三个月。在那期间，你住在大卫（David）家中。现在学习已结束，你刚回到家，特意给大卫写一封80词左右的英文信，内容包括以下方面：表达谢意感谢大卫及其家人对你的照顾。难忘的事1.大卫帮助你学习英语，带你去参观了许多地方；2.大卫的父母在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。学习收获提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。发出邀请邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。要求： 信件内容要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥

13、； 信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数； 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：culture（文化），invite（邀请）Dear David, Ive just got back home. I want to say “Thank you” most at the moment. _Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear David, Ive just got back home. I want to say “Thank you” most at the moment. During my stay with your family, I was well looked a

14、fter. You helped me with my English and showed me around many places. When I was ill, your parents sent me to the hospital and prepared delicious food for me, so I got well soon. With your help, my English has greatly improved and Ive learned more about your culture. Thank you for what you have done

15、! Id like to invite you to visit my family soon.Yours,Li Hua2020上海卷Write at least 60 words about the topic “This time next year” （以“明年此时”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following sentence patterns are for reference only.（

16、以下句型仅供参考）I hope to /I hope that .Perhaps I will .It will be exciting / necessary / terrible to ._【试题分析】 本题英语作文是让学生谈一谈明年生活有什么变化，以及畅想对自己对他人的期望。本考题一改之前的写建议、写方法和写感受，转向引导学生写畅想未来的记叙文，题材上有些出乎意料，但从内容上来看，却又在情理之中，中考之后的学生马上要面临的就是高中的崭新生活，充满着挑战和变化。这样的命题更贴近学生的生活，也能激发学生从多角度思考、多层次发挥。明年此时的作文题目令人赏心悦目，能够激发学生对未来的美好憧憬，有

17、利于学生的个性发挥。正文总结Ill be Ill make lots of friends. IllI plan toLife will be today different. ButMy life next year isI hope概述谈期待谈变化谈打算【标准范文】This Time Next YearIt is interesting that the composition I am writing now may decide which school I will be in and what I will be doing this time next year. If I am

18、 lucky, I will be sitting in the classroom of a famous high school, studying with my new classmates. I will have grown one year older and made a lot of new friends by that time. And one thing is sure: I will become a more independent and responsible person and be able to face more challenges in my s

19、tudy and life. 【名师点评】 本篇作文主要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为。文章第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，紧接其后的是第二个作为，最后表达出了考生对变化的想法及态度。全文要点齐全，语句通顺，很好地完成了写作任务。【强化训练】三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就要进入高中学习，请以My life in the high school 为题，根据下表所提供的信息和提示词，用英语写一篇小短文，畅想自己未来的高中生活。内容要点校园1. 校园（campus）宁静而美丽，教室宽敞明亮，是学习的好地方。老师2. 老师知识渊博，严格要求学生又关爱学生。同学3. 与

20、同学友好相处。学习4. 自主学习和积极参与小组学习，力争学习取得进步。课外活动5. 积极参加各种课外活动，保持身体健康。提示词：peaceful（宁静的），knowledgeable（知识渊博的），宽敞明亮（wide and bright），care for（关爱），learn by oneself（自主学习），take an active part in（积极参加），group work（小组学习），out-of-class activities（课外活动）要求：1. 短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用2-3句话表述；2. 所给的提示词都必须用上（

21、可适当发挥），词数80左右（不含已给出句子的词数）；3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。My life in the high schoolMy junior school will be over. And Im going to my high school in September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful.The campus of my high school will _ Wonderful high school life! I cant w

22、ait!【参考范文】My life in the high schoolMy junior school will be over. And Im going to my high school in September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful.The campus of my high school will be beautiful and peaceful. The classroom is wide and bright. What a good place to study! I fal

23、l in love it at once. The teachers are knowledgeable. They are strict with all the students, but they care for every student more. All my classmates are friendly and we can get on well with each other. Sometimes, we help each other on study. I work hard in this school and most of the time we learn b

24、y ourselves. I also take an active part in group work for learning. I think I can make great progress on study. Do you like out-of-activities? Here, there are many kinds of out-of-activities. I join them every time. I want to keep fit through them.Wonderful high school life! I cant wait!2020重庆A、C卷为了

25、更好地开展2020年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示：1. 阅读的好处：2. 你的建议（如：建更多小型图书馆，经常性地介绍好书等）；3. 要求：1.词数：80词左右开头，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us._【试题分析】 本题是写一篇发言稿，属于应用文体。主要内容是针对阅读提出自己的想法和建议，

26、包括谈论阅读的好处、自己的一些建议等。写作中要符合发言稿口语化的特点，由于是对当前阅读的想法和建议，所以句子时态以一般现在时态为主。【思路点拨】 作者首先要点明阅读的好处，然后提出自己的建议，该部分内容相对要多一些。为了使文章条理清楚，建议内容可分条列出，用上first, second, third等过渡词语。最后是自主发挥的内容，可以归纳和鼓励其他同学，引起其他同学们的发言欲望。本题写作模板如下：阅读的建议阅读的希望I have some good advice abut reading. First , second , thirdI hope my advice/ I think Rea

27、ding can make us can help us阅读的好处【名师点评】 本文符合发言稿的要求，条理清楚，要点齐全，建议中肯，符合实际。作者能用精炼的语言表情达意；文中多种句式、时态、语态的交替使用，丰富了短文的语言结构，使文章具有很强的可读性。【强化训练】4月23日为世界读书日，我们班将组织“与好书为友，以读书为乐”的主题活动。请根据以下提示，用英语写一段话，词数在80100之间，内容必须包括表格中提示的要点：读书意义活动计划个人愿意或感受了解世界找些好书带来快乐用好时间培养习惯做好笔记注意：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：deve

28、lop培养On April 23, World Reading Day, our class will organize a reading activityBe Friends with Good Books and Take Delight in Reading.I think _2020南京卷假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel，你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily广告中介绍的机器人培训班。ROBOT COURSERobot course for beginners at Starlight SchoolOrganized visits to Friendly Robots

29、CompanyE-mail：请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容须包括：1.培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；2.参观机器人公司的具体安排；3.你还想了解的该培训班其他信息。注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear sir/MadamIm writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight

30、School._Yours faithfullyDaniel询问祝愿How long will the course last?I wonder whether Ill be able toI look forward to hearing from you soon.Im writing to ask forThe visits to Friendly Robots Company引言参观安排课程安排其他信息【标准范文】Dear Sir/MadamIm writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at

31、 Starlight School.Firstly, Id like to know more about the course arrangement. For example, could you tell me how long the course will last? I prefer to know if there is any class for the weekend. Next, Im interested in the visits to Friendly Robots Company. Would you tell me whether I need to pay? F

32、inally, I wonder whether Ill be able to design a robot myself at the end of the course.Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfullyDaniel【名师点评】 本文作者能够紧紧抓住文中要点进行写作，短文语句通顺，结构完整，内容充实。文中first, next, finally等的使用使短文层次分明，有条有理。一些宾语从句使用得准确到位，也使询问的语气委婉客气，以Thank you for结

33、尾，使短文更加完整。【参考范文】Dear Anna,Thanks for your letter. Im glad to know that you are coming to China for your study. Our school is in the center of the city. There are four teaching buildings, a large playground, a big garden with beautiful flowers and many trees around. We have six classes every day, thr

34、ee in the morning and three in the afternoon. Usually, we do some sports and take part in different interests classes after school. There is a basketball match between classes and a new film show every month here. I love my school and its quite interesting to study here. I have made much progress in

35、 my English and Im also good at playing the piano. We can have piano lessons every Tuesday afternoon at school. I hope you can come to my school and study here. Yours, May2020河南卷你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special _”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。要求：1. 在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如grandma, teacher或friend等;2. 文

36、中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 80词左右。 My special _【试题分析】 本题是写一篇人物介绍，属于开放式作文，主要是介绍一个你身边对于你来说具有特殊意义的人，可以是你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。文章主要突出这个人物的特别之处，根据题目要求自由发挥体现了本题写作的开放性。文章应以第一、三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。【思路点拨】本文主要是介绍一个你身边对于你来说具有特殊意义的人，写作时首先要注意的问题是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，注意动词的形式，根据主语的不同人称，动词使用不同的形式；第三，句型结构要符合英语表达习惯，用自己最熟练掌握的句子来写。写作模板如下：详细介绍

37、发表感受When I am I know My grandma is She oftenI knowMy grandma is because She always点名人物【标准范文】My special grandmaMy grandma is special to me because were like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us.When I am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy ti

38、me together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing shes best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.【强化训练】在你成长的过程中父母和老师对你帮助很大。请你根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文，参加校园网英语学习园地征文

39、比赛。注意：1、从所给的两个题目中任选一个； 2、短文必须包括表格内容，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受； 3、词数：80词左右。The person you want to thankPersonalitieskind, easygoing, Helptake care of, encourage, cheer up, FeelingsMy Mother/ Father/ Teacher_【参考范文】My Mother My mother is very kid and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily l

40、ife. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When Im in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up. I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset. My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With her help, I became a top student in my class. Im very thankful for all that she has done for me. I believe she will be proud of me in the near future.2020陕西卷在日常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象？请列出些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想