贾汪中学英语万能作文.ppt

高二英语作文最后一讲,包装句子；征服考官！,提高英语作文水平，必须学会包装句子！ 英语经典句型和词组是句子包装的必备材料。 60分钟内学会包装，突破高考英语作文20分！,写作指导：,1 四定 确定人称，体裁，时态和要点 2 重视开头和结尾句 3 复核验收,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,高分秘籍,1 避免低级错误。人称，名词单复数，单词拼写，大小写，标点符号，固定搭配，基本常用句型等不能出错。,高分秘籍,力求表达高级 熟悉常用各类基本句型和连接词。采用有层次的语言组织材料。有3-4个长句，正确运用谚语和俗语。,过渡性词语 表列举：for example、for instance、 that is to say 表补充：besides、in addition、moreover apart from 表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to 、as a result of 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so 表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、 to sum up 表转折：however、nevertheless、yet,4卷面美观整洁 漂亮的书写留下良好的第一印象，是作文得高分的基础。 5 要点全面。个人观点部分要有独到见解，不生硬套搬。,文章的组成,篇章,开头段,主题句,中间段,结尾段,扩展句1,扩展句2,扩展句3,结尾句,十句作文法,P I S(1) general talk of the topic S(2) Thesis: the writers attitude towards it PII S(3) The writers reasons to have this attitude S(4) Support I S(5)detail 1 S(6)detail 2 S(7)Support II S(8) detail 1 S(9)detail 2 PIII S(10)conclusion: restate the thesis,填空式作文,对立观点题型 1,（1）有人认为 （2）另一些人认为 （3）我的看法,1.Some people think that_(赞成的观点）_. On the one hand, _理由1_. On the other hand, _理由2_. 2. Yet there are some people who would hold a different point of view.They think that_反对的理由_1_ _. Besides,_理由2_. 3. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we decide whether_讨论的问题_. We should take into consideration all aspects of the problem, and then make the right decision.,99.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1 有人认为读书要有选择 2 有人认为应当博览群书 3 我的看法,Reading Selectively or Extensively Some think that when we read we should read selectively. That is to say , we should select some books we are interested in and ignore others . Reading selectively can help us concentrate our limited time and attention on those selected books. Some others think when we read we should read extensively. That is to say, no matter what kind of book it is, we should look it over. Reading extensively can help us enlarge our view and grasp the general knowledge from different fields. In my opinion, the two reading methods have their roles respectively in our reading. However, their own disadvantages are easy to see. If we only read selectively, the framework of our knowledge may not be complete; if we read extensively, we may not have so much time and energy and be specialized in one particular field. Therefore, the combination of the two methods is more reasonable.,对立观点题型 2,（1）有人认为 （2）我认为（我的理由） ,1.Some people believe that_. For example, they think_. And it will bring them _. 2.In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, _. For another thing_. 3.From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that_,98.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1有些人认为某些数字会带来好运 2我认为数字和运气无关。,Do “Lucky numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? Many people believe that numbers carry magic power and some numbers can bring good luck. It is well-known that most Chinese people consider “six”, “eight”, and “nine” as lucky numbers and set their joyous events on days that carry such numbers. Telephone numbers and car numbers consisting of such numbers are so popular that sometimes they can be sold at high prices. Some people have their own special “lucky number” and take it very seriously. One of my friends considers “three” as his lucky number and he even refuses to go out if he cant find two companions. I dont believe numbers have anything to do with luck. Take, for example, the number “four”. “Four” was once considered as an unlucky number because it pronounces the same as “death” in Chinese, but then, when someone finds out that it pronounces in music the same as “enrichment” in Chinese, “four” becomes a lucky number. It is psychological factor that makes people believe in “lucky numbers.”,解决方法型,（1）问题现状 （2）怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点）,1.Nowadays,_has become a problem we have to face. Though its easier said than done, with the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it. 2.By_, we can not only _but also _. 3.In addition, we can_. 4.Third, what is the most important is that_. Only when we do all the things above can we_,001 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1大学的费用（Tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决。 2哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）。,How I Finance My College Education While the cost of college education has risen sharply in the past few years, students have several ways to pay for their college tuition and fees. Mostly their parents will pay. Some students may apply for a bank loan and others will try to find a part-time job on the campus. And besides, many students will be awarded a scholarship. In these ways, students can pay, at least partly, for their college education. For me, Ill let my parents pay my college education. This is because my parents have once promised to do so if only I could be admitted into a university. And whats more, I want to concentrate on my studies during my college tears and I wont let the tuition problem distract me from my school work. Only in this way can I fulfill my school work. Only in this way can I fulfill my dream of future and my parents will feel rewarded and be proud of me.,说明利弊型,（1）说明事物现状 （2）事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） （3）你对现状（或前景）的看法,1.Nowadays, it is common to see_. Many people like_, because_. Besides, _. 2.However, _, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. It has also given rise to a series of problems. For example,_. The worst of all, _, for the reason that_. 3.Therefore, in my opinion, _. But at same time, _. The result depends on the balance between their advantages and disadvantages.,00.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是。 2也有人持不同意见，。 3我的看法和打算,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Many people agree to this. They think oral communication is a very important part in English learning. If one can understand what foreigners say, but cant open his mouth and express himself in English, he seems to be dumb. However, other people dont think so. They will say that oral English is not so necessary because it is nearly impossible for many people to talk with foreigners face to face. As far as Im concerned, I agree to the first viewpoint. With our society developing more and more quickly, people will have more chances to study abroad or to work with foreigners, and then, communication in English is very essential. Therefore, Ive made up my mind to learn English well, and speak English fluently.,阐述式题型,（1）阐述名言或主题所蕴含的意义 （2） 分析并举例使其更充实。,1. A good mastery of - can give you a lot of help. Firstly,_. Secondly,_. 2. There are many ways to acquire -. You can _. You can also_ 3. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you hold it sooner or later.,97.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Practice Make perfect. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”？ 2.例如：在英语学习中 3.又如,Practice Make perfect Practice makes perfect, that is to say, as long as we keep practicing we will in the end handle a skill perfectly no matter how difficult it is. Take, for example, the study of English. When I began to study English, I had trouble in pronunciation, in listening, in remembering words, and in understanding the texts. By listening to the tapes again and again, reading the texts over and over, and speaking and writing in English as often as possible, I have now become very excellent in English. Another case in point is my learning to play basketball. At the beginning I couldnt grasp the ball that my friends passed to me, to say nothing of snatch or rebound, but I continued to practice and now I am a member of the college basketball team. I learn from my experience that “Practice makes perfect.”,图表式题型,（1）说明图表； （2）引起变化的原因,1. The first graph shows us_. At the same time, the other shows that_ _. 2. Some reasons can explain this trend. First, _.second,_. Third,_ _ . 3.If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesired result may come out unexpectedly. So what we should do is_,02.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1 下图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化； 2 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可以从计算机的用途，价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）； 3 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。,Student Use of Computers As shown in the chart above, we can clearly see a dramatic increase in the average number of hours a college student spends on the computer per week. In 1990, a student spent only 2 hours a week on the computer, while the number increased to 20hours by year 2000. What has caused such an increased? Firstly, computers are now widely used in our society, especially in universities. Nowadays, computers are used to write, read, calculate and even play games. Secondly, prices of computer have been going down very quickly. In early 90s,a 286 would cost over 35,000RMB. Now, you can buy a Pentium IV with only several thousand yuan. It is certainly a good phenomenon that more and more students are making use of computers in their study. However, there are still some problems and worries that need our attention. First, many students use computers only to play games or chat on the Internet. Around the campus, we can often see Internet bars full of students even deep at night. Long hours of sitting at the computer is no good to ones health and also affects ones study if he only chats and plays on the Internet. Second, students may become too dependent on computers and forget to learn some basic skills. When asked to write compositions during a test, some students complain that they find their brains blank if not facing a computer and typing his composition out. We should pay more attention to these and try to solve them so that computers will serve us better and better.,综合题型,综合以上几种写法,1. Today, we see - anytime anywhere. It shows us_. For instance,_. 2. But for me, this thing may not give any advantages to us. First, it makes people_. 3. In my opinion, this problem should be solved by ourselves. We can use means to avoid its harmful aspects. For example, we can_. Besides, we also can_. 4. All in all, what I am concerned is how to change the worse into the better.,99.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Dont Hesitate to Say “No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1 别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说“不”。 2 为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”。 3. 该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处。,Dont Hesitate to Say “No” To help others is a virtue, but when we are asked to help in the following three cases we should say “No”. Firstly, we should say “No” when we are asked to do something illegal or immoral. For example, if one of your friends asks you to help him in a murder, you should refuse him. Secondly, we should say “No” when fulfilling his or her will is a violation of our principle. Thirdly, we should say “No” when what we are asked to do is beyond our ability. Those who dont say “No” even in the above three cases mainly have two kinds of misgivings. They are afraid that they may lose the friend who comes for help, or they want to gain respect by giving others an illusion that there is nothing they cant do. If you promise to help when you should say “No”, you may in the end fail to keep your promise and lose your friends trust. On the other hand, even if you have succeeded in fulfilling your friends will, you may feel depressed because you must have put in too much energy or money. You may even become a criminal if you help to do something illegal. So, when you should say “No”, dont hesitate to do so.,巧妙转换句型，轻松应对写作,在高考英语写作题中，由于时间的限制，许多考生写出的句子显得过于单调、呆板。其实，要想在有限的时间里写出丰富、生动的句子并不难。只要对所学的英语句式加以转换，就一定能使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。,一、词与词之间的转换 1. 形容词转换为名词 This painting is very valuable. 2. 动词转换为名词 Our hometown has changed a lot these years.,二、词与从句的转换 As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.,This painting is of great value.,Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years.,Tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on.,三、非谓语动词与从句之间的转换 1. 动名词和从句的转换 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. 2. 分词和从句的转换 (1) 现在分词与从句的转换 As he was lying in the grass, he thought of his parents living in the countryside. (2) 过去分词与从句的转换 Once it is seen, it will never be forgotten.,On hearing his arrival, please give me an e-mail.,Lying in the grass, he thought of his parents living in the countryside.,Once seen, it will never be forgotten.,3. 不定式与从句的转换 He spoke louder so that the audience could hear him clearly.,四、独立主格与从句的转换 （1）If weather permits, we shall go there on foot.,To make himself heard clearly, he spoke louder.,Weather permitting, we shall go there on foot.（逻辑主语+现在分词）,（2）If everything is considered, his plan seems to be more workable. When this was done, we went home. Given good luck, I will earn more money than all of you. （3）Because there was nothing to do, we played games.,Everything taken into consideration, his plan seems to be more workable. （逻辑主语+过去分词）,This done, we went home.,Good luck given, I will earn more money than all of you.,There being nothing to do, we played games.(being 不可省略),五、句与句之间的转换 1. 简单句与复合句的转换 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. 2. 一般句式与强调句的转换 I graduated from the university last summer.,The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.,It was last summer that I graduated from the university.,3. 条件句与祈使句的转换 If you go through the gate, you will find the entrance to Bear Country. 4. 宾语从句与状语从句的转换 I wont believe what he says.,Go through the gate, and you will find the entrance to Bear Country.,No matter what he says, I wont believe him.,六、“二态”之间的转换 1. 时态的转换 The bell is ringing now. 2. 主动语态变为被动语态 People suggested that the meeting be put off.,七、其他形式的转换 1. 正常语序与倒装语序的转换 Though Im weak I will make the effort. They will never give up the struggle for success,There goes the bell.,It is suggested that the meeting be put off.,Weak as I am, I will make the effort.,Never will they give up the struggle for success.,2. 陈述语气与虚拟语气的转换 The ship didnt sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.,But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk with all on board.,高考英语作文常用词语和句型 一开头用语： 良好的开端等于成功的一半在写作文时，通常以最简单也最常用的方式开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求，点出文章的中心思想。 议论文： A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient. C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,. D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. E. As is known to all, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life. F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view. 2. 书信： A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar. B. I read an advertisement in todays China Daily and I apply for the job. C. Thank you for your letter of May 5. D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9. E. How nice to hear from you again.,高考英语作文常用词语和句型 3. 演讲稿： A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject - A Balance Diet and Health. B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest. 二并列用语：as well as, not onlybut (also), including A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life. B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture. C. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication. 三对比用语：on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/ contrary to ., though, for one thing ; for another, nevertheless A. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much