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考研英语写作常见语言错误I.词汇错误A. Article 冠词a. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.b. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.a. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.b. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and people.a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.a. We cant avoid being beaten by the others.b. We cant avoid being beaten by others.a. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator.b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wild animals, with an explanation by the narrator.a. And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.b. And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.a. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.b. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.a. Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.B. Nouns 名词可数名词&不可数名词a. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.a. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantage and disadvantage.b. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages.a. As long as we dont give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, well certainly make our marks in the end.b. As long as we dont give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, well certainly make our mark in the end.a. With money we can travel widely and have more experience.b. With money we can travel widely and have more experiences.a. The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.b. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.a. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes many damages.b. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage.a. Even a lot of entertainments such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.用词不当a. For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it (tape recorder) instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.b. For example, a reporter can use it in interviews instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.a. With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the land on which man can grow rice remains the same.b. With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the amount of land on which man can grow food crops remains the same.a. It can lessen the crowding degree of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.b. b. It can lessen the crowdedness of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.a. In the meantime, the grain requirement in peoples diet consequently kept dropping.b. In the meantime, the grain consumption in peoples diet consequently kept dropping.a. With the development of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before.b. With the improvement of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before.a. They will push our society to a higher position.b. They will push our society to a higher level of development.a. Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview.b. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews.a. In contrast, still a few of civilians expect the government to call off this regulation.b. However, there are still a few citizens who expect the government to call off this ban.a. You should practice under the direction of a teacher.b. You should be trained under the direction of an instructor.名词的并列&一致a. This directly causes the problem of the worlds food shortage, housing and lack of jobs.b. This directly causes the problem of the worlds food shortage, housing shortage and lack of jobs.a. From the figures, we can see easily that the proportions of grain, fruit and vegetables have declined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen.b. From the figures, we can see easily that the proportion of grain, fruit and vegetables has declined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen.C. Adjectives 形容词比较级和最高级a. And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work.b. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work.a. I try my best to read more English articles to speed up my reading, because I believe the more I read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension.b. I try my best to read as many English articles as possible to speed up my reading, because I believe the more I read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension.a. In modern society, the relationship between natural science and social science has become more and more close.b. In modern society, the relationship between natural science and social science has become closer and closer.用词不当/错误a. On the way home, I thought early morning walk was really helpful.b. On the way home, I thought early morning walk was really good and healthful.a. In my opinion, the right solution to the problem is the combination of the two, that is, to lay down more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus lines in downtown areas.b. In my opinion, a better solution to the problem is the combination of the two, that is, to lay down more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus lines in downtown areas.a. With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities has become more and more serious than before.b. With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities has become heavier and heavier than before.a. Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water.b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.a. Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do unevaluated harm to the society.b. Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to the society.形容词词序a. This is no longer a childish unrealistic dream.b. This is no longer an unrealistic childish dream.a. This picture describes an American girl dressed in Chinese traditional costume.b. This picture describes an American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume.D. Adverbs 副词用词不当a. An early morning walk can help one to be light-hearted and to work effectively.b. An early morning walk can help one to be light-hearted and to work efficiently.a. In fact, fresh water is exactly inadequate.b. In fact, our fresh water supply is far from adequate.a. We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will slowly master it and do it perfectly.b. We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will gradually master it and do it perfectly.副词短语a. The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a bit to the growth of population.b. The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a lot to the growth of population.E. Pronouns 代词用法不当a. Everyday I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.b. Each day I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.a. In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products functions in the advertisements. That is, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.b. In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products functions in the advertisements. Very often, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.a. To our Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.b. To us Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.指代不明a. For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries. It causes environmental problems.b. For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries which in turn will causes environmental problems.a. We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt others or be hurt.b. We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt myself or others.a. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.b. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them of poor quality and worth nothing.人称代词一致a. First, we cant deny that money is useful. You need money to buy food, to buy a house or to pay for your educational cost.b. First, we cant deny that money is useful. We need money to buy food, to buy a house or to pay for our educational cost.F. Prepositions 介词介词错误a. What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the peoples life is improving and the changes of peoples diet show that peoples interest is on the quality of food now and that our peoples health improving day by day.b. What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the peoples life is improving and the changes in peoples diet show that peoples interest is in the quality of food now and that our peoples health improving day by day.a. I have bought a tape recorder with which I can practise my ability of listening comprehension.b. I bought a tape recorder with which I was able to improve my ability in listening comprehension.a. Advertisements exist everywhere, on the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets and even in the postboxes of our houses.b. Advertisements exist everywhere, in the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets and even in the postboxes of our houses.a. People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in face of a great, speculative prosperity ahead.b. People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in anticipation of a great, speculative prosperity ahead.G. Verbs 动词一般动词用词不当a. If not controlled, the population of the world will amount to 7,000 million in 2000 as can be seen from the graph.b. If not controlled, the population of the world will reach 7,000 million in 2000 as can be seen from the graph.a. They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a good climate and weaken noise.b. They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a healthy climate and reduce noise.a. A road which can only hold two cars side by side can allow more than ten bicycles.b. A road which can only allow two cars to pass may allow more than ten bicycles to run side by side.a. While taking part in sports, people can strengthen their muscles, quicken their speed of response and increase their ability of resisting diseases.b. Being active in sports, people can strengthen their muscles, increase their response speed and build up their ability to resist diseases.a. Social science and natural science are mixed with each other today.b. Social science and natural science are inseparable from each other today.a. Being a teacher needs knowledge, patience, skills, etc.b. Being a teacher requires knowledge, patience, skills, etc.a. In conclusion, most students still dont know how to spare the time and make it valuable.b. In conclusion, most students still dont know how to use the two-day weekend to their best advantage.a. Whether you will apply English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been the most important language in our society.b. Whether you will use English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been one of the most important languages in our society.a. It will help me to know the world outside the campus better.b. It will help me to experience the world outside the campus better.一致性，平行a. It not only relieves the burden on the big city, but also provide a much better environment for people to live in.b. It not only relieves the burden on the big city, but also provides a much better environment for people to live in.a. Due to the pollution, we will have no pure water, fresh air which are necessary to our lives.b. Due to the pollution, we will have no pure water and fresh air which are necessary to our lives.a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly.Phrasal Verbs 短语动词a. And new ways can be carried out to prevent the pollution and control the population.b. And new ways can be worked out to prevent the pollution and control the population.a. When a motorcycle is started, it gives away a lot of smoke which contains poisonous chemical substances harmful to our health.b. When a motorcycle is started, it gives off a lot of smoke which contains poisonous chemical substances harmful to our health.a. In fact, no one can be denied of the access to opportunity.b. In fact, no one can be denied access to opportunity.a. To grasp a foreign language is not easy, but I will go out of my way to gain successfor my ideal job.b. To master a foreign language is not easy and to be a qualified interpreter is even harder, but I will go all out to gain successin my ideal job.a. Taking into account of their behavior, we can safely come to the conclusion that these students will waste too much time if they dont make good use of it.b. Taking into account their behavior, we think it is clear that these students will waste too much time if they dont study hard on working days.助动词，情态动词a. To master almost every skill, you cant but practice.b. To master almost every skill, you must practice.a. We cannot strain our efforts and ignore the rules.b. We mustnt strain our efforts and ignore the rules.a. Do “lucky numbers” really bring good luck?b. Can “lucky numbers” bring good luck to us?H. Connectives 连接词用词不当/用法不当a. The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly, everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.b. The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.a. When I walked in the street, there were only some young men who were running in the street.b. While I was walking, I found that there were only some young men running in the street.a. Because a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.b. Since a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.a. So long as I am concerned, I am for the latter.b. As far as I am concerned, I am for the latter.a. And I should get practical experience as much as theories.b. And I should get practical experience while learning the theories.a. No matter they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them to practice their ability of introducing themselves to others.b. No matter whether they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them to practice their ability of packaging and selling themselves.a. In my opinion, although setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.b. In my opinion, setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.a. The first, we have more spare time. . The second, we have enough time to do something which we like.b. First, we have more spare time. . Second, we have enough time to do something we like.a. So far as I am concerned, I managed to find a part-time jobtutor an orphan.b. As for me, I managed to find a part-time jobtutor an orphan.过于绝对化a. For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.b. For example, many people had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.a. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, by ship, or by bicycle.b. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, or by ship.a. In return, I can also learn a lot from foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland.b. In return, I can also learn a lot about foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland better.a. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.b. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them of poor quality and worth nothing.a. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of all people!b. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for