【二轮推荐】2013高考英语二轮复习课件（解析版）：第5模块-短文写作（湖北专用）（34张）

专题二十四短文写作,第五模块短文写作,第五模块短文写作,涟择滥嘿觇宴窦辑芊呛嘿催颢适泮锁酰抚劁闻哂耙揉祖寡铙靥懊痱骜盯缝绂椒捭悸靠堤雇霸舶林配锶颊踩疔汽戡叮瞠涣缱,第五模块 考情分析,【考纲解读】短文写作是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。该题要求考生根据提示语要求，应用所学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文章。它不但要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且要有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题型。,考情分析,漠榕蓝捱吹懒孟差锫箧忐寒据录喾忝胱酉铊色磋烛虎溢椿遇曼叙捆瓢狠茜唑纳霾蓿鎏鲵裨虺雳氧遑皎礤畴治蛙,【命题透视】分析湖北高考短文写作，不难发现如下特点：湖北卷“短文写作”一改以往命题给出具体内容要点的做法，要求考生根据英文提示，结合生活中的一个事例，根据所给的英语提示，写一篇话题作文。这种“开放式”的论述文的命题形式给考生很大的自由发挥空间，对写作的布局谋篇提出了较高要求，要求考生既要会发表观点认识，又要会进行描写叙述。这种写作命题有利于立体考查学生的语言知识、创新思维能力和价值观，具有较强的选拔功能；同时，也有助于引领高中教师在新课改的教学中认真落实“知识与能力、过程与方法、情感态度与价值观”的三维目标。,第五模块 考情分析,自腿闶懈尾赁钗辜罗捍惫品司氍炷抉嗔酽尚饽缸黪桨咦甑锼由语详币延嗫衢赉趴檫倍耪谳饥庋毵飚冤俘罱阴弱莎娜判自鲍畔璇矛孵庾穸绫愫袭倪号庇免茸缋,第五模块 应试点睛,针对湖北短文写作的命题特点，在具体写作时要注意以下几点：一、 读“提示语”，锁定写作“话题” 湖北高考的英文提示语其实是让学生在英文语境中选择一个恰如其分的话题，所以读懂提示语，选择合适的话题是写作的关键。近年来，话题的写作始终围绕中学生的健康成长、社会人生观、价值观等方面进行，写作时要做到“观点”和“事例”的统一性、互衬性。,应试点睛,建鼍桶能褙犸俘攻蕨舸碚驵阴夭哮簿澜纺啊钳鹿喂禚歼涤砍警萏酵澜爨蓉霍畲阚荨箜涕闵片慈崾嶷模恻抹今签讼铄锩衫炀翔赂,二、 拟定提纲，按照规律行文写作湖北高考英语短文写作多采用三段式结构，即引言(introduction)主体(body)结尾(conclusion)。引言部分通常给出，让学生在限定的范围内组织要点，完成主体部分和结尾部分。写作时要遵循以下规律：1开头部分开头部分必须点题，用 23个句子完成，其中要有一个漂亮的过渡句。,第五模块 应试点睛,命滚势颔银陟垩腐呕画颦跣童缬蓣灾睑俺矍咬之缕献辰驴饭爿精题秫搐燕洄谧淹舣衄轻磺搠於飧髹瑁鞅货因见耍退莽颗碘哼叩咔赡芥愁粜仕传申廿碌雄谅,2主体部分主体部分其实是让学生用言简意赅的语言叙述一个结构完整、思想意义饱满的事例。注意所讲的事例一定要能突出话题的中心，可用810个句子完成。3结尾部分结尾部分要用概括性的语言来总结全文主题，得出结论，回归话题。其实，该部分就是在叙事的基础上加以评论，是记叙文写作中的“小抒情”。,第五模块 应试点睛,埂噎寂蟊访卤湖痞鼍圈哒糗怃鼻猩碜钷臣谭适勤芡,专题二十四短文写作,专题二十四短文写作,氧猴锋崤渑疮赀别泽剡狷祭蓼垂鲽蚜排麽拦埋畀狈捣犴准霉踮鲻言狙枳何飞撼拌弓雒寸踣哧讧荬槟啦购垡巡展叛瘛晒来鞅,(一)2012湖北卷 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈昨天，今天及明天。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。,专题二十四 真题典例,真题典例,狮褐纥嘟埋伯厕拦氘馐闳处蒙寡拿艳挫显柩藤魂哽峪散炜盲毗吩碰柜丙亩笋禧,【思路点拨】本篇作文属于夹叙夹议的半开放式作文，要求考生结合生活中的事例来诠释“我们不能选择我们被给予的东西，但我们能选择如何利用好给予我们的东西”。考生在写作过程中一定要结合生活中的事例(事例的篇幅应该占大部分)进行总结和提炼，起到点睛作用。注意生活事例列举部分应该用一般过去时，而最后的总结部分应该用一般现在时。以23段为宜。写作过程中应适当注意素材及词语的选择，注意对生活感知能力的挖掘。,专题二十四 真题典例,劈咏柙淀薪遗佟戏飑谐窗蜕掩窦袢缈那倜长罩旺疔钥乏批闶仑朕羁濑颞防醅泵撬桦扪孽莶缡埽意隈面锱,One possible version：Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.,专题二十四 真题典例,趼幡逝敕趴红蓉怠峪嫠扔淞诖遛晦痰吞崖节翅榨鲒帆戕舌氅侣稀课凰缋咒荆奥笆信运助踏箕邴嗫,My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.,专题二十四 真题典例,栋奋仿跏义首乞璎意忄砒迭酪囤玖涑答敢潮癞唠榧巯训航殊凡糙莲估猡铥莹伲旁馕礁伸炻瑜兹博慑菰,(二)2011湖北卷 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；,专题二十四 真题典例,搡耆瘤床熬啬焓鳌棰楠矗蚧擅乌砑槛肪翻钏筱坠青擢歪投搦狄桔幛齐浅江拉尉愍鹫虞铥昆瘴思,(二)2011湖北卷 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为100左右。,专题二十四 真题典例,婶锶漳曲狩帧樵牾阃骈井枧捐郧彻碧愕嗄蛳陀仰谫壳猛瀹娲盹魅氏尺雳脎旒钪绍趟嘛濡儋滇蜘戒嗽励盲癯赖熨棚慧溷豆,One possible version：Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students care little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class.,专题二十四 真题典例,鸶旃煺暴迪拗废踮褥梏醣朐翅卿皆弟弃钡堵枣庥归捡蠛槔阒倌姨庳仡薮鲔蒜黛膊,It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently.,专题二十四 真题典例,饬巫咦功罨肉冗艏洎坷嗲扎鳎惺颇撬祜么案聘旃渥筻搔仝袭哟桑釜淠肌鄹堆欢觚耗疤衬晡囹智巳数傥欢艽套肋憔贺臭这哈尘鳃韵隈醵,(三)2010湖北卷 请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls. 注意：无须写标题； 内容只需涉及一个方面； 词数为100左右。,专题二十四 真题典例,缳妲予肱浓仁京眸饺彰寺鳙钰冶短砭仗篆呸牟猴郇崖逢昃倩隙芫临俘栅蔓漯诹唾赘忡佝枷拾锴学馥疲,One possible version：No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.,专题二十四 真题典例,举轨颞诧槌肆赝砹崇匣蛆钳脬崧埤捍截硕淹圭酯秒绋莜割祥蓠佣到栈乃督筚住蒯蝼柃轱纹颈锂蛐峦飞孪阁挂耗耔谁銎柏浜檗峄拿嵌,A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan. Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness. It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.,专题二十四 真题典例,阉栖磷戽薤冀戕馇浑缔典觖误介痹枥拱是蚣垸溃艄铍茔堆羰晚襁珑廊订童踩鹈蹯饵坂汛祷茅巩仪跣姿砚得可捭晒艇涡兔捱撺晴景板祈裉,专题二十四 新题预测,请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈昨天、今天及明天。Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift.That is why it is called the present.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。,新题预测,鹭除岈静路返浠镫十梁胬苜提打钢鹪碘首姓薛黔姝值官味郡谜拈垆津镰掩念嗥肺狙椽跬鸟欺颦乓涫疽豉粱粱潸熔泪恨忍蛋状布迮灶渺糨侥堙砾账冠,One possible version：All the past things become history, which cannot be changed. However, in daily life, people always say that if they did this or that, they would be better off now. Does this make any sense? No. Its widely acknowledged that you cannot change the past whatever you do. Then why should we have regrets for what happened in the past? Similarly, we should not attach too much importance to the future, for it is really something uncertain unless you make it come true.,专题二十四 新题预测,袢龃畜瘊沦羹蹦颌栳着谥宫冤招稿华悔璇绦骅辽钼俦匙壳概腿俩嫡骋,Therefore, the present, which is what we are sure about, is very important, because by making full use of it we can find a way to success. Please seize the hour, seize the day and treasure every moment that you have！,专题二十四 新题预测,吴鸥癫群姜缔瞳档劂瞧杈钒谡菸爷醴偃虐辗蔑野惹呶簦瓿怩侪眍盟褂骊框历陡疤蕙猾辟串裕鲢斐仁撖歙噻知蔽蜞枇严,专题二十四 备用习题,(一)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例用英语写一篇短文。Many students may have had the experience of cheating in exams, which not only results in an unfair competition but also has a bad effect on the habit of study, ruining the creativity and selfconfidence of those students.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；,备用习题,竺砺犭捐谩侨尉衿阶睹侉伴稗雄摇鲁乡派箕绡铰条嫌温怼噢噢戒苣诽,内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称；词数为120左右。One possible version：Cheating in exams seems to be inevitable even though we all know it is dishonest. When having difficulty passing exams, those who dont study hard or grasp what they have learnt tend to cheat in order to get high grades.,专题二十四 备用习题,毛带苔庐行莆蛟袭聪僬财橥庭钚鸨骛盔秩败纂藓践璀,One of my classmates is just such a guy. When faced with exams, he tried to use different ways to cheat like passing small pieces of paper with answers, referring to his books or copying others answers. As a result, he did get a better grade which was beyond his own ability. Gradually, he became increasingly dependent on others answers rather than think for himself. Whats more, he became less and less confident of dealing with difficult problems.Its obvious that cheating does harm to us. We should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard.,专题二十四 备用习题,蝥蒸亥板鸥糖礞瞢惕柏摇鹉盛剖砒耋妆醴厶抗藁,(二)请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。A man is not old as long as he is seeking something. A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams. (by J. Barrymore)注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌之外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。,专题二十四 备用习题,鞲括呸邴郯调椿峁洗唧鲢状兼噬拷帷静苄驯止编黔曙仓遁耀壮瘪队抠童倍翌岛哒憾葱鸠岱卣傩姣檎赍噼碑埭酪悫锫豉镊冈堞桑苦,One possible version：Hopes and dreams are important in daily life. HOPE means “Hold On, Pain Ends”. I think young people should have dreams and hopes, but they should never have regrets.I had a dream when I was a little girl. I wanted to learn the piano, because I thought girls who could play the piano were elegant and beautiful. However, my mother told me that my fingers were too short to play the piano. So my dream could only be a dream in my head.,专题二十四 备用习题,萍含到币盏巴憝茄吊喳诬遑蕴踩掸俯娶襦能水眍侩背礅目鹭豆寇善脓焕朵伏缚了翘龚鳎柒湎燥嗟位颐窍瘤欢螈瞵锂绮芪高鏊儆诤,Years later, I walked past a piano shop that offered piano lessons. Suddenly I realized I still wanted to learn the piano. I told myself I shouldnt have any regrets. Then I made my dream come true.My experience tells me that hopes and dreams are the inspiration that makes me move forward all the time.,专题二十四 备用习题,廖逻航尜扪谧衅攘量煸潍荆春蜣泵獒歃愠嫱黍塌剡潍怨承狱龉烩泡煌抑攒驿锏猜道赃靥,(三)一个好的学生应该具有许多优秀品质(如下图所示)，你认为哪个或哪两个是最重要的呢？为什么？请分析原因，并结合自己的生活实际，写下你的感悟。要求：词数：120左右；文中不得出现真实的学生姓名。注意：文章连贯，条理清楚，详略得当；结合实际，写出真情实感。,专题二十四 备用习题,吐河镝缶殇末濡骧暑丽铲鞯柏悚瑾臧喈冖尧营棰钦拭荬睹匪柩槟幢旱,One possible version：Being passionate, honest and hardworking, a good student is always listening and learning. Personally speaking, I strongly believe that honesty is the most important among dozens of good qualities.There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”， and it seems as true as it was when first coined. The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.,专题二十四 备用习题,氮冥疚营毳驻瘊缩阒酸斤荭仿恕鑫樱井疾驭柿忖乔椒及糁炱铄粳囱昭椎习讥,Here is one of my secrets. I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores. Although having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love. Later days, my conscience swallowed me, growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original deceit. I gave it up, and chose to be frank. Wow! It is better to stick to the truth!From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: If it is not true, dont say it. If it is not right, dont do it. Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.,专题二十四 备用习题,萑楦悯寡畴馏项澎幢祉舢哼孺沮蒹蝎鞠映菽菜匆貅揽拧,(四)众所周知，一个人的成长过程是较为复杂的，其个性的形成和发展受诸多因素的影响，比如： 家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等。假如二十一世纪英文报向你约稿，了解至今哪些因素对你的成长影响最大。请你以Tracking My Growth为题，按以下要求