大学英语四级写作指导.ppt

,2009年6月CET作文题目 四级作文题： Free Admission to museums 1. 越来越多的博物馆免 费对外开放的目的是什么？ 2. 也会带来一些问题； 3. 你的看法？,使用正式词汇来替代口语词汇,Sorry Thanks Glad Cause trouble Ask for help Easy Kind famous,Apologize for Be grateful for/appreciate Delighted Bring inconvenience Request assistance Convenient Generous, thoughtful prestigious,使用正式词汇来替代口语词汇,Most Use Result (成果) About Buy Stop Finish Get Wish person,The vast majority of Utilize/ put into practice Achievement As to, concerning Purchase Cease / terminate Complete / bring to an end Obtain / attain / acquire Intend to Individual,使用高级词汇来替代低级词汇,I think that Many people think that Good Bad More and more Helpful Be interested in Attract sb. Cause Be against,Be convinced that It is widely shared that Favorable/promising/ superior Negative/ unfavorable Increasing/ growing Beneficial/ rewarding Appeal to sb Capture ones heart Lead to / result in/ trigger Frown on sth,使用高级词汇来替代低级词汇,Limit Build Big Force sb. to do Sth. is popular Common Finally But Difficult Like sth. very much,Restrict / confine Erect / construct Massive / tremendous Compel sb. to do have universal appeal Universal Eventually / ultimately Nevertheless Challenging Be enthusiastic about/ be keen on/ be fond of,使用高级词汇来替代低级词汇,Nowadays Only Boring Damage Remember that Want Because of So 如此、太 So 因此、所以,Currently Unique adj. / merely adv. Tedious Ruin / devastate bear in mind that Desire Owing to/ due to/ thanks to Extremely / fairly Consequently / accordingly,制造长句,名词前后加上修饰语 adj./介词短语/同位语/ 定语从句 动词前后加上状语 时间/地点/方式状语/目的状语 The government needs to build more roads. A _ government, which _ will build more roads that _. Governments _ need to build more roads in order to _ and _.,加长后的句子,A responsible government, which cares about its people, will build more roads that connect the outlying rural areas, especially those comparatively poor areas. Governments at all levels need to build more roads in order to boom its economy and improve peoples living standard.,句式变化之二,插入句分词短语 Parents should not turn a blind eye to the side-effect of playing computer games on children. 插入句不定式 The direct course of drug abuse is ignorance and curiosity.,句式变化之二,插入句分词短语 Parents, strictly speaking, should not turn a blind eye to the side-effect of playing computer games on children. 插入句不定式 The direct course of drug abuse, to tell the truth, is ignorance and curiosity.,句式变化之二,强调句 It is + 被强调的部分 + that + 其余成分 Two out of the twenty applicants said that their personal information had been leaked out.,句式变化之二,并列修辞 I came, I saw, I conquered. Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. A government of the people, for the people, and by the people,句式变化之二,双重否定 Nothing is impossible. We will never fail to complete the job. Chinese people will never fail to make more achievement in space technology.,句式变化之练习,There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films. 变化后： Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.,句式变化之练习,2. There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages. 变化后： Housing shortage become _.,句式变化之练习,3. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference. 变化后： Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.,句式变化之练习,4. If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result. 变化后：,句式变化之练习,5. In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step. 变化后： An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.,句式变化之练习,6. In order to build a stable and prosperous nation people should make new efforts. 变化后：,句式变化之练习,7. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV. 变化后： People in increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.,句式变化之练习,8. More and more people who become richer and richer can afford a car. 变化后：,句式变化之练习,9. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years. 变化后： Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.,句式变化之练习,10. More and more trees have disappeared in the city. 变化后：,用于文章开段落的语句,When asked about ,/ When it comes to/ Faced with., most people believe that but other people regardas /consider it differently. When it comes to, peoples opinions differ. Some hold the opinion that, while others claim that There is no consensus of opinions among people as to Some people claim that, while others believe that. There is a general discussion today as to the issue/ problem of Those who criticize argue that They believe that. However, people who advocate , on the other hand, argue that,起、承、转、合,Generally speaking, It goes without saying that There is no denying that （总起）,In the first place, To begin with, First, （分起）,However, Nevertheless, On the other hand, Still (转),Also, In addition, Moreover, / Furthermore, Meanwhile, / Similarly （承）,Accordingly Consequently, / As a result Eventually, / Above all In summary, To sum up,/ In short, / In conclusion, Therefore, / Thus, As I have said/ discussed above, As has been noted (如前所述) （合）,起、承、转、合,2009年6月CET作文题目 四级作文题： Free Admission to museums 1. 越来越多的博物馆免 费对外开放的目的是什么？ 2. 也会带来一些问题； 3. 你的看法？,框架写作练习,At present, _ (越来越多的博物馆实行免费参观) in order to _ and _. Unfortunately